Thoughts:
Intro was a bit long, 30 seconds before we get to the model in question.
The tutorial in question is one of the best I've ever seen, highly recommended for any newbies:
- you timelapsed the painting so it isn't ridiculously tedious, but so we can see the whole model done and not just 'waves' at a time.
- Clear voice (although I'm aussie too so it's something I'm familiar with)
- You actually SHOWED the thinning, something not often done
- Lighting, maybe a bit brighter, camera angles are good
The only thing I can think of is the painting isn't as good as some I've seen, but you're only 15 and that will get better over time regardless.
Also, you could explain why some techniques are used (although that turns it more from a possible IFIST scheme towards a newbie painting tutorial), like saying why you start off with the wash instead of washing later. But that's just extreme nitpicky for an otherwise great tutorial.
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