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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5bIjBFOJTc

So this is my first video Battle report, and after spending an entire evening editing it together it will probably be my last

Any and all feedback greatly appreciated! Please enjoy!

At the Opening Volley you paused the video to read a script dryly. It put me to sleep. You need to show while you tell, and put something else into it. You can speak candidly, but have something else to say about what's going on, and occasionally include your opponent. You don't need to include him much at all, but I think for big moments it's important to hear both sides.

All candid points! Thanks for the advice, will definitely take into account for next report (if that ever happens). Must say it was a huge learning experience, and the main thing I learned was that I don't mix so well with a microphone!

The video editing should go much quicker after you get used to it.