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2018/04/18 15:54:59
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Mounted Kroot Tracker
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This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2018/04/18 15:58:27
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2018/04/18 18:03:46
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Twisting Tzeentch Horror
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Wow!
You are so talented!
Keep up the good work!
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2018/04/18 19:56:57
Subject: Re:Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Truly lovely work (don't tell anyone but I think the goblin green base in fine )
My only really harsh critique (and I genuinely feel almost stupid for offering any as he's beautiful) is that I feel the sword looks a bit flat compared to the rest of the model - I know you don't want too high a contrast on the blade as it'll look too much like the armour but I'd be tempted to work in some glazes to change the tone on the metal or to help highlight the runes/where the blade meets the hilt a bit more
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2018/04/19 16:33:47
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Mounted Kroot Tracker
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@ warpspawned. Thanks for honest critique. I purposefully dialed back the idea to do a full on sword osl because mainly i had to move on to the rest of the models i still need to paint for this slow grow league. That being said, youre probably right in that i can push those contrasts a bit further, shouldnt be difficult and i will probably do so in the future! Thanks again!
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2018/04/19 16:53:08
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Regular Dakkanaut
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The paintjob looks REALLY nice!
I like the smooth blends and the "cloth-stripes" on the cloak especially :-)
Only tiny thing I could suggest to improve it, would be to put some letters on the scroll on his legs, so it looks like it has some writing on it too, like the one on his shoulders.
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2018/04/19 19:31:56
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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bebopdrums2424 wrote:@ warpspawned. Thanks for honest critique. I purposefully dialed back the idea to do a full on sword osl because mainly i had to move on to the rest of the models i still need to paint for this slow grow league. That being said, youre probably right in that i can push those contrasts a bit further, shouldnt be difficult and i will probably do so in the future! Thanks again!
Paint the swizzle on there while you're at it. It looks like you forgot, even if you actually meant it to look that way.
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"'players must agree how they are going to select their armies, and if any restrictions apply to the number and type of models they can use."
This is an actual rule in the actual rulebook. Quit whining about how you can imagine someone's army touching you in a bad place and play by the actual rules.
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When people ask, "What's the point in understanding everything?" they've just disqualified themselves from using questions and should disappear in a puff of paradox. But they don't understand and just continue existing, which are also their only two strategies for life. |
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2018/04/19 19:52:42
Subject: Space Shark Primaris Librarian
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Mounted Kroot Tracker
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DarknessEternal wrote: bebopdrums2424 wrote:@ warpspawned. Thanks for honest critique. I purposefully dialed back the idea to do a full on sword osl because mainly i had to move on to the rest of the models i still need to paint for this slow grow league. That being said, youre probably right in that i can push those contrasts a bit further, shouldnt be difficult and i will probably do so in the future! Thanks again!
Paint the swizzle on there while you're at it. It looks like you forgot, even if you actually meant it to look that way.
hey there thanks for you suggestion but no thanks . Ill leave it the color i wanted to in the first place, but it can definitely stand to be reinforced.
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This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2018/04/19 20:02:08
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