Problems a'plenty with this list.
Command squad 222pts
<? Senior Officer
4x Grenade Launchers
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Giant waste of points.
Senior Officer, no Standard Bearer, no ID, 4 GL's (WTF?) and a Heavy Bolter for a turret weapon. Multi-Lasers are fantastic weapons, so unless all you play against are Sv4+ armies, switch every Turret HB to a Turret Multi-Laser.
This unit should cost 176 points. 46 points saved.
Special weapon squad
3x sniper rifles
cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Oh... God... Look, Sniper Rifles are terrible weapons. You need units filled with them to cause damage. Furthermore, you take 2 Flamers/Demo Charge in SWS's. That's all they do. They act as your counter-assault. Ditch the waste of space Sniper Rifles and get yourself a decent squad.
And why take SWS's if you're not going to take two of 'em?
3x Meltaguns 205pts
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Why are you taking 10-man Vet units? These are suicide units. Get a Multi-Laser and ditch 5 of these bozos. 40 points saved.
3x Meltaguns 205pts
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Ditto. 40 points saved.
Troops
Command Squad 215pts
4x plasma guns
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
4 Plasmas, that's ok. Squad needs Iron Discipline. Get a multi-laser.
IG squad 1 180pts
Lascannon
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Get a Multi-Laser. Get a Plasma Gun.
IG squad 1 180 pts
Lascannon
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Ditto.
Armoured fist squad 175pts Lascannon
Cameleoline
Chimera ? Hvy Bolter, Hvy bolter
Ditto.
Heavy support 170
Leman russ
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Sponson Hvy bolters
Great. A single AV 14 target in a sea of AV12 targets. Guess what every Lascannon/Railgun (and similar) will be firing upon first turn.
I'll make this very clear:
Tanks operate in pairs, trios, or not at all.
Moreover, how can a 155 point tank cost your 170? 140 base, 5 for Hull HB, 10 for Sponsons. So that's another 15 points saved.
You can save 141 points just by dumping useless crap, and I'm not even counting the SWS's config because I'm not sure how much they pay for Sniper Rifles. That's almost another Russ.
BYE