Long fangs aren't troops so your battalion doesn't work. Also how do you plan to deep strike your blood claws? They would need a drop pod for that. Overall your list looks a bit disjointed. You have nothing that can easily take out warriors and nothing that can safely screen your characters.
I'd recommend dropping the long fangs and getting some actual troops. Couple of grey hunter packs or some intercessors, something with a weight of fire behind them. I'd also consider dropping Ragnar in place of a lord on thunderwolf or dropping the TWC for some blade guard to accompany Ragnar. Maybe even a transport for them too.
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