Thanks for the welcome!
To answer your main points:
Armies of the Reborn is a wobbly brick of a rule and keeps changing every FAQ/CA, so yes, (near-)full replacement. I was thinking the detachment would be Battleforged before applying the rule, but the whole "as you're picking your army" makes it hazy, good catch.
I kinda like the sub-resource, but that's Codex: Ynnari territory, and quite frankly there isn't enough to the sub-faction to warrant that (SM chapters, yeah yeah). Also, Whisper Tokens being like Command Points but not quite so is a little too messy for my liking.
Two further ideas:
I put up the up-front cost of the formation to 2/3CP
I don't know how the rules would handle it, but I'm tempted to streamline SfD into something like:
Strength from Death (2CP)
Ynnari Stratagem
Activate when the thing would happen. Choose a unit in range. When it would take one of the following actions: [___], it may immediately repeat that action, choosing new targets if desired. You may only target a unit with this stratagem once per round.
That's the vaguest rule in existence I know, but it gives you the idea. It cuts out out-of-sequence actions, and offers the opponent a chance to kill a unit that's been buffed with SfD before it can use it.
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