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2009/11/04 19:09:02
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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I have recently started a webcomic about the 40k universe, centered on the TTau race (yup, ttau, not tau) 
i´d like to receive some reviews, maybe some ideas, jokes, oppinions (please, dont be mean) to improve it. For now there is only a "characters" section besides the webcomic itself, but i hope i will be filling it as soon as i finish the introduction of the main characters ^^
(also, i hope this fits in this thread) 
http://eatatau.thewebcomic.com/
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2009/11/04 19:31:35
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Nasty Nob on Warbike with Klaw
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I don't get it. Sort of like a Xenos Archie.
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2009/11/04 19:51:27
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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Awww! Is my english so deficient? 
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2009/11/04 19:59:36
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Avatar of the Bloody-Handed God
Inside your mind, corrupting the pathways
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The images are pretty good, but the text is quite hard to follow :(
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2009/11/04 20:00:46
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Pauper with Promise
Los Angeles
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Xenos Archie is actually pretty funny.
Like the art.. maybe the humor is not ready for us americans!
but i do see where you are trying to go with it.
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2009/11/04 20:17:06
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Stalwart Tribune
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What is Xenos Archive please?
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2009/11/04 20:53:03
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Guarding Guardian
In mah workshop, paintin' mah Eldar
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Nice job! Actually made me laugh as well!
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2009/11/05 14:41:51
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Stalwart Veteran Guard Sergeant
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I just love it!! keep the work up
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 Everyone has a choice. Me, I choos not to make a choice |
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2009/11/05 15:32:50
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Storm Trooper with Maglight
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I love it! Keep up the good work!
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2009/11/05 15:44:52
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Deranged Necron Destroyer
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It's good dood, but the colours are reeeeeeally dark, made it quite hard to follow what was going on. Liked the JJ comic thouigh, made me titter!
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2009/11/05 16:05:05
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Lone Wolf Sentinel Pilot
Sitting on the roof of my house with a shotgun, and a six pack of beers
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I liked it alot.
Sorry don't know a lot about the Tau so can't really help on the idea's front.
"Archie" is an american comic, i'd take it as a compliment.
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PM me and ask me about Warpath Wargames Norwich or send me an email
"If we hit that bullseye, the rest of the dominoes should fall like a house of cards. Checkmate!" Zapp Brannigan
 33rd Jalvene Outlanders & 112th Task Force 6600 Points (last count)
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2009/11/05 16:06:57
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Fixture of Dakka
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IronChaos wrote:What is Xenos Archive please?
Xenos = Alien
He actually said "Archie" not "Archive". Archie was/is an old American comic about high-school kids in the 1950s.
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Six mistakes mankind keeps making century after century: Believing that personal gain is made by crushing others; Worrying about things that cannot be changed or corrected; Insisting that a thing is impossible because we cannot accomplish it; Refusing to set aside trivial preferences; Neglecting development and refinement of the mind; Attempting to compel others to believe and live as we do |
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2009/11/06 19:38:02
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Hardened Veteran Guardsman
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i dont get it...
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2009/11/06 23:47:13
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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which one? 
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2009/11/11 01:34:42
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Unrelenting Rubric Terminator of Tzeentch
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BENESTEALERS!
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DR:90S+G++MB+I+Pw40k07++D++A++/eWD-R+++T(Ot)DM+
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2009/11/11 04:49:31
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Frightening Flamer of Tzeentch
in Canada
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pretty funny dude
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2009/11/11 13:39:03
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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ey thanks ^^
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2009/11/11 19:18:04
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Excellent Exalted Champion of Chaos
Grim Forgotten Nihilist Forest.
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The Kroot makes me laugh.
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I've sold so many armies. :(
Aeldari 3kpts 
Slaves to Darkness.3k  
Word Bearers 2500k  
Daemons of Chaos  
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2009/11/14 00:28:39
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Monstrously Massive Big Mutant
An unknown location in the Warp
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I loled
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2009/11/22 04:45:37
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Grovelin' Grot Rigger
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Das ist gut! but seriously nice job.
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http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/266551.page<My IG regiment story WIP
"Boanabardlement is the mindkiller. Boanabardlement is the little death that brings total oblivion. I will face my Boanabardlement. I will permit it to wash over me and through me and when it is gone I will turn the little eye to see it's path.When the Boanabardlement is gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain." > |
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2009/11/22 11:44:38
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Potent Possessed Daemonvessel
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RustyKnight wrote:BENESTEALERS!
ALMIGHTY EMPEROR PROTECT US!
Dude, that's some funny stuff IMHO  .
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2009/11/24 08:25:52
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Krazed Killa Kan
Minnesota, land of 10,000 Lakes and 10,000,000,000 Mosquitos
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Ha! Love Kor'la already. Do you want to meet the Greater Wood? Love how quick he's able to jump back up, look really suave, and say that stupid line again.
Keep up the good work! I don't look too hard, but I've only ever seen two other 40k comics out there (Gone to Ground and Turn Signals on a Land Raider) and neither of them are about my personal favorite race, the Tau. (Sorry...the TTau)
Oh, and how often do you update it? Are you on a set schedule yet, or is it more of a "when I have time, when I feel like it" type of thing?
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2009/11/24 08:26:47
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2009/11/24 09:34:34
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter
Australia (Recently ravaged by the Hive Fleet Ginger Overlord)
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I thought they were good. Keep it up.
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After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.
"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers" 
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2009/11/24 13:58:24
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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thank, Faithfull, i will ^^
Locclo, its uploaded on wednesdays. im glad you liked it. I do read too GtG and TSOALR, sadly this last one finished because of GW copyright polithics.
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2009/11/26 12:27:37
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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this is a present for the dakka dakka comunity ^^
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2009/11/26 12:53:24
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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[MOD]
Anti-piracy Officer
Somewhere in south-central England.
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I liked it and I've added it to my regular watch list.
Your English isn't perfect but it's good enough. As a not Spanish speaker I am lucky to be able to read the comic in English.
Criticisms
The artwork does seem quite dark. also the layout panels are very regular. In combination, it does not help my eye to flow easily down the page. You should try the use of irregular panels and SFX to help lead the eye through the correct sequence of the story.
Maybe you should put some small difference in the armour of each characters.
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2009/11/26 12:57:01
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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thats the kind of comments i like
how would you do the differences in the armours? maybe some tokens or symbols? trophies?
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2009/11/26 16:25:39
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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[MOD]
Anti-piracy Officer
Somewhere in south-central England.
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How about different colour tabs on the shoulder plates?
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2009/11/27 00:04:42
Subject: Re:40k Webcomic
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Regular Dakkanaut
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those change by the military rank, i was thinking in some kind of personal stuff...
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2009/11/27 06:12:23
Subject: 40k Webcomic
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Gore-Soaked Lunatic Witchhunter
Australia (Recently ravaged by the Hive Fleet Ginger Overlord)
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Just read your latest comic, and found it very funny!
(Though I was a bit worried about the language, the others didn't say as much)
Anyway...*slaute*
"For the Greater Wood!"
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Smacks wrote:
After the game, pack up all your miniatures, then slap the guy next to you on the ass and say.
"Good game guys, now lets hit the showers"
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-1500pts
Kal'reia Sept Tau - Farsight Sympathizers 
Da Great Looted Waaagh!