Looks fairly solid.
I am of the opinion that sternguard don't need plasma when they have vengeance rounds, and against 2+ armor melta will do in a pinch. Flamers are also a bit meh when you have ignore cover bolter rounds, so consider giving both squads 4 meltas as sternguard ammo can do everything but threaten Av11+.
Speaking of flamers, you should probably take them on those land speeder storms. The LSS is not exactly good at shooting the HB, and having flamers is a good thing, particularly on something so fast carrying a dakka based unit. If you simply plan to have these come on from your board edge then the flamer is meh, but you lose little by outflanking as you should be able to reach some objective with your speed regardless of the side you come on. Even with outflank, you have a 2/3 shot to get the side you want, instead of being stuck with your board egde. I know you have IF chapter tactics, but even with the re rolls I would go with the heavy flamer so you have mobile template weapons.
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