My Ork Waaagh fluff

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**KhornePysker**

This is my fluff for my Ork Waaaaaaagh!

Ork Waaaaaaaagh stompagit is lead by warboss gitstompa

The waagh is a massive waagh with countless number of victories. They destroyed 40 Imperial Guard regiments including those of the DKOK and Elysian Drop troops, 20 Space Marine Chapters, 3 companies of Space Wolves, eliminated 4 Black Templar Crusades, an entire Tyranid Hive fleet, splinter, 15 sisters of battle orders, 7 Eldar Craft worlds, conquered 59 Imperial Worlds including 12 Forge worlds and 34 Chaos warbands. All of the skulls of the foes are now used to decorate the looted wagons of the mek boyz and the Eldar soul stones are now used as shiny thingz to decorate the wheels of the wagons as well.

I'll add more to the fluff later, but how is the fluff now?

**bombboy1252**

This doesn't belong in Background.

As for the current fluff, 40 regiments of IG?!? 20 SM chapters?!? an ENTIRE hive fleet?!?

That seems like a bit of overkill. All you did is tell us what they did, we don't know anything about how they fight, (speed freeks, ork boyz horde, lots of dakka...ect) You didn't tell us anything about the Warboss. I think you need to flesh it out a bit more instead of making an absurd list of accomplishments.

I'm not trying to be harsh or anything as I love reading about peoples Waaaghs, but I think you need to actually post some fluff

**JohnnoM**

uh, this sounds like a waagh! That could boss anything. In my opinion WAY to OP. I mean, 20 SM chapters? Space Wolf compaines? And Hive fleet too?

**LoneLictor**

This fluff is ridiculously OP and from your previous posts you seem like a troll.

**Blacksails**

Obvious troll is obvious.

**KhornePysker**

My warboss like Ghazgkull recieved the blessing of Gork and Mork

his army consists of mainly lootas and nobs(in my special rules for him he can take lootas and nobs as troops for only 10 points each)

also he has received the blessing of Khaine and he can instant death any unit; even if they have eternal warrior as he destroyed a c'tan shard with only his power klaw
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in addition, he has over 100 looted baneblades, the baneblades that didn't arrive to Kaurava ended up in his possession, he used captured tech priests and made them fix the baneblades and after that he killed the techpriest and shrunk their heads and glued them to the baneblade hull and turned their skulls into cups

also his weirdboyz has a special power to capture the souls of those they killed and put them into the armor of the warboss and the looted baneblades so that the soul has to feel the pain the the warboss and the vehicles feel

he has captured the souls the entire space wolf company he has killed and the many space marine chapters as well as over 4 craft worlds

**The Mad Tanker**

Way too OP, armies are defined as much by their success as their failures. Flaws produce weakness, weakness produces drama, drama produces good stories!

**LoneLictor**

He's trolling, you know.

**KhornePysker**

Warboss Gitstompa has lost many battles and lost well over 3 million boys in his conquest; the only reason he himself has survived this far is because he hides behind his killa kans for protection;

**TheRobotLol**

The only reason he survives is cause your a trollin troll who is GOD AWEFUL at fluff.

**Mannahnin**

There is no need to be angry at someone over their fluff. They can write whatever you like. If you don't like it, you can express criticism politely, or just ignore it.

**TheRobotLol**

Whoa, a MOD got red text'd

Once in a million blue moons...

**purplefood**

TheRobotLol wrote:Whoa, a MOD got red text'd

Once in a million blue moons...

Nah, that's Mannie's MODQuisition text.
Some of the MODQuisition like to show when they have their MOD pants on and when they don't through the use of coloured text or pictures involving japanese girls...
Not saying any names...

OT: This does look like a trol ut in the interests of giving people a chance here is some criticism:

This is far too over the top.
Tone it back a lot.

**Trondheim**

Oh my, another "brilliant" pice of fluff. It must be the moon that makes these things crawl onto the web

**TheRobotLol**

Trondheim wrote:Oh my, another "brilliant" pice of fluff. It must be the moon that makes these things crawl onto the web

MWAHAHAHAHA

**WARHAMMER40KWARGAMES**

Over the top to be honest you could not destroy 20 space marine chapters no ork waagh could beat 20,000 geneticly enhanced super human warriors.

**TheRobotLol**

WARHAMMER40KWARGAMES wrote:Over the top to be honest you could not destroy 20 space marine chapters no ork waagh could beat 20,000 geneticly enhanced super human warriors.

VERY true. And the craftworlds?

BWAHAHAHA, lies.

**KhornePysker**

TheRobotLol wrote:The only reason he survives is cause your a trollin troll who is GOD AWEFUL at fluff.

like I said before; I am not a troll; trolls are units in warhammer fantasy and I don't larp like

anyways, I will tone it down to 16 space marine chapters, and 2 and a half space wolf companies as well as 31 IMperial Guard regiments

**purplefood**

KhornePysker wrote:
TheRobotLol wrote:The only reason he survives is cause your a trollin troll who is GOD AWEFUL at fluff.

like I said before; I am not a troll; trolls are units in warhammer fantasy and I don't larp like

anyways, I will tone it down to 16 space marine chapters, and 2 and a half space wolf companies as well as 31 IMperial Guard regiments

Needs to be toned down further.
Either you lack a basic understanding of the 40k universe or you lack a good sense of how to write a believable 'character'.
Character in this sense refers to the chapter and not an individual...

Or you're just trollin'...

**Beaviz81**

Just leave it alone and stop commenting. Seriously, I don't even wanna start commenting as I have nothing positive to say, and I follow the ancient adage of: "If you have nothing positive to say, then say nothing at all."

**purplefood**

Beaviz81 wrote:Just leave it alone and stop commenting. Seriously, I don't even wanna start commenting as I have nothing positive to say, and I follow the ancient adage of: "If you have nothing positive to say, then say nothing at all."

Constructive criticism is useful...

**Beaviz81**

Okay, 40 IG regiments maybe, if they ain't very big, 20 Space Marine Chapter, yah right, are you aware of how difficult only one Space Marine Chapter is to destroy? One at most. Drop the Space Wolves. Tyranid Hive Fleet, so half the orks are Genestealers now right? 15 Orders of the SOB? WTF? Maybe one or two at most. 7 Eldar Craftworlds? One maybe, I'd rather go for zero. 59 Imperial worlds, maybe if they were all just feral or worthless. 12 Forge Worlds? A single Forge World is more difficult to take than to wipe out three Space Marine Chapters, and 34 Chaos Warbands? Sounds like the cannon-fodder the Bearers use.

**tough n' orky**

I would cut out pretty much all of those
My fluff has done practically nothing memorable, as i am basing it off my games......

**KhornePysker**

Heres some edits:

the waagh has destroyed 10 Imperial Guard regiments, 3 space marine chapters, a craftworld and 9 chaos warbands

also 3 sisters of battle orders

**purplefood**

Still a bit unhappy with it to be fair...
I'd change it to:
5 Imperial Guard regiments, 3 Space Marine Companies an Eldar strike force and 4 Chaos Warbands...

**blood reaper**

How 'bout 1 chapter. and 1 or 2 of the rest? Cause right now it's still ridculous.

**moom241**

My Imperial Guard army is actually filled with immortal psykers, who could each kill every chaos god. Or not, it's your fluff, say what you want.

**purplefood**

moom241 wrote:My Imperial Guard army is actually filled with immortal psykers, who could each kill every chaos god. Or not, it's your fluff, say what you want.

It's assumed that if you are posting something in this Section then you are asking for some kind of Criticism...
Otherwise why bother?

**kshaw2000**

See more fluff first, then try to get an idea of what to write.
not saying my hive fleet typhoon (previously hive fleet briares ang armageddon) is perfect, but it is not extremely OP.

new users arent perfect (nor am I!) but dont judge them by their mistakes.

**Kepora**

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