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Dont bother trying to keep it true to the origional, make it so that its an adventure that doesnt involve syrath and those other funky daemons and stuff, make it against nids and things. That would be cool

Tyranic Marta wrote:Dont bother trying to keep it true to the origional, make it so that its an adventure that doesnt involve syrath and those other funky daemons and stuff, make it against nids and things. That would be cool

Syrath will be at the end, shortly though and not as much. Only to put Marius in the Dreadnought, the Nids will be at the start and will lead into the Eye where Marius and Mikal bond properly, I think if it had been like that at the start it would have been amazing.

Yeah I reckon so too, what do you say we redo the whole series but bring everything down to a different tone with more character development etc. Really put the throttle on and make it worthy of posting as a dakka novel?

Yes, but after the three have been replayed. I loved the 2nd one, such emotion and scenes. Can't wait for Marius's betrayal.

Likewise, the secind was my favorite because of Marius's sheer epicness in the later stages. The massive autocannon rifle was one of my favorite weapons in the whole RP

Loved the scene where Marius and the Space Wolves destroy the Cruiser and Syrath goes all G-Man on him and tells him he was a pawn, Marius rage quits and jumps out of the bridge.

That was bitchin. and the one where he cuts that Dropship in half

Epic, ka-slice!

Ka-Slice: Cutting something In half with one big ass-sword

*sword

And the battle against Bjorn. Now THAT was epic

we need to throw more epic daemons in his path or chaos dreds so that he can have more sword V sword deuls

Fixed, now I wonder will Luidias survive his coma or perish.

I think He will perish and I will introduce Lucian

I agree, remember Syrath's copies. How bout them but with 10 times the power and Kremlin is incassed in a dreadnought after the first one.

Hmmm, maybe, but I had better be able to Kill the copies rather than them just fleeing

This is starting to confuse me a lot...if Ludias dies what is Beltayn supposed to do? And really? A coma? Thats a really lame way for Ludias to go out...

As for the redo of all three...yeah I guess that could be cool but to be honest I think it would be boring to try and redo three RPS just to make them better...they don't exactly work like movies where you can just go back and remake them better...

He'll be fine I think and the rp's will be very different. We don't just want to change them but re-create them completely.

blood reaper wrote:He'll be fine I think and the rp's will be very different. We don't just want to change them but re-create them completely.

Well, I suppose that could work, the first RP was pretty flat there for a while and the second was pretty short...the third, so far, has fallen primarily due to the lack of participation and confusion of the storyline...

I have a question for Marta though...you live in New Zealand right? I was wondering if you were Maori...no real reason for asking but your Termina character reminded me of them...

Name: Lucian Frostfang

Faction: Space wolves

Age: Approaching 1800

Appearance: Lucian Is clad in Runic armour that has served him through many hundreds of battles, his armour has the plasteel design of the skull of a Fenrisian wolf mounted on its front facing downwards with and each shoulder pauldron has been remade to suit the shape of a skull also. He is a formidable sight as his greaves have plasteel wolves claws spiking up from them flush with his thigh armour, his arms and chest have designs of wolves all over the armour and the fingers of his gloves appear to be wolves claws themselves, jointed and plasteel but painted to look (and feel if he rakes someone with them) wolf claws. His master crafted Frostblade, Icetooth, is his mainstay weapon. He also carries a Master Crafted bolter with him at all times he often never finds use for it but it was the weapon (reforged) that he had carried as a Grey hunter and kept it with reverence. His typically Helmetless head is adorned with a bionic eye that replaced is left eye after he lost it fighting a hive Tyrant on Macragge with the Ultramarines. He bears a single long braid that often flows over his backpack and his beard is braided into a pair of steel grey lines that bare over his chest. Each perhaps a foot long. He bears several wolftooth Neckalces around his neck and wolftail talismans hang from many points on his armour, including the tip of his swords hilt and his bolders muzzle guard. His typically quiet raspy voice rises to a roar in the midst of battle.

History: Lucian was once a simple warrior, he fought without passion. His mind always blank when he fought. It would be unnerving to watch the warrior eat through tribesman after tribes man with only his personal warsword. He ended up separated from his tribe in hostile lands and fought his way for three weeks across the frozen wastes of Fenris. Nothing got in his way and survived. Even a mighty Magtheridon bull fell to his blade and so when the Wolf priests found him he was wrapped in its great wolly pelt nearly frozen in the snows of his homeland. But far, far from home. The Wolf priests to him to Asahiem and reared him as one of thier own seeing in him a kindred spirit. But the life of a wolf priest was not for him. He fought long and hard in service of the great Bjorn. his mind and body were tuned to battle like no other space wolf before him. He was, as the wolf priests say, touched by Russ. His sword became a relic of the chapter, its blade reforged with plasteel and adamantine alloy and the chain of diamond teeth attatched to the outside rim of the reforged weapon chewed through many many chaos warriors. The chapter was never sure exactly what to call him. His mind was tacticla and astute, but only in the ways of a few warriors, not many. He was not destined to be a Wolf Lord. He was inducted into the wolf guard after killing a pair of Terminator champions on the frozen wastes of a planet in the outer rim, near the ghost stars. When he returned back to Fenris it was to finds his pack killed by chaos.

He vowed vengeance and for the next 600 years fought like a man possessed. No passion ever entered his body but his sword was always perfectly timed to kill his foe. He was a master deulist and frequently won Wolftooth necklaces at the battles in the fang. Eventually his skill with a blade and tactical aptitude were recognised and we was bromoted to Wolfguard Battle Leader. But as a lone wolf it was never his place to lead a great company so he gathered about himself other Lone wolves of the chapter and together they shredded their way through the galaxy. Eventually it turned out that he was on Fenris when Chaos attacked under the command of Syrath. Lucian fought in the battle for Fenris many times often on the periphery of the battle. He even sighted The legenday Marius Ichorskin deulling with a massive Daemon he later found was called Syrath.

Ultimatley however he ended up with anouther pair of names on his runic armour to avenge. His Wolf Lord Bjorn, and Marius himself. He refused to accept that it was his fault that he had turned and treated Marius as dead. Killed by chaos, and someone for him to avenge. A month after the battle he was sent back into the Eye of Terror on the trail of Shas'o Kais. The one commander who could lead him to the Daemon who had caused Marius's Betrayal.

Equipment: Runic Armour, Icetooth (Mastercrafted hand and a half Frost Blade), Coldsnap (Master Crafted Bolter), Wolftooth Necklace, Wolftail Talisman. Saga of the Warrior Born.

Quote: "There is only so far you can run before the cold of winter will catch up with you...."

Me???? MAORI????!!!!! OMG NO. Sorry I'm a touch racist sometimes.

DW Ludias will come back, I actually intended for the missle to go of and kill him but I guess Reaper doesnt like using Explosives to kill characters so I will have to do this the old fasioned way. Anyhoo, Lucian will be my next char

Oh ho ho ho ho, this is interesting.

Indeed

Another Space wolf?

Now I'm really confused...and am trying to figure out how Beltayn is supposed to fit in all of this...

@ Tyranic... I'm sorry...I didn't know Maori had anything to do with racism...my bad...

Anouther epic character courtesy of yours truly

No its jjust im really white and i dont like Maoris :\

Tyranic Marta wrote:No its jjust im really white and i dont like Maoris :\

XD...I'm sorry but the only people I've seen from New Zealand are Maori looking...my bad...

I guess it fits...y'know a space wolf being killed by Syrath's trickery, a space wolf eventually ending Syrath...

i thought so too

Yes but Syrath will put up one hell of a fight.

Ooooh...that give me an idea about how Beltayn might go out...