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I need help building/constructive criticism on my new Chaos Marine list. It has all 4 Gods involved, and is using a Black Crusade Detachment from the new Traitor's Hate Book
Formations:
Lords of the Black Crusade
-Kharn the Betrayer 160


Lords of the Black Crusade
-Chaos Lord 65
Mark of Khorne 15
Powerfist 25
Combi-Melta 10
Burning Brand of Skalthrax 30
Chaos Bike 20


Chaos Warband
-Chaos Lord 65
Terminator Armor 25
Combi-Melta 0
Power Axe 0
Mark of Tzeentch 15

-4 Chaos Terminators 126
Mark of Tzeentch 20
Gift of Mutation 10

-10 Chaos Marines 140
Boltgun 0
Heavy Bolter 10
Plasma Gun 15
Rhino 35
Mark of Nurgle 30
Gift of Mutation 10
(Champion)
Power Fist 25
Bolt Pistol 0

-10 Chaos Marines 140
Bolt Pistol 0
Chainsword 0
Flamer 5
Meltagun 10
Mark of Khorne 20
(Champion)
Powersword 15
Plasma Pistol 15
Gift of Mutation 10

-10 Chaos Marines 140
Boltgun 0
Plasma Gun 15
Heavy Bolter 10
Mark of Tzeentch 20
Icon Of Flame 15
(Champion)
Power Sword 15
Gift of Mutation 10

-5 Chaos Bikers 110
Mark of Nurgle 30
Flamer 5
(Champion)
Gift of Mutation 10

-5 Havocs 75
Autocannon 10
Missile Launcher 15
Missile Launcher 15
Lascannon 20
(Champion)
Combi-Flamer 10
Poweraxe 15

-Chaos Sorcerer 60
Terminator Armor 25
Spell Familiar 20
Mastery 3 50


Veterans of the Legion
-5 Thousand Sons 150
Rhino 35
(Champion)
Gift of Mutation 10


Hellforged Warpack
-Warpsmith 110
Aura of Dark Glory 15
Mark of Nurgle 15

-Helbrute 100
Thunderhammer 5
Reaper Autocannon 5

-Forgefiend 175

-Forgefiend 175
Ectoplasma Cannon 25


Raptor Talon (Lord gets Jetpack Free)
-Chaos Lord 65
Jetpack 0
Plasma Pistol 15
Lightning Claw 15
Mark of Khorne 15
Combat Familiar 15

-5 Raptors 95
Meltagun 10
Meltagun 10
Mark of Slaanesh 10
(Champion)
Gift of Mutation 10
Lightning Claw 15
Lightning Claw 15

-5 Raptors 95
Flamer 5
Meltagun 10
Mark of Slaanesh 10
(Champion)
Gift of Mutation 10
Powersword 15

-5 Warp Talons 160
Mark of Tzeentch 10


160+165+100+156+240+225+150+160+155+195+140+110+175+200+125+165+145+170= 2936

What are your thoughts on this list?