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Made in ie
Pestilent Plague Marine with Blight Grenade





Cork, Ireland

 chazz huggins wrote:
 Sgt_Smudge wrote:
The endings seem fine to me - perhaps some more "neutral" ones? Such as Chaos beating back all Imperial forces, or even any of the factions managing to secure their own control, rather than "humans or bust". I feel there should probably be a larger variety of ways to win the system back, other than purely "choose who rules Crion and then fight the Blood Dragons", but not sure how to implement that?

Still, nice to see that the story was hinted at, and there are certainly leads to it. I think perhaps the Blood Dragons returning could have featured earlier, as their fleet returns in the second act somewhere, with no-one being able to recognize them as Blood Dragons?


Of course I would be more than happy to see the Crusade end in some other way those three endings were just the pre-made plans. They fit the generic mold but things always happened that I did not anticipate. Any player who wants to try ending things their own way is more than welcome to.

I think I bit off a lot more than I could chew with all the factions that were at play. Originally it was supposed to be players deal with ork threat, players end Crion rebellion and either a new governor takes the throne or Payne stays in power, and then lastly after all the resources were spent in the civil war the Blood Dragons show up and the final fight begins. I think we got too caught up with the Orks (Especially the Gargant) Then after that nobody beside Bob's Scions and Smudge's Tau ever really cared about who was in charge of Crion so they let the Civil war go on with out them and there was never a clear winner so now both forces are going into the final phase.

Essentially the crusade started off big so I had this big grandiose story planned but then it lost a lot of momentum and that story became a drag and the pace went to crawl. I am really sorry to everyone I can't help but feel this my fault.


I disagree there Chazz, I dont wanna blame anyone but the Gargant really shat the bed for this crusade. I dont blame Blackjack or any of the GM's, I think we collectively should have resolved the Gargant sooner, maybe we could have saved some momentum that way.

Only thing we can do now is learn from the past and prepare for the future, that being the ending for now.


EDIT: I have posted another piece and I have either 3 on the go or one big one, the end ain't here quite yet.

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2017/07/18 10:52:44


Sgt. Vanden I bet Irish can do that by flashing his bear chest.
Sgt. Vanden Irish is the definition of a Dutch oven
 
   
Made in ca
Rotting Sorcerer of Nurgle






The Dog-house

I should've made the scale smaller for the orks. Saying they had a full Stompa mob was too much. That was my bad.

H.B.M.C.- The end hath come! From now on armies will only consist of Astorath, Land Speeder Storms and Soul Grinders!
War Kitten- Vanden, you just taunted the Dank Lord Ezra. Prepare for seven years of fighting reality...
koooaei- Emperor: I envy your nipplehorns. <Magnus goes red. Permanently>
Neronoxx- If our Dreadnought doesn't have sick scuplted abs, we riot.
Frazzled- I don't generally call anyone by a term other than "sir" "maam" "youn g lady" "young man" or " HEY bag!"
Ruin- It's official, we've ran out of things to talk about on Dakka. Close the site. We're done.
mrhappyface- "They're more what you'd call guidlines than actual rules" - Captain Roboute Barbosa
Steve steveson- To be clear, I'd sell you all out for a bottle of scotch and a mid priced hooker.
 
   
Made in us
Ultramarine Master with Gauntlets of Macragge




What's left of Cadia

Real life has been running me over pretty hard lately. I'm so sorry

TheEyeOfNight- I swear, this thread is 70% smack talk, 20% RP organization, and 10% butt jokes
TheEyeOfNight- "Ordo Xenos reports that the Necrons have attained democracy, kamikaze tendencies, and nuclear fission. It's all tits up, sir."
Space Marine flyers are shaped for the greatest possible air resistance so that the air may never defeat the SPACE MARINES!
Sternguard though, those guys are all about kicking ass. They'd chew bubble gum as well, but bubble gum is heretical. Only tau chew gum
 
   
Made in ie
Pestilent Plague Marine with Blight Grenade





Cork, Ireland

Is it just me or when the forums are quiet i have little or no interest in writing ? Yet whenever there is activity about it whether forum post or pm i get inspired to write again.

Sgt. Vanden I bet Irish can do that by flashing his bear chest.
Sgt. Vanden Irish is the definition of a Dutch oven
 
   
Made in us
Loyal Necron Lychguard





Working on it

I agree, it's like when everyone's on you'd rather write because, well, were all hear to see it

<Dynasty> ~10500pts
War Coven of the Coruscating Gaze ~3000pts
Thrice-Damned Plague Corps ~3250pts
Admech (TBN) ~3500pts +30k Bots and Ulator

 
   
Made in ie
Pestilent Plague Marine with Blight Grenade





Cork, Ireland

EDIT: Posted piece here instead of CoF 2 proper, fixed it now.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2017/07/24 20:40:07


Sgt. Vanden I bet Irish can do that by flashing his bear chest.
Sgt. Vanden Irish is the definition of a Dutch oven
 
   
Made in us
Ultramarine Master with Gauntlets of Macragge




What's left of Cadia

Posted a little blurb that Chazz wrote for the Eldar and the Space Clowns. Enjoy boys

TheEyeOfNight- I swear, this thread is 70% smack talk, 20% RP organization, and 10% butt jokes
TheEyeOfNight- "Ordo Xenos reports that the Necrons have attained democracy, kamikaze tendencies, and nuclear fission. It's all tits up, sir."
Space Marine flyers are shaped for the greatest possible air resistance so that the air may never defeat the SPACE MARINES!
Sternguard though, those guys are all about kicking ass. They'd chew bubble gum as well, but bubble gum is heretical. Only tau chew gum
 
   
Made in ca
Heroic Senior Officer





Krieg! What a hole...

The end of the post I wrote before I left for work is up.

Member of 40k Montreal There is only war in Montreal
Primarchs are a mistake
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Savageconvoy wrote:
Snookie gives birth to Heavy Gun drone squad. Someone says they are overpowered. World ends.

 
   
Made in ie
Pestilent Plague Marine with Blight Grenade





Cork, Ireland

Piece 2/3 is complete !

Sgt. Vanden I bet Irish can do that by flashing his bear chest.
Sgt. Vanden Irish is the definition of a Dutch oven
 
   
Made in us
Rotting Sorcerer of Nurgle






The Dog-house

Looking good so far you guys. Keep it up.

H.B.M.C.- The end hath come! From now on armies will only consist of Astorath, Land Speeder Storms and Soul Grinders!
War Kitten- Vanden, you just taunted the Dank Lord Ezra. Prepare for seven years of fighting reality...
koooaei- Emperor: I envy your nipplehorns. <Magnus goes red. Permanently>
Neronoxx- If our Dreadnought doesn't have sick scuplted abs, we riot.
Frazzled- I don't generally call anyone by a term other than "sir" "maam" "youn g lady" "young man" or " HEY bag!"
Ruin- It's official, we've ran out of things to talk about on Dakka. Close the site. We're done.
mrhappyface- "They're more what you'd call guidlines than actual rules" - Captain Roboute Barbosa
Steve steveson- To be clear, I'd sell you all out for a bottle of scotch and a mid priced hooker.
 
   
Made in gb
Ultramarine Librarian with Freaky Familiar





Just waiting on my rolls back from chazz, then spreading my proverbial net further


They/them

 
   
Made in ca
Stabbin' Skarboy






 Sgt_Smudge wrote:
Just waiting on my rolls back from chazz, then spreading my proverbial net further


I have your rolls rolled just trying to interpret

Edit: and I have been shown the way thanks to the magic pain glove.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2017/08/01 21:17:40


 
   
Made in be
Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit





In the Warp, getting trolled by Tactical_Spam, AKA TZEENTCH INCARNATE

I finally managed to finish up the piece on the Remnants' activities (y'know, the piece I started writing ages ago), hope you guys like it



Tactical_Spam: Ezra is fighting reality right now.

War Kitten: Vanden, you just taunted the Dank Lord Ezra. Prepare for seven years of fighting reality...

War Kitten: Ezra can steal reality

Kharne the Befriender:Took him seven years but he got it wrangled down

 
   
Made in ie
Pestilent Plague Marine with Blight Grenade





Cork, Ireland

Released another piece, c'mon guys let us finish this at least

Sgt. Vanden I bet Irish can do that by flashing his bear chest.
Sgt. Vanden Irish is the definition of a Dutch oven
 
   
Made in us
Ultramarine Master with Gauntlets of Macragge




What's left of Cadia

Sorry guys. I've been dealing with some personal issues and my summer courses for college, I didn't mean to be away for so long.

TheEyeOfNight- I swear, this thread is 70% smack talk, 20% RP organization, and 10% butt jokes
TheEyeOfNight- "Ordo Xenos reports that the Necrons have attained democracy, kamikaze tendencies, and nuclear fission. It's all tits up, sir."
Space Marine flyers are shaped for the greatest possible air resistance so that the air may never defeat the SPACE MARINES!
Sternguard though, those guys are all about kicking ass. They'd chew bubble gum as well, but bubble gum is heretical. Only tau chew gum
 
   
Made in us
Loyal Necron Lychguard





Working on it

I've been drowning. 2 jobs+college is no bueno

<Dynasty> ~10500pts
War Coven of the Coruscating Gaze ~3000pts
Thrice-Damned Plague Corps ~3250pts
Admech (TBN) ~3500pts +30k Bots and Ulator

 
   
 
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