Asherian Command wrote:Its kinda funny since I decided personally to discontinue the Crusaders as they seem so Mary sue its appalling to my latest writing skills to look at. (That was like amonth ago, now i am focusing on writing fantasy which is indeed easier to write. Can't explain it say it was magic that did it.)
Well instead of retconning them you should just tone them down so that they fit in with the established lore.
Here we go:
Chapter Name: Storm Crusaders
The Storm Crusaders are one of the roughly 1000 Chapters of Imperial Space Marines, and are rather unique in their organization (to the disgust of many Codex-adhering Chapters). First of all, they have almost triple the codex-standard Marines, though this is often mitigated by the fact that there has never been a time in the chapter's history where the entire chapter has fought together. Its first chapter master was Asherian, a renowned psyker whose greatest triumph was over a powerful Daemon, and this legend will be told by the chapter until the end of times. However, although he slew the beast, it was at a great cost to his body and soul. For the rest of his time as Chapter Master, he would not participate in any major combat operations.
Although their organization is quite odd, the chapter is always one of the first to volunteer if the Inquisition is in need of a company or more of Imperial Marines to enforce its brutal practices. This is a practice begun by Asherian and is still continued to this day, although not many chapters would agree with the cruel methods that the Crusaders use when employed by the Inquisition.
Aaand there you go. Of course it can use more work, but I feel that it makes for a fairly interesting chapter.
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Vladsimpaler