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2014/11/06 12:09:28
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Junior Officer with Laspistol
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I'll drink to that Boss. It's hard to get detail into an action scene and keep it fast. But you ain't seen nothing 'til you see a magic floating rock start talking smack to a Loli god.
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Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. |
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2014/11/06 14:48:01
Subject: Re:Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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I swear, color your hair blond and you'd be able to pull off one heck of a "Mr. Incredible" cosplay. Looking damn good, congrats on completing that goal as well
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"Fear is freedom! Subjugation is liberation! Contradiction is truth! These are the truths of this world! Surrender to these truths, you pigs in human clothing!" - Satsuki Kiryuin, Kill la Kill |
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2014/11/06 15:38:07
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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liquidjoshi wrote:I'll drink to that Boss. It's hard to get detail into an action scene and keep it fast. But you ain't seen nothing 'til you see a magic floating rock start talking smack to a Loli god.
See, that sounds like an anime. When you write for an anime, manga, or other visual media, the hard work is done for you. You've already got the image right there so you don't need to do much to set the scene. When writing fiction without any pictures to go with it, you have to create pictures in people's minds with just your words, so finding the right ones to get the job done can be exhausting. Automatically Appended Next Post: Excerpt from Chapter 15: Garters and Salvation:
Madame Bovina’s Discount Bordello was the type of place where they’d never heard ‘less is more.’ The exterior of the building sported baroque decor and all manner of tasteless gilded statuary that had, on more than one occasion, been cited by the city zoning commission as an eyesore operating outside of a designated eyesore zone. The zoning issues were hardly the management’s fault. The place had been an old plantation house in the countryside by the mines from which the city of Mirth originally sprouted, until the urban sprawl caught up and swallowed it. Now the quaint old house was crowded on all sides by ugly tenements and, like the middle child seeking its parents’ attention, had to act out in outlandish ways to retain its identity. No surface could be wasted on such banal pursuits as good taste, and so even the glass doors featured mage-scribed engravings depicting all manner of unmentionable activities involving mayonnaise and a rake. Once inside through the double glass doors with their etched lechery, the perfumed air assaulted the senses with its unique mix of fine spices, essential oils, mildew from the leaky roof, and exotic body odor from a dozen different races of clients and professionals. The carpets may have been luxurious once upon a time, though now like the furniture and the staff they were well traveled and world-weary. A grand staircase, where a couple of ladies practiced a provocative form of lounging, led to the upper floors where the professionals plied their trade in rather depressing private rooms. On the bright side, the place never closed and they had a fabulous student discount program.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2014/11/06 20:07:48
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2014/11/06 22:23:38
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Proud Triarch Praetorian
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I'm liking this more and more haha
You should come up with a preorder function
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Experience is something you get just after you need it
The Narkos Dynasty - 15k
Iron Hands - 12k
The Shadewatch - 3k
Cadmus Outriders - 4k
Alpha Legion Raiders - 3k |
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2014/11/07 01:40:11
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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IHateNids wrote:I'm liking this more and more haha
You should come up with a preorder function
I wish. I could do some kind of GoFundMe thing or something like that. But if I accept any kind of money ahead of time that might constitute sales, legally speaking, and I have no idea how that would affect my ability to publish through a traditional publishing house. I'm determined to get published the old-fashioned way. A lot of people self-publish nowadays with mixed results, but I've seen a lot of members of my family go that route in order to put out truly god-awful piles of crap that didn't deserve to be published at all. When this is finished, it will be a labor of love that I will send out to be brutally hacked apart by merciless predators, and hopefully through all that it will get a respectable name behind it and nice cover art and everything.
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2014/11/07 02:15:57
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Executing Exarch
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ferarless....i did enjoy your excerpt of your story it was quite amusing...jeez dude do you even lift bro good on ya for keeping your time busy well if you feel the need to give any more snippets of your story do post them. i do enjoy your writings immensely
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2014/11/08 18:22:13
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Built the chest piece of Wing Zero. That little thing is about 20 parts and took me about an hour. Of course, a large part of that was spent finding out that the instructions and sprues were labeled differently.
Also wrote another chapter involving chefromancy and the forbidden truths whispered by Merrick's lasagna.
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2014/11/08 19:16:36
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Junior Officer with Laspistol
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Yeah, I'm sat here thinking about my sci-fi setting and then you're there with chefromancy. I'm just like "Damn son." That's awesome. I mean, I'll give you real comments when I'm not buried in essays, but what I've read so far from what you've put up has been great. Easily better than some of the stuff I've had to read for uni
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Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. |
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2014/11/08 20:28:11
Subject: Re:Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Liquidjoshi, if you're having trouble with your setting shoot me a PM. I tend to be pretty good with world building and character creation. Finding something for those characters to run around doing, though, that's my downfall. Oh, and major spoiler alert (if this ends up getting turned into a series and gets that far), this is really just science fiction masquerading as fantasy.
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2014/11/08 22:36:01
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Junior Officer with Laspistol
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Oh I'm all good for that, don't get me wrong, but damn dude. Your stuff is on a whole other level.
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Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. |
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2014/11/08 22:39:44
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Liche Priest Hierophant
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That's the best kind of Fantasy, though!
Beware (or embrace, your choice) the Dragonriders Syndrome, where your Fantasy story is slowly encroached upon by Science Fiction.
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GENERATION 8: The first time you see this, copy and paste it into your sig and add 1 to the number after generation. Consider it a social experiment.
If yer an Ork, why dont ya WAAAGH!!
M.A.V.- if you liked ChromeHounds, drop by the site and give it a go. Or check out my M.A.V. Oneshots videos on YouTube! |
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2014/11/08 23:26:52
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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My series (fingers crossed) focuses on two main principles:
Any sufficiently advanced science is indistinguishable from magic--Arthur C Clarke
Any sufficiently analyzed magic is indistinguishable from science--Agatha Heterodyne
Magic is a subject pursued by scientific minds, an evolving field of study that continually advances with each generation to better serve the needs of the various races of the world. Except trolls. feth those guys. Automatically Appended Next Post: Oh, and just think! If one day my writing career blows up, people will sometimes whisper of a depraved warhammer 40k fanfic I wrote in obscurity, and GW will be forced to make it canon to satisfy my slavering fan base. Automatically Appended Next Post: Actually, and it's times like these that I love the automatically appended sequential posts since I never have to click the edit button, if I blow up real good then I swear by the seventeen screaming hells that I will write at least one good book for Black Library. Automatically Appended Next Post: feth you I'm a manatee. Okay maybe I'm not a manatee. I'm just really fething high from working out way too much and I wanted to post something somewhere because I'm hyper and I feel like it. My latest chapter involves compulsive masturbation and vampire piss. These are actual things I write about. If you need me I'll just be cackling like an idiot in my corner over here.
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This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2014/11/09 01:24:51
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2014/11/09 18:50:28
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Liche Priest Hierophant
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C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!
Are you like Mr. Universe Arnold Schwarzenegger? Is pumping iron better than sex for you?
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GENERATION 8: The first time you see this, copy and paste it into your sig and add 1 to the number after generation. Consider it a social experiment.
If yer an Ork, why dont ya WAAAGH!!
M.A.V.- if you liked ChromeHounds, drop by the site and give it a go. Or check out my M.A.V. Oneshots videos on YouTube! |
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2014/11/09 19:54:40
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Anvildude wrote:C-C-C-COMBO BREAKER!
Are you like Mr. Universe Arnold Schwarzenegger? Is pumping iron better than sex for you?
You know, I'd let you know if I could just find some sex to have out here. No women, yo! So I just pump constantly and wait for those glorious vacations to Thailand or Bahrain where girls literally throw themselves at you from all sides. I actually thought I had gotten a really great girlfriend in this country last month, met her online and we started getting really involved. But just before I could finally get a day off to go up to Dahran and see her for the weekend, she flips out and dumps me. The hits just keep on coming lately. So that's another reason I'm working out so much lately, a good way to channel unmitigated hatred for the entire female gender until I cool off and start thinking rationally again.
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2014/11/10 00:08:13
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Preacher of the Emperor
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Geez, she preemptively dumped you? Without, like, actually meeting you? You really are rolling a lot of 1s lately, doesn't matter how good you are with luck like that.... You have my sympathy, we've all had runs like that.
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2014/11/10 01:55:54
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Yeah, pretty much exactly how it went down. It made no sense then, and it made no sense now. The only question is whether to post all those nudes she sent me online with her contact info attached. There's nothing quite like revenge porn.
Tonight's writings began a chapter dealing with teddy bears, zappy things and science, glorious science.
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2014/11/10 03:47:45
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Preacher of the Emperor
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She dumped you when things were getting serious and you were about to come up and see her in person after (only? Mostly?) interacting online? Sounds like an "oh gak this is getting too real too fast" moment. I.e. cold feet. Frustrating as feth -- I can tell you about this girl I knew before I met my wife who emailed me "yeah I'm still coming to stay with you for a week but I kinda have a boyfriend now, sorry" -- but an understandable reason to freak out.
Use in your art, man! Channel all that frustration and pent-up sexual energy into your characters, it's a proven recipe.
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2014/11/10 18:28:22
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Finished up that last chapter with a Rocky-esque montage of experimental potions and self-digesting mice. Yeah science, bitches!
Moving on to an arms race with an enforcer who uses flow charts, and false senses of security. Automatically Appended Next Post: Hey, I need help coming up with a pen name for the fantasy/adventure genre. Throw some ideas at me!
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2014/11/11 01:46:19
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Junior Officer with Laspistol
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*Insert Lord of the Rings, Narnia and DnD innuendos here*.
"Everything I make is gold!"
I'm honestly drawing a blank past that though :/
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Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. |
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2014/11/11 02:36:31
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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I know, right? It's hard to come up with a good pen name for yourself because it has to sort of fit the genre, and for me that would mean something like "Jake Action" with a middle name consisting entirely of exclamation points.
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2014/11/11 04:33:42
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Liche Priest Hierophant
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Go with Boss Fearless. It's catchy, interesting, and clearly a fake name.
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GENERATION 8: The first time you see this, copy and paste it into your sig and add 1 to the number after generation. Consider it a social experiment.
If yer an Ork, why dont ya WAAAGH!!
M.A.V.- if you liked ChromeHounds, drop by the site and give it a go. Or check out my M.A.V. Oneshots videos on YouTube! |
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2014/11/11 05:15:59
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Well a pen name is supposed to sound plausible. A good example is Jim Butcher, who is made of awesome and with whom I would totally just hang out all day being awesome and talking about wizards.
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2014/11/11 10:40:18
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Junior Officer with Laspistol
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[Insert first name] Boss? Or Fearless?
I know some people just make an anagram of their name and run with that.
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Pretre: OOOOHHHHH snap. That's like driving away from hitting a pedestrian.
Pacific:First person to Photoshop a GW store into the streets of Kabul wins the thread.
Selym: "Be true to thyself, play Chaos" - Jesus, Daemon Prince of Cegorach.
H.B.M.C: You can't lobotomise someone twice. |
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2014/11/11 14:19:32
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Preacher of the Emperor
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Hugo Boss? Wait, I think that's already taken...
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2014/11/11 18:55:48
Subject: Re:Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Fixture of Dakka
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Well damn, that would have been perfect if it wasn't for that one, tiny issue of previous usage....
How about something like Jake Fearless, that should scan well on the cover.
Self-digesting mice and enforcement flow-charts? You're talking my kind of language right there
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2014/11/11 19:00:14
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Liche Priest Hierophant
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I'm... Not entirely sure that "Jim Butcher" isn't his birth name. Butcher is actually a family name, you know, and James isn't that uncommon a first name.
For example, I had a friend in high school named Alex Savage.
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GENERATION 8: The first time you see this, copy and paste it into your sig and add 1 to the number after generation. Consider it a social experiment.
If yer an Ork, why dont ya WAAAGH!!
M.A.V.- if you liked ChromeHounds, drop by the site and give it a go. Or check out my M.A.V. Oneshots videos on YouTube! |
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2014/11/11 19:00:44
Subject: Re:Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Regular Dakkanaut
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For funding stuff you could take a look at Patreon. It's not reeeealy crowd funding, but like. Open source patronage for stuff people like and want to support.
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2014/11/12 01:38:21
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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I may turn to Patreon or something of the like after I'm published. Kind of like "Hey, here's proof I actually produce work, so you don't feel sketch about helping me make more."
[MOD EDIT - Maybe you'd be better off with a Personal Blog for some of this? - Alpharius]
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2014/11/12 02:28:59
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Rough Rider with Boomstick
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If you really wanted to some how incorporate Boss or Fearless into the name, you could translate one of those into another language for a last name. A few example from Google Translate: -Courageux (French) -Orädd (Swedish) -Intrepidus (Latin)
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2014/11/12 02:51:33
My blog! 1,500 Points II 1,500 Points II 125
Have a nice day. |
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2014/11/13 01:45:19
Subject: Dubstep Tau--Sometimes NSFW (Nov5) Gundams and Powerlifting
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Bane Lord Tartar Sauce
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Okay, so I pushed the envelope a tad too far in the last post, not so bad in my own opinion but the site rules are what count. So, yeah, I'll throttle that particular bit back a bit.
Tonight I mostly focused on writing a solid synopsis for the novel to be submitted along with initial chapters to agents. Way harder than I thought it would be, trying to condense 300 pages into 1 and have it still be a meaningful description.
After that was at a good place (read: terrible but complete) I put about 1000 words into a chapter involving the dangers of static discharge, really hungry vermin, and the horror of Fat Suzy.
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