Honest opinion? It's pretty awful.
The bikeseer needs Runes of Warding. Also, he has no use for the Singing Spear, since he has two "instead of shooting" powers.
You need an Avatar.
Storm Guardians are useless (or rather have very specialised uses which you aren't getting in this list). They should all be Defenders. Also, Warlocks in Guardian squads are generally a waste of points. Those three Concealocks more than pay for a whole new Guardians squad. That's better than a cover save you could get from terrain anyway. I would suggest EMLs in all the squads so you can threaten armour (your army is lacking in that respect). The plasma missile can be fairly useful, too, and gets better in 5th.
It makes sense to give the Scorps Stalker. It's only 5 points and you will often have reason to use it.
That configuration of Vyper will be awful in 5th if defensive weapons really are S4. I would drop the additional shuriken cannons.
D-cannons suck. Against SAFH armies, they'll never get to fire, since the enemy won't be coming near you. Against assault armies, which will be coming near you, their low range means they'll probably get one chance to shoot and that's it. V-cannons are a better idea--the only problem is the glancing nerf. Honestly, the best thing to do would probably be to use these points for an Avatar.
The WL is poorly configured. Twin-linking sucks as you're paying for the cost of two weapons but only getting 1.3 weapons worth of utility. Take a BL and EML instead. Even if the MC nerf rumour is true, it'll still be worthwhile; the WL doesn't really need to move anyway. Lastly, you'll never have reason to use those shuricats. Get twin flamers instead. It's likely that you'll rarely get to flame anything, but if the situation arises, you'll be glad you have them.
Good luck with your army.
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