Terminator Captain
Warlord
Auspex
Digi Weps
Chainfist
Lightning Claw
160
just wondering why you wouldn't use him as Captain Karlaen? same points cost as your scratch built guy, but has a master crafted thunder hammer and has counter attack as a rule. i would consider this as karlaen for me is a very well pointed
HQ.
Tactical Squad
x9 Marines
Missile Launcher
Sergeant
155
i would tweak this ever so slightly, please see below
Baal Predator
Heavy Bolters
Twin-Linked Assault Cannon
Overcharged Engines
Searchlight
Smoke Launchers
Assault cannon and Heavy Bolters is how i would always take a Baal Pred, flamestorm whilst good, just means your tank basically has to be in assault and/or melta range of the enemy to do damage.
i would consider the following:
Captain Karlaen - 160
Tac Squad - 70
Tac Squad - Missile Launcher - 85
Baal Predator -
HB Sponsons - 135
=450
You have a legal
CAD. good
HQ, especially at this points level, two troops and a Baal Pred.
What's not to like?
Hope this helps