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Chapter 16

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I did not know if this was a good idea, I had no idea how Lord Jedrick would react when asking him this question. I asked him why is he constantly trying to disprove Marthas.Now he simply told me it's none of my business. I pushed the point further asking if he is jealous of Marthas soon as I said that he grabbed me and shoved me to the wall. He told me that I should watch what I say. What he said next verified my thoughts he told me out of respect for our lord is why he won't harm me. If I ask again he would not hold back.

He let go and walked away. I now know for sure Jedrick care's for our Lord greatly. I only know of how he joined him but nothing after that. I wonder what happened between them?


Adelram sat on a pillar in the next room as the small camp fire burned. Camila leaned on him sleeping, Noxus sat at the other side of the fire. Adelram could not help but smile oddly, Noxus made the right decision. He may not realise it but looking at his soul during that encounter he was utterly terrified. Now it's slowly turning to adoration even if he does not want to admit it.

Adelram watched Noxus looking over his sword as he asked "So who is the woman?" Adelram looked down at her, she looked so frail that with a touch she would shatter "I only have her name really. It's all I asked for, she is mine." Adelram could tell Noxus is frowning "It's clear you haven't tortured her." Adelram smiled "I haven't. I am merely curious on why he is interested in her."

Noxus spoke his confusion clear "He?" Adelram stroked his chin "I mean Asriel of course. Considering how he is now I wonder what made him take interest in this young woman." Adelram moved his hand to her brown hair he twisted a small piece "The imperial guard were quite rough with her I assume." Adelram could see Noxus is thinking "What's on your mind brother?" As he mentioned brother he could see Noxus flinching.

Noxus coughed "How is your creature still alive?" Adelram frowned when he called him that it annoyed him slightly yet he answered his question "From my understanding, the warband has been spirited away to this planet. My servant has spent a great amount of time putting things together." Noxus nodded "I see. I was found by Sebastian I saw how he changed I wanted to follow him. He made the warband str-" Adelram watched the sentence die on his lips he finished his sentence "Stronger? Are you sure? Considering what I did to our brothers in the last room? Do you still think he made the warband stronger?" Noxus cast his head down slightly when he said that he then asked "What did you do to Valirak?"
Adelram chuckled "You saw clearly what happened. I just decided his suffering is greater if I used my sorcery in that fashion."

It is still clear to Adelram that Noxus is still unsure of what exactly he has done he tried to bring the topic back to Sebastian "Tell me Noxus. Are you happy calling Sebastian lord? Since following Sebastian have you felt that you have grown in anyway?" Noxus responded his voice firm "What makes you think that you are stronger now? You may of learned some new tricks yet Sebastian could still kill you."

Adelram smiled "In the past? But now? After my journey of reflection and experience? When this is done I will face him." Noxus shocked said "He will kill you!" Adelram laughed slightly "Noxus are you already worried about me?" Noxus shook his head, Adelram could see he is still clearly unsure "No. I am just wondering why you are going to do something so foolish."

Adelram stared directly into the eyes of his helmet "I know I can defeat him now. That much is clear to me. His light is small his want is small I can never lose to that."

Noxus started to become relaxed with his response he seemed satisfied with his answer he then asked a question "You surround yourself with slaves why? Compared to everyone else you surround yourself with lesser beings." Adelram sighed in annoyance "That is why you are still a follower Noxus." Noxus gripped his blade as he said that.

Adelram decided to remove his hood as he spoke the instant he did that Noxus turned his head away, Adelram smiled "You saw what I did in the last room. The bodies are still there. What if I told you I almost died facing guardsmen in the past?" Noxus slowly faced him it took him a few seconds to speak "I don't believe it." Adelram smiled "It's true. When I began this journey I thought that I am superior. I can handle anything that comes my way ease along with being a psyker." Adelram could see Noxus is now listening carefully Adelram continued his explanation "Think on this. I am not wearing power armour now if I was I would largely not have to worry about taking a direct hit from a lasgun. Now? I do. I had to actually think around how I should face a squad of imperial guardsmen. It was oddly exciting for some reason."

Noxus placed his blade down "I imagine conscripts can't give you much trouble even if you are not wearing power armour." Adelram chuckled slightly "I refer to the proper squads in the north. Not the conscripts. They have come rather close to killing me." Adelram could see Noxus's puzzlement and surprise is increasing. Adelram pulled out the bolt pistol "Now a bolt pistol, a single shot from an Astartes grade one could easily kill them. Yet I had to think about ammo and what I may possibly face in the future. If I faced too many of Sebastian's lot they would catch on that I am alive. Facing the Death guard? Their equipment is of no use to me. So I mainly had to use my combat knife when facing any adversary"

Adelram looked down to Camila "Plus I have her tagging along with me. I have to think about how she needs rest. To eat. Scavenging for food." Noxus removed his helmet at his response, Adelram looked at his face as he frowned his features are rather plain and he has short black hair "Where ever you are going. It would of been easier to leave her behind." Adelram shrugged "As I said before I am curious as to why he has interest in her." Noxus raised his eyebrow "Why would you trust the judgement of a slave?"

Adelram gave Noxus a gentle smile, his eye twitched "Why not? I now trust him far more than you right now. He is my favourite. He knows what he is and asks for nothing in return. I wished I realised it sooner. No not realise, accepted it sooner." Adelram could see Noxus clenching his fists "I see. I do have one question though. What happened to Gethus?"

Adelram thought on his question. It's likely Gethus is dead considering he asked the question he most likely thinks that he had something to do with it. Adelram had a rather good idea why he is now missing he smiled as he said "Asriel has most likely killed him." Noxus's eyes went wide "Impossible! He also somehow managed to kill his whole squad!" Adelram added this information to his mind he could not help but feel joyful on how much Asriel's cares.

Adelram relaxed on the pillar "This is the problem. We Astartes underestimate others greatly our survival instinct has been blunted because of it." Adelram pushed his point further "Think on it. Given the right circumstances, inquisitors can kill us. Assassins for sure can definitely kill us. Humans given the chance can do the unpredictable." Adelram remembered Silas's words they actually helped during the journey in the end he found that he was right. He recalled the conscript he killed by backhanding her. Yes he killed her with ease but what surprised him is that she was largely unaffected by the gifts the dark prince has given him.

Adelram looked to his feet that has been bloodied by walking over a war torn battlefield he now understands what Marthas is trying to show or teach him. He asked Noxus "Aren't you bored in Sebastian's camp?" Noxus thought on his question and answered "It was more boring following you around." Adelram smiled "True. Before when referring to the person I refuse to chase. That I want them to look at me. I was not referring to our captain." Noxus raised his eyebrow "Who then?"

Adelram thought on what he is about to say for once he is not worried he said "I refer to our father." Noxus's eyes went wide "So it is ascension then?" Adelram shook his head "No. That may happen if the dark prince wills it but largely everyone who has become a daemon prince in the third has done so to chase after our father to meet him. I want the opposite." Noxus is clearly shocked "Are you that arrogant? To think that our father will talk to you personally after he left us?"

Adelram listened he did not care for Noxus's words he pressed further "Don't you want the same thing? For our father even if it's a small piece to look at us with Pride? Do you think what Sebastian is doing in his little camp will ever bring his attention?" Adelram smiled he could see he is unsettling Noxus "I will do far worse to people who cross us. To the people we ravage and kill. I tasted Valirak's agony and suffering as he died. I listened to the screams and lamentations of all those I killed in this journey. I realised I have to bring a grand crescendo of agony and suffering to ever catch our father's attention."

Adelram could see Noxus is processing what he just said, Adelram then said softly "Don't you want to see it Noxus? Making planets cry in torment to bring the eye of our father? Forget your pitiful excesses your small wants and join me wholly on this path."

Adelram could see Noxus' breath steadying he is growing excited he could see it. Adelram knows that Sebastian has no clear vision right now. Adelram asked again "Do you want to see it Noxus?" Noxus finally nodded "I want to see it." Noxus looked at his hand it is shaking as he said "It's been a long time since I have ever been excited like this."

Adelram nodded "Good hold on to that. we are close to the destination I am trying to reach." Noxus raised his eyebrow "Where are you going? I mean where are we going?" Adelram smiled "You will see. We have to move soon though." Noxus responded "I see."

It's been a few days Camila walked by his side to his right she largely did not speak a word since he picked her up and Noxus is to his left. Adelram knew he had to reach the compound soon since it's the last day.

This part of the city had an eerie silence. Noxus looked around "We are being watched I guess." Adelram smiled "We are but we have nothing to worry about." Noxus nodded " Very well. So who ever is watching us does not seek to harm us?" Adelram stroked his chin "Perhaps harm you. It's more the fact that you are with me that they have not fired their sniper rifles."

Adelram reached a familiar tunnel and stopped, he raised his hand all he had to do is make a small hole for the two travelling with him. The ritual just looking at it with his witch sight he now realised that it is quite intricate. Adelram began chanting moving his hands bending the wall twisting open a hole to walk through.

It shimmered he lowered his hands and looked at Noxus "We must hurry through it won't be open forever." Noxus said "What did you do? I saw something shimmer for a moment." Adelram sighed "Enough. let's move now." Adelram walked into the tunnel Camila and Noxus followed.

Marthas sat at the exit of the courtyard with Asriel. Jedrick is here also. Silas did not bother waiting at the entrance he seemed confident that Adelram is returning today.

The fact it's the final day kept playing in his mind for some reason, he hoped that Adelram will make it since he does not want to destroy everything that's been built so far. He looked at Asriel who is sat nearby sharpening his blade his cloak moving rapidly. It's clear that he is not calm he noted that after all they have been through he will wait a month before doing anything.

Silas, somehow convinced Jedrick to also wait the month out. Marthas spoke out loud "I am confident he will return today." Jedrick is leaning on the wall he glowered "Shut up! Your nonsense may of got him killed!" Marthas frowned "Don't you believe he can do it? Don't you have any faith in him?" Jedrick stood straight and walked over his hand hovering over his axe "If he does not return by the end of today. I will kill you."

Marthas looked forward "You may try to kill me. Only after the day ends" Jedrick scowled "Try!? I can kill you." Marthas looked over in Asriel's direction "He is the only one who has a likely chance to kill me. Not you." Jedrick removed his axe from it's sheath he raised his axe "That's it!" He lowered it to strike him but his arm stopped mid motion.

Asriel's cape is now wrapped around his axe wielding arm Jedrick turned to Asriel "What are you doing?" Asriel did not say a word Jedrick sighed in annoyance. Part of the cloak holding his arm removed itself, Jedrick went back to his old position grunting in anger. Marthas could see that Asriel's action calmed him down slightly. Or he is telling Jedrick to wait.

They waited for another hour until suddenly Asriel perked up. He stood up looking into the distance he growled "Someone messed with the ritual." Marthas stood up "It could be our Lord by the way." Asriel shook his head "He has the charm. He has no reason to mess with the ritual."

Marthas looked into the distance "Asriel speak to our scouts. It might be him." Asriel pulled out a communication device he began speaking into it. A voice came through "It's him Asriel. He bought people with him." Marthas raised his eyebrow "He bought people with him?" Asriel asked the scout "Do you have a description?" The scout's voice came through the device after a few seconds "An imperial guardsman their uniform is torn and an Astartes. He looked to be from Sebastian's group."

Marthas smiled "See. He made it he should reach the compound soon." Jedrick scoffed in annoyance "I still don't like what you did." Marthas turned to Jedrick he is getting slightly annoyed with his outburst "Yet it worked. Enough with your protests." Jedrick retorted "He may have got back but that does not mean he came out how you wanted."

Marthas faced forward again "We shall see."

They waited for a few more minutes and in the distance he saw him. The robe now dirty he approached. He could see the Guardsmen and an Astartes following behind him. Eventually Adelram reached the entrance of the apartment complex.

Jedrick stepped forward "Dammit your alive! Don't agree with Marthas' madness ever again do you hear me!" Marthas frowned at what Jedrick said he approached Adelram he could sense that he has changed. The scent about him is different. How he walked is different and finally when he spoke "I made it back. I finished my journey."

A large grin lined Marthas face, he could see Jedrick is unbalanced as he spoke he asked "What happened to you out there? You... I..." Adelram removed his hood at his response, Marthas dropped to his knees instantly, Jedrick did the same slowly.

Asriel stood like a stone he looked at Adelram and then to him he removed his helmet and lowered his hood. Marthas noted the woman flinched as he did so. Still he is surprised that Asriel is not kneeling in awe to the changed wrought upon their lord. Asriel said "My lord you are back... I was worried." Adelram turned to Asriel "Indeed I am back and there is a great amount of things that need to be done." Asriel bowed "What would you have me do?"

Marthas could oddly see confusion lining Adelram's perfect features as he spoke to Asriel. Adelram said "Is everything okay Asriel?" Asriel then rose confused "Everything is fine. Why do you ask?" Marthas shocked said out loud "Can't you see how he is changed!? How wonderful he now looks!?"

Asriel cocked his head "He looks slightly different. His voice is slightly different but he is still him. He is my lord." Marthas' mouth went agape "Are you blind!?" Adelram laughed hard, Marthas in the time he has known him never seen him laugh in such a fashion. He walked over to Asriel his laugh subsided as he stroked Asriel's head.

Marthas could see, Adelram giving Asriel a gentle and sincere smile as he said "I forget what you went through in the past. You are not like everyone else and this is why I favour you. I have just forgotten that." Marthas could see confusion on Asriel's face he is most likely wondering what everyone is seeing.

Marthas rose along with Jedrick. Marthas placed his eyes upon the Astartes. He did not recognise him but Jedrick pointed he shouted "Noxus! What are you doing here!" The Astartes known as Noxus looked away.

Adelram smiled "He is with us now." Jedrick folded his arms "Can he be trusted?" Adelram nodded "He can." Adelram turned his head to Noxus "You can be trusted can't you brother?" Marthas watched Noxus flinch he wondered what exactly happened to him for Adelram to get him to join them.

Marthas nodded and gestured to the entrance "My lord everyone needs to see you are well." Adelram smiled "Indeed they have to see their lord has returned."
   
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Chapter 17

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We found our lord finally. Finally he is here in this very apartment complex but now he is broken. A shell hollowed out by the god of decay and despair. I wonder what more I could of done? Perhaps if I placed even more people on watch we could of found him before Sebastian got to him?
Still it's time. It's time to move things forward, to begin the end game to bring this long war to it's close.

I will deal with the one who broke his legs and retrieve Isira. All the pieces are being moved. I may not get a chance to write another entry. Since from now I will be busy setting things up.


I just hope we can break our lord out of his despair. I am confident Marthas can do it.


Asriel watched his lord walk into the courtyard everyone froze. Time stood still, all he could hear is the breathing of the crowd of people and their hearbeat. In a single motion everyone dropped to their knee's in silence. Asriel could even spot Isira in the crowd tears in her eyes. Asriel took another look at his lord, he wondered what everyone actually saw. What did they see that he could not see?

He looked at Marthas and Jedrick he could see Marthas clearly in awe. Jedrick by his body language seemed happy but he could tell he wanted to say something else. Asriel folded his arms in annoyance he wanted to understand. He wanted to be as happy as everyone else. At that moment he heard Meliva laughing softly Asriel knew she is mocking him. One thing about their bond is that they can converse within his mind. Asriel asked "What is so funny?" Meliva dropped her laughter she moved slightly causing Asriel some discomfort "Why you wondering why everyone is so absorbed with our master." Asriel noted that she called his lord master.

She never did that. Unless she is perhaps plotting something Asriel asked "Why are you referring to him as master?" Meliva stopped moving, the discomfort ceased "Well we are perhaps going to be together until your death and we share this body. We are one so he is also my master also." Asriel knew they came to an agreement but he is not sure they both have the same understanding or the exact same wants.

Asriel mused "You get to exprience reality through me, yet being a shard of the dark prince a greater one at that. You always want more, so Meliva what do you want exactly?" As he said this, his lord gestured everyone to rise, Isira came foward and gave another bow. Tears still in her eyes she said "You are so beautiful now." She bowed again. His lord grinned "Indeed. Still there is much to do." Asriel looked at the crowd holding a similar expression to Isira. Asriel is still annoyed trying to understand what everyone else saw, Meliva spoke as she did so Asriel saw flashes of the church. What happened in the basement.

He got a headache, he felt pain, pleasure and many other sensations all at once. The memory he would like to forget but a part of him did not want to. He cried a small tear of blood he chuckled to himself as he said under his breath "How could I forget? So it effects me that much?" His lord turned to him concerned he said "A tear of blood? Is something wrong?" Asriel gave a weak smile "No my lord. I am just happy for you that's all." His master walked over and pulled out a small cloth and wiped the tear away as he said "You can't lie to me."

His lord smiled, he could see some women fainting as he did so. Asriel looked at his face carefully searching he almost squinted his eyes. To perhaps see something his lord spoke softly "Stop trying it's fine." His lord removed the cloth from his face, Asriel could see Isira looked cross or clearly annoyed. Asriel scratched his head "I just want to be happy for you or understand what other people see. That's all." Adelram nodded "It's alright. Anyway I have something to tell you." Asriel perked up "What is it my lord?"

His lord stroked his chin "I am moving into your room. Along with Camila." Adelram looked to the woman from the inner city as he did so Asriel looked at her. He is surprised that his lord found her. Asriel hoped that it would be likely he would come across her again and attempt to take her back to the compound. Still it was good that he went into her apartment to grab her important item at the moment it is in his room.

Staring her down for a for more seconds she seemed like him she did not seem to be as taken in by his lord's features. Or perhaps she just hides it well enough considering she has been with him for a period of time.

Asriel looked her up and down he turned her name over in his head. Considering when he spoke with her he did not even ask her name. Nor did she offer it. Or perhaps the telepathy technique he used was a tad too strong? Asriel looked at the crowd of people staring at him and he saw something that surprised him anger. No not anger jealously.

He could even see Isira is doing all she can to contain herself. Asriel nodded to his lord "Very well I will get ready." Asriel placed his helmet back on he walked over to Camila "You shall help me. Come." Asriel grabbed her hand she pulled back slightly for a moment but relaxed her voice a small squeak "Is that really you Asriel?" Asriel nodded "Yes it is. You are fortunate our master found you." Camila looked up at him and nodded.
As he walked to the apartment complex people stared at him in silence. As they entered the double doors. Silas stood near a window looking out. Silas turned to him "Marthas threw our lord into a warzone and he comes back more pretty. Don't you find that funny Asriel?" Asriel gave a slight bow with his head "I personally don't see it or the humour either." Silas shrugged "That's why he is moving into your room." Silas sighed "Well it's time I go see him then." Silas walked out of the building.

Asriel continued to the stairs as they walked up he looked to Camila he asked her "What do you think of our lord?" Camila looked up in surprise she spoke her voice still low "I don't know." Asriel stopped "You don't know? Why?" Asriel let go of her hand, Camila scratched her head "When he took me. He killed my squad brutally I suspect he will do the same to anyone else in his way." Asriel nodded "That is expected they should not be in his way in the first place."

Asriel watched Camila squeeze her hands together "Even as he did so. When he grabbed me all that hatred, fear and all thoughts of him being a he-" Asriel watched her sentence die on her lips Asriel said as softly as he can "Speak your mind. I asked didn't I?" Camila nodded and continued "A heretic. The imperial guard drilled into me further to hate to despise them. To vilify them completely. Yet when he held me I could not. I could not do such a thing even in my mind I knew I should. All of that vanished I only felt longing and the need to serve him." Asriel thought on what she said he then asked her "Do you still want to serve him?"

Asriel looked into her eyes searching as she said "It should bother me but I do. I travelled with him for days yet not once I wanted to run away. Even when I saw comrades in the distance I warred with myself whether to approach. Yet I always chose not to." Camila fell silent. Asriel felt satisfied with her answer oddly enough.

They continued to his room, as they entered Camila's eyes fell to his desk she almost rushed towards it. Camila looked at him in surprise tears welling up in her eyes "How? When?" Asriel removed his helmet and gave a small smile "I can't allow the imperials to waste such talent. Hence why I took your instrument. I was hoping to cross paths with you later or perhaps one of our teams might encounter your unit." Asriel watched her hold the violin tightly, Asriel did wonder what everyone would think of her talent.

Asriel with Camila took time to move around the book shelves in his room. They even had one removed from his room to make room for his lord's bed. Asriel dusted his hands "Everything is in place." He looked over to Camila who is now sitting on his bed going over her violin, she is checking the tuning she had a child like smile as she went about her work.

Asriel heard a knock on his door, he walked over to open it he saw that it is his lord. He stepped in and looked around the room and nodded "Good you made space." Asriel closed the door as he said "My lord is it okay that you do this?" His lord turned to him frowning "it's fine. Now Asriel, it's only you me and Camila here. Call me Adelram remember?" Asriel shook his head "It's.. difficult to do that." His lord held his frown of displeasure "Asriel do I have to order you?"

Asriel wanted to look away he did not want to displease him "Yes Adelram." Adelram smiled "Good!" He looked over to Camila "Now Asriel, tell me why you have an interest in this woman." Asriel smiled and pointed "She can play the violin. Really well actually." Asriel looked up to his lord confusion now displaying on his features he looked down at him "So I dragged a woman across the city due to her musical talent?"

Asriel pressed further "But my lo- Adelram. She made me of all people feel something." Asriel could see his lord thinking for a moment he called out to Camila "Camila!"Camila shot up "Ye-yes?" Asriel watched his lord pace the room when he spoke his tone is flat "Camila. Asriel tells me you have some talent with the violin. I wish you to play for me."

Asriel could see Camila is nervous what his lord said next made her even more so "I do hope you are as good. I have never been into music." His lord stopped pacing and folded his arms in front of Camila.

Camila got in position to play the violin. She closed her eyes and remained silent for a moment then she started to play. The sound that came from the instrument made Asriel feel whole again. Like his lord he is not exactly interested in music but hearing her play. He could feel her emotion each time she moved the bow over the string.

In the song he could feel her sadness, her anger and joy oddly enough. Asriel looked up to his lord he can see he is no longer folding his arms. He is utterly captivated by what he is hearing. Camila stopped after a few minutes. Asriel could see his lord is stunned he took him a few moments to speak "That was... I never heard anything like it."

Camila gave a small bow "I am glad you like it." Asriel smiled he is glad his lord enjoyed it he did wonder what everyone else would think of her music. As he thought this he heard a thud on the door. Asriel walked over to inspect the noise he opened his room door to see Silas falling forward slightly into the room along with Jedrick.

Asriel moved to the side to avoid being crushed as they toppled forward, Asriel looked out in the hallway to see that Marthas and the Astartes Noxus standing in the corridoor also. Silas and Jedrick quickly got up, Jedrick stretched "Adelram, I just wanted to you know check up on you."
Silas walked up to Camila and grabbed one of her shoulders as he said firmly "Play again. you must." Asriel watched his lord push Silas back slightly causing him to release his grip "She will play more later. Now are all of you here just because of the music? Or are you here for something important?" Silas sighed in annoyance "You get all the good ones."

Marthas and Noxus stepped into the room, Jedrick glowered at Marthas "I thought you weren't interested in music?" Marthas shrugged "Music is a part of war. In the past music was used to issue orders and boost the morale of men." Jedrick pointed at Marthas and shouted "You are just making this up as you go along aren't you! Admit it! You are just making excuses for you to enjoy the music!" Marthas ignored Jedrick and walked up to Camila he smiled as he said "How about you come into battle with us? Of course you will stay back I am quite sure everyone will fight harder listening to you play. Plus you could get some inspiration..."

Asriel smiled, Camila is having the desired effect also overall it would help decrease the slave decline rate. Asriel could see his lord is getting slightly annoyed he creased his brow "I see so everyone is here for the music. She will play later now get out." Silas shook his head "Adelram. Just one more. Just one." Noxus interjected "Indeed it would not much to ask to hear one more."

Asriel folded his arms "My lord I am quite sure Camila would not mind playing one more?" Asriel looked over to her she nodded, Asriel could see she seemed happy that they seemed so absorbed by her music Camila said "I don't mind playing again." Jedrick laughed "See Adelram? She does not mind!" Asriel watched his lord sigh "Very well."

Camila got into position and placed her bow on the string and played another song. Silas removed his helmet as she did so even Jedrick. Their eyes lit up as she played, Asriel even caught the sound of a sniffle from Noxus. Marthas closed his eyes to absorb the sound of music.
Asriel smiled to see his lord enjoying the music, Meliva coiled slightly "She is good can't wait to see her take her gift further." Asriel had to agree with Meliva he could not wait to see how she will handle her talent down the line.
   
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I like it. Nice to see th war and is getting some new flavour.

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lliu wrote:
I like it. Nice to see th war and is getting some new flavour.


Aye, the war is moving on now quite excited to get at it finally. Plus I get the feeling I am terrible at fight scenes so this will be good practice!

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Chapter 17

Jacob sat at his desk in his personal office. The person he is about to call may damn this world to elimination his "friend" has been a great help in the past he recalled when he first met him when his regiment was called to pacify Athor.
Jacob looked at the screen on his desk he ensured the communication line is secure he would not take his call or give information if he is not certain the line is secure. Jacob turned on the device he waited the screen displayed static for a minute until a voice came through. The voice is heavily modulated.

The voice asked "Pass phrase?" Jacob cleared his throat "nintiy nine and nintiy three. The emperor watches over those who does his will." Jacob wondered if he said it correctly the voice did not respond whether he got it correct or not.
The static faded he then saw a familiar face he smiled as he said "Belaris Fane, inquisitor of the ordo malleus." Belaris raised his eyebrow "Why have you called me Jacob?" Jacob knew he is quite busy due to the events happening in the galaxy but he might be the key to ending this war. Jacob looked at Belaris features it is slightly obscured due to the red hood but he can see his face looked aged, his hair is grey and he could see a lack of sleep.

Jacob stroked his chin "I need information." Belaris frowned "I refuse." Jacob creased his brow "I haven't even asked for what type of information I wanted." Belaris shook his head in annoyance "Considering how many times we have worked together you should be aware of what sort of information I handle. Information that can stain the soul of the righteous." Jacob narrowed his eyes "I am currently fighting in the dark against an unknown element Belaris. I need something, anything!"

Jacob could see Belaris is thinking he sighed "What do you need? Explain the situation in detail" Jacob smiled "You are aware that we are fighting two heretic forces yes?" Belaris nodded, Jacob continued his explanation "I believe there is a third party prolonging this war for whatever reason. I want to know if this planet had any strange history surrounding it. Or if not I want information or memoirs on the previous generals killed on this planet."

Jacob could see Belaris chuckling. Jacob frowned "What is so funny?" Belaris smiled, Jacob did not know what to think with that expression Belaris rarely if ever smiled. Belaris stopped laughing "You would make a good inquisitor Jacob." Jacob smiled "Well the emperor wanted me to be a general of the Astra Militarum Belaris." Belaris smirked "So, you wish to know of any strange happenings on the planet?" Jacob nodded.

Jacob could see that Belaris is thinking carefully and soon began starting at him. Jacob licked his lips in antcipation. For some reason Jacob got the feeling Belaris is now gazing into his soul assessing him to see if he is worthy. Belaris then said "Have you ever heard of the angel?" Jacob thought on it for a moment he heard of the conscripts whispering about such a thing. That it is a bringer of judgement an envoy of the emperor. Considering what he has seen in his long career it is most likely hogwash or the conscripts don't have the whole story.
Jacob nodded slightly "I have in the briefest details, conscripts whisper about it behind our backs like we can't hear." Belaris sighed "You should have them executed, now to remain on topic. He exists." Jacob furrowed his brows "Really? What gives you that idea?" Belaris tapped his chin "I went over some old reports. In the past this planet had several large criminal empires. Over a few years they all vanished every trace eliminated."

Jacob raised his eyebrow in disbelief "Impossible?! By just one person?!" Belaris nodded "Indeed. Whoever did this knows how to cover their tracks well. Of course the after effect of the actions of this "angel" caused crime to plummet to near 0%" Jacob sat back in his chair "So the question is whether this "angel" is on our side or not." Belaris shook his head "I believe this figure is not on our side."

Jacob frowned "What makes you think that Belaris?" Jacob could tell Belaris is folding his arms as he spoke "At first one criminal empire rose to prominence, soon they were eliminated. Soon after that nobles started dying going by autopsy reports they were killed in a brutal fashion." Belaris sighed "Plus the fact this person is prolonging the war in the shadows. If he is truly of the emperor's will he will be in the light aiding us not hiding within the darkness. Plus everyone sent to investigate this angel has vanished."

Jacob leaned forward "I see. What can we do then?" Belaris cleared his throat "I was going to go investigate this angel but I am needed on Athor. I have went through the memiors of the third Lord general posted to your position. It's quite... enlightning." Jacob's eyes went wide "Can I have his memiors?" Belaris began turning away "It's already being transfered to this device." Jacob watched the communication feed suddenly die.

Jacob could see something being transferred he smiled as he said under his breath "Perhaps we can finally gain victory..."

Adelram walked with Asriel, they are going to visit Caius's workshop on the fourth floor the nearer they got to his abode the sound of machinery increased. They reached the end of the hall. They stood in front of two double doors.
Adelram folded his arms "So my new gear is here?" Asriel nodded "Yes my lord." Adelram pushed the doors open they both entered. The room is extremely large various machinery and devices lay on the desks and tables. Adelram raised his eyebrow "Asriel how did you secure this place by the way? I mean the apartment complex itself" Asriel looked up to him "It belonged to a contact that shifted narcotics. People also slummed in the building. Families looking to get by and the families of those who are in debt to the gang." Adelram narrowed his eyes "You did not answer the question."

Adelram watched Asriel looking up slightly thinking he smiled "I remember now. I killed them, I locked each of the entrances and killed everyone in the building. The wisps you see on the fourth floor is due to the murder that took place here. The gang itself gave up reclaiming the building due to believing it to be haunted."

Adelram chuckled slightly he might have to ask him in detail of what he did that day, Caius soon walked over his mechanical tendrils moving in the air "Astartes Adelram. Have you come to see my finest work?" Adelram looked at Caius and nodded "Yes I am. Is it ready?" Caius released a stream of noises. Asriel shrugged "He seems excited."

Caius turned away "Please follow me." Adelram followed Caius he could also see Asriel seemed excited he tried to hide it but he could see it clear as day. They went to the end of the room and on the stand he saw it. His new armour, his old suit of Power armour is mark IV but the suit in front of him seemed to be a mix of Mark IV and mark VII with some adjustments.

The armour had a long black robe. Parts of the armour were pink and purple in colouration. Adelram noted dark tongue runes carved on various sections of the armour. Adelram also noted leather straps hanged from parts of the armour also. Caius gestured to the armour "The combination of machine and warp. Please ready yourself to be outfitted."

Adelram removed his robe, Caius called over the servitors and they got to work putting on his armour. As each piece is placed on his body he could feel the brands on his body tingling most likely reacting to the runes on the armour. He smiled since arriving on this planet he felt ready that he could take anything on.

Finally they attached censers at his waist and they had one attached on his backpack. Finally a helmet with two daemonic horns is placed on his head. He blinked to dismiss the start up display on his tactical feed. Caius and the servitors stepped back.

Adelram flexed his hands "Right. Anything else?" Asriel nodded "Caius do you have the other thing?" Caius cocked his head sideways "I see. It shall be retreieved." Adelram watched caius release a stream of binary at a serivtor. The servitor walked to a desk and bought back a sheathed sword.

The servitor handed Caius a large blade he gripped it with his tendrils and walked over to Adelram. Adelram looked at the blade "My new sword?" Asriel nodded "Yes. I had caius make it to my exact specifications." Adelram gripped the blade he unsheathed it instead of the normal runes it had iconography instead as he looked down the blade it seemed like a story of sorts.

He could see a tree, and a man reaching for an apple. In the grass he could see a snake leering it's head up. He could not help but smile, he sheathed the blade and attached it to his waist. He nodded at Caius "You have done fine work."

Adelram could see his head moving in what he assumed to be approval. Adelram turned to Asriel "So now it's time to face Sebastian yes? To get back what's mine." Asriel nodded "Yes my lord."

Adelram moved to leave, Asriel followed behind him. As they exited Caius's workshop Adelram could see Jedrick waiting in the hallway. Jedrick walked over "New armour. Looks good." Adelram could tell Jedrick wanted something he sighed "What is it Jedrick?" Jedrick took a breath as he said firmly "I want you to fight me."

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Chapter 18

Adelram is confused he wondered why Jedrick has decided to do such a thing. He stood across from him they are having their "battle" in Asriel's practice area it is a few miles from the apartment complex. Adelram could see it is a rather open area surrounded by buildings. There are scorch marks on the walls and ground detailing Asriel's many hours in this area.

He looked over to the "spectators", Asriel is here due to any serious injury that may occur. Marthas, Noxus and Silas were here to see a spectacle largely. In his eyes Marthas tried to show disinterest but he knows he wants to see how he has developed in the last month.

Adelram placed his eyes on Jedrick he is in battle stance holding his axe and dagger. By his body language he is serious about this but he could tell he seems... frustrated by something. He could tell that much when he returned to the apartment complex. Adelram called out while drawing his blade "Do we have to do this?" As he said this Jedrick ignored his words and charged at him.

Asriel watched Jedrick charging to his lord he had an idea why this is happening but he did not understand what Jedrick wants out of this. Silas had a large grin on his face "Who do you think will win Noxus?" Noxus scoffed "If you have seen what Adelram could do he could end this instantly." Marthas tapped the haft of his weapon on the ground "Of course that is clear enough for anyone to see. Now my concern is why Jedrick is doing this." Asriel frowned he wondered why no one can understand why this is happening. He looked up to Marthas as he said "He feels threatened." Marthas looked at him in surprise.

Adelram swatted away his strike with his blade, Adelram cursed under his breath he is truly serious. Jedrick moved to strike again this time aiming for his neck, Adelram dodged back in surprise. Adelram held his arms out in concern "Jedrick what are you hoping to gain from this?! I can see you are upset about something." Jedrick ran towards him again hacking away at him. Adelram knew that he had to wait for an opportunity to strike he found it easier to dodge attacks due to travelling through a warzone with his power armour.

Adelram raised his sword to push away an axe strike, the axe clashed with his blade he pushed the blow back, Jedrick readied his dagger to parry his incoming attack. Adelram raised his free hand he pushed forward, Jedrick went flying across the field. His power armour made sparks as he skidded across the ground.

Adelram watched Jedrick sit up and punch the ground in anger he snarled, in that moment when he snarled he knew something is wrong. Jedrick glowered "So you are strong! Dammit! Dammit!" Adelram felt a sense of confusion filling him as he said "Well yes. After what Marthas put me through I became stronger." Adelram could see Jedrick is getting more visibliy angry he rose slowly as he said firmly "So I guess he will lead our forces when you take back your warband?"

Adelram confusion increased "No Jedrick st-" Jedrick interuppted him "Enough! It's clear he is better at this! What could I do for you?! When you were a shell?! Empty! Broken! I could do nothing!" Adelram mouth suddenly felt dry for some reason why is this happening now? "Jedrick my bro-" Jedrick snarled "Enough! You call me that but do you really believe it!? Does anyone!? When you charged that wall on cadia! When you died! The talk of mutiny sickened me! Yet I did nothing! I held my hands! If just if wringed my hands around Sebastian's neck...."

Jedrick gave a small laugh "I wonder truly.. If me caring so much about you is something you put into me during that time..."

Asriel looked at everything unfolding before them yet Asriel could understand Jedrick somewhat. Thinking on it they been together for so long. He personally felt angry when he saw his lord as a shell. He wondered what was Jedrick thinking during that time? Perhaps he blames himself most of all? Asriel looked up to Silas who seemed concerned "Is something wrong?" Silas stroked his chin "Those two are quite odd." Asriel raised his eyebrow "How so?" Silas shrugged and sighed "When Jedrick first joined us I assumed he is a simple pawn being moved around by Adelram. Adelram was not liked back then he needed someone that people would rally behind."

Asriel scratched his head at Silas's words. Noxus nodded in agreement "Indeed many pressed Jedrick to take control of the warband he refuses every time. Who knows he might still be a pawn. I have never seem them be close in any form." As Silas and Noxus were in discussion, he knew that he could not exactly agree with what they are saying. He thought on his lord's special place his garden on the old ship. He allows Jedrick to be there no other Astartes have seen it if he did not care why would he allow him there? Or perhaps maybe it was to get Jedrick to trust him even more?

Asriel looked to his lord, the air around him is now distorting slightly, the runes on the armour began to glow and the sword ignited with eldritch flame. Asriel grew anxious with what has just occured.

Adelram felt upset angry even at his words. He felt the brands on his body burning he readied himself. Jedrick shouted "That's it! I might get my glorious death here!" Adelram held the grip of his blade tighter as he said those words. He charged his speed surprised Jedrick he could tell that much from his stance. His blade clashed with Jedrick's axe they began pushing each other back. Jedrick leaned in "So Marthas has made you this strong?" Jedrick chuckled "The old you. The old you had terrible blade sense and movement, now I can see no holes. No openings."

Adelram scoffed "Oh you are that impressed then? Perhaps I should go ask Marthas for more advice then..." as he said those words Jedrick pushed harder Adelram could feel the force he is placing on his weapon, Jedrick started to push him back. Jedrick snarled "You know I could kill him?!" Adelram retorted "Oh really? For one Jedrick he does not act like a fool and second I recall he was a Marshal and you were... what was it? A Blood claw? Isn't that like a scout within the space wolves? Also watching him fight.." Jedrick roared in rage "I knew it! I knew it! What are we to you?! You were alone when I joined you. Were you hated that much that you had to create brothers?!"

Adelram narrowed his eyes at him using some of his psychic power he pushed Jedrick back. For some reason those barbed words angered him. Adelram sheathed his blade, Jedrick glowered "Are you giving up?!" Adelram shook his head he raised both hands as he looked at Jedrick and made a grabbing motion. Jedrick froze unable to move.

Adelram made a lifting motion, Jedrick floated in the air as he reached a respectable height, Adelram bought his hands down Jedrick smashed onto the ground breaking the concerate. He repeated this several times until Jedrick stopped moving. Adelram walked over to Jedrick he moved slightly.

Adelram knelt down and removed his helmet. His face is bloodied, he did not see a face of anger or hatred just pure frustration. Adelram removed his own helmet and placed it down next to him. He wanted this conversation to be private as he said within Jedrick's mind "You are my brother Jedrick. The first why are you being this way?" Adelram watched Jedrick turning his head away slightly he seemed to catch on his intention as he said within his mind "I wanted to do something. This whole time all I did was watch. Watch Marthas take control of everything. Watch Asriel becoming stronger and finally watching Marthas change you."

Adelram frowned "Why should that bother you?" Jedrick looked to him and grit his teeth "I could do nothing to help you. When you came to us as a shell I wondered what could I have done? How can I fix this?" Adelram shook his head "Tell me bro-" Jedrick snarled and hissed out loud "Don't say it! We don't even share the same gene-sire." Adelram forced his reponse into his mind "You are." Jedrick frowned "But why?" Adelram gave Jedrick a small smile "Does it matter? You are a brother to me you are of the third. You know in the past when you joined us I thought you were annoying, juvenile and a fool someone I could use."

Jedrick looked utterly defeated in Adelram's eyes it's the first time he has even seen it as Jedrick said within his head "So what caused that to change?" Adelram stroked his chin "Well after a few weeks actually." Jedrick's eyes went wide "Really?! This must be a joke?!" Adelram shook his in disagreement "No. Out of everyone in the warband I found you reliable and enjoyable to talk to. I still think you are the most reliable."

Jedrick sighed as spoke out loud "Help me sit up." Adelram helped Jedrick sit up he also sat next to him. Jedrick smiled "So... did you still think I was reliable when in the past I charged a dreadnought and got my arm torn off?" Adelram blinked in surprise he found himself now talking normally with Jedrick "You still remember that?" Jedrick frowned "Well yeah I got my arm torn off you had to reattach it." Adelram laughed slightly "Well I was annoyed greatly but you did take out the dreadnought." Jedrick smiled "I also remembered when it happened you broke formation and was swearing as you charged down the battle field to get me."

Adelram scratched the back of his head "I don't recall swearing..." Jedrick looked directly at him "You did! I recall you said I was acting like a dumb dog. Along with.. what was the word for excreament as a curse in the language of Chemos? You said that along with head. Plus calling me a dumb bastard." Adelram creased his brow as the memory of the event returned.

Adelram folded his arms "So you feel better now?" Jedrick nodded "Yeah.. my body is aching everywhere though. I think some of my bones are broken." Adelram sighed "Well that's what you get for being an idiot.. to think such a thing after all w-" Jedrick suddenly interjected and mirrored his words "We've have been through so much." They looked at each other in surprise suddenly. Adelram chuckled slightly as he said under his breath "Indeed we have..."

Adelram looked forward he could see Asriel and the others running over. An Idea soon struck him he looked at Jedrick "So... Jedrick do you want to write my letter of challenge to Sebastian?" Jedrick gave a large grin showing his fangs "Can I write what I want?" Adelram looked at his grin how many times has he seen it now? Adelram smiled "Of course brother write what ever you want."

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Chapter 19


Sebastian sat on his throne in annoyance it's the fact that many Astartes within the warband has gone missing in such a short time frame which soured his mood. Gethus whole squad has not returned from their venture of gathering slaves. At the moment they are running out and many within the warband are becoming unsettled.

Dealing with the Death guard and ensuring they had enough slaves to enjoy their personal delights has started to become difficult. It perplexed him that Valirak has not returned either there is barely any threats to the south yet he heard nothing from him. Perhaps Noxus has taken Valirak's head? Sebastian bit his nail in anger as he hissed "No, Noxus is a coward and fool he would never do that."

He looked to his right another problem is who has taken the woman, two Astartes along with a pathetic slave found dead within his tent. Who or what could do such a thing. He knew those "three" do not have the skill set to do such a thing. Sebastian bit his tongue slightly drawing a small amount of blood. He closed his eyes as the coppery taste filled his mouth he found doing such a thing calmed him down slightly.

Suddenly he heard the tent door being opened and closed, he could hear the footsteps of several Astartes. He opened his eyes to see it is Marius, Sebastian leaned back in the throne "What is it Marius?" Marius looked to one of his kakophoni he gestured forward with his head. A noise marine threw forward a Astartes stripped of all his gear.

Sebastian looked down at the corpse then back up to Marius "What am I meant to be seeing?" Marius moved to the corpse and turned him over to his back. There is a written message carved into the back of corpse. Marius released a low rumble, Sebastian looked to Marius "You found him strung up? Near our camp?" Marius nodded.

Sebastian knew someone is trying to make a point It can't be the death guard they would spot them right away. Plus their stink would reveal their location. Sebastian leaned forward slightly and looked at the message. He traced his eyes down the back of the dead Astartes at the end of the message were coordinates.

Sebastian leaned back into his throne he narrowed his eyes at Marius "I assume you have read the message?" Marius nods he releases another low rumble from his mouth speaker, Sebastian glowered and slammed the arm of his throne "Of course I will face him! I know what the dark prince demands of his followers! I wonder why he chose that fool Jedrick to write this message! The message is a simple string of curses and derogatory insults at my superiority!"

Sebastian calmed himself he smiled "Adelram want's the warband back. He is weak the first time was to show how pathetic he actually was. Now? Now I will end him." Marius nods in approval as he released a screech from his speaker. Sebastian smiled "Indeed. I will show him the power of a true champion of the dark prince. He never understood our needs or what the dark prince required of us. Get the rhino's ready!"

Adelram waited he looked around the general area, it is a few miles away from their base but it's an open enough area for the challenge. He looked behind him Asriel, Noxus, Silas, Marthas and Jedrick waited near the truck. Adelram looked forward and calmly waited, he knew Sebastian will accept his pride won't allow him to refuse.

Adelram waited for a few more minutes he heard vehicles approaching in the distance he could see several rhino's coming towards them. Adelram smiled under his helmet,he could clearly see that Sebastian bought majority of the warband to this "event". The rhino's circled around them they stopped. Adelram looked around him he could see Astartes leaving the Rhino's several faces he recognised.

Finally the rhino in front of him out stepped his rival along with Marius and his squad. As he exited the rhino the warband cheered for Sebastian. As he walked towards him Adelram could hear them shouting for his death or for Sebastian to show him his place. Sebastian stopped a few paces away from him. Sebastian gave a wave and bade everyone to be quiet.

Adelram chuckled slightly he spread his arms out wide "Sebastian I am glad you accepted." Adelram could tell there is a small amount of confusion playing across his face most likely it's his voice. He is wondering what has changed. He did not seem surprised at his new wargear he is more concerned about what's underneath it.

Sebastian scoffed "I heard from Gethus that you screamed like a child when he broke your legs." The warband chuckled at that exclamation, Adelram shrugged "Well yes I did it was quite painful actually. Gethus breaking my legs was the first step on the path of my "new" want." Sebastian laughed "Oh really?! Is that the excuse you are using?! He shamed you Adelram. I shamed you."

Adelram listened to Sebastian laughing he nodded in agreement "You did shame me. Still I realised it was required." Sebastian stopped laughing his face now completely serious "What is there to learn from something like that?" Adelram removed his helmet he watched everyone flinch slightly. Some Astartes were in discussion others were looking away.

Adelram smiled as he did so the whispering increased "I learned much from my suffering Sebastian. Being tortured by Marius's sound waves, having my legs broken, falling into utter Despair and even losing my mark." Sebastian narrowed his eyes at him "You lost your mark, yes the dark prince has changed you but it's rare that the mark is ever returned." Adelram nodded in agreement "Indeed it is rare, that's why I have Marthas to thank for helping me get it back." Adelram stuck out his tongue, he could see Sebastian is now becoming visibly angry.
He slowly placed his helmet back on "Sebastian. Brother, I have learned much from the gift you gave me and for that I thank you. I realise that I cannot let you lead this warband into ruin." Sebastian shouted at him "You are still weak! You are still a fool!" Adelram replied calmly "Prove it then brother."

Sebastian drew his sword, Adelram drew his own blade and ignited it. The warband began cheering for Sebastian and Jeering at him. Adelram focused he generated a fireball and threw it at Sebastian. He dodged it with ease, Sebastian charged shouting "You still use the same old tricks! You have learned nothing!"

They clashed, Adelram matched Sebastian's strokes parrying and diverting away attacks that would kill him instantly if allowed through his guard. Adelram chuckled "I can feel it Sebastian you are still the same. Your needs are pitiful and your excess is small."

Sebastian smiled, he can see he has gotten better but in the end it's only been about a month. What can change in a month? He pressed his attacks harder, he can see Adelram is no longer parrying his strikes or blocking them. He now has to dodge, Sebastian grinned "I was right you are still weak!" Adelram did not retort his insult.

Sebastian chuckled "I shall end it now." Sebastian thought to use his master stroke feigning an opening and parrying away the strike leaving the opponent open. It all went together in his head. He let down his guard slightly, Adelram moved forward to strike. Sebastian could not help but smile showing his teeth. He parried knocking Adelram's strike back, Sebastian stepped in to imaple him through the gut his mind raced that Adelram will finally be gone. He will disappear, He will truly be superior within the eyes of the dark prince. A great sense of joy and pride swelled his chest
Sebastian blinked and suddenly Adelram's guard was up he then parries his strike with ease. All that joy vanished in an instant. That pride smashed into the dust. Adelram placed his free hand to his belt and drew a combat knife. The combat knife ignited, Sebastian stepped back slightly as Adelram said calmly "What's the matter brother? Are you worried?"

Sebastian bit his lip he charged again, Sebastian scowled Adelram is getting faster, he is parrying all his strikes perfectly. Sebastian soon found Adelram's attacks is getting through his guard small nicks from Adelram's blade and combat knife. As Adelram's weapons drew blood Sebastian could see small purple and pink wisps trailing along his armour and weapons. The wisps moved to the small traces of blood on his weapons.

Adelram stepped in towards him with a swift motion his attacks were like lightning, Sebastian could not keep up. Adelram is now outright breaking his guard, the wisp's trailed about him with each blade motion. Blade strokes were now making gashes in his armour as the blade entered his body he found himself freezing slightly due to the pain. The pain was not enjoyable there was no pleasure in it.

Sebastian tried to step back, he looked around the whole warband has eyes upon what is happening here. They seem far more entrapped by the spectacle Adelram is displaying. Sebastian shouted "I won't be beaten here!" He knew he had to end Adelram here he ignored his defense and went for an all out attack. Adelram casually turns the strike aside with his combat knife.

Sebastian felt time slowing down as his attack was diverted he recognised such a move he has seen it so many times before. He always did the same thing at the corner of his eye he looked at Jedrick. Sebastian looked back to Adelram who is now readying an attack a sick realisation came upon him his technique is far better. His blade work is better. His fighting skill perhaps even surpasses Jedrick.

Time returned to normal as Adelram made a quick cross cut with his blade. Sebastian felt a huge surge of pain in his chest. He has been cut before but this was different. The pain the agony he dropped his blade. He held his chest as it leaked blood he tried to step back but as soon as he took a step he found Adelram's sword at his neck. The flames surrounding the blade vanished it oddly felt cool at his neck.

Sebastian felt a strange emotion building in his chest he did not know what it was. His mind went over what just happened it's not possible. He shouted out loud "It's Impossible!"

Adelram held his blade at Sebastian's neck the cheering stopped, the jeering stopped. There was only a foreboding silence. Adelram looked at Sebastian shouting at it him. Adelram smiled "Tell me Sebastian what just happened?" Sebastian fell silent. Adelram nodded "Now Sebastian kneel. Sebastian looked at him his eyes full of venom "Never!"

Adelarm sighed he sheathed his combat knife and raised his hand. He moved his blade away from Sebastian's neck and pushed down with his free hand. Sebastian slowly moved to his knees then to his hands. Adelram could feel him struggling but it is futile. He did not even have to use his hand if he really wanted to.

Adelram sheathed his blade. He kept Sebastian in place "That is what you are Sebastian. That is your place." Sebastian grunted in pain as he shouted "Kill me! I knew it! You are weak!" Adelram sighed. Adelram looked around they enjoyed the duel but he could tell they don't seem exactly happy with the outcome.

Adelram looked to each of the warband's faces he closed his eyes for a moment and took a breath. He announced "Tell me brothers! Are you happy with how you are now?!" Several Astartes looked at each other and murmured slightly. Adelram nodded "You can see right in front of you! You can see the one that gave you all your "delights" your "joys" but in my eyes Sebastian ruined you!"

Adelram looked down to Sebastian still struggling to rise. Adelram continued "Do you want to know why I do what I do? Why I made every decision?! Look at each other! Tell me! Would our father be proud of what we are?! Would he be pleased with how we are walking the road of suffering!?" Adelram placed his gaze on the warband again he can see they are clearly listening "Do you think he would be impressed with us torturing mewling slaves?! Using our gifts to satisfy ourselves on small base things?!"

Adelram took another breath "This world! This planet should be screaming in agony! The people who refuse us should be slitting their throats at the prospect of us approaching! Our captain! Our Starlight king! Chased after our father like everyone else! That's all we do! Chase after small things! Chase to reach our father!" Adelram clenched both his fists "I want our father to turn his gaze to us! I want his attention! I refuse to go to him! I refuse to chase after him!"

Adelram looked around everyone is staring at him, the Astartes without helmets looked stunned. Marius walked towards him and stopped he looked down to Sebastian and then up to him. He did something that shocked Adelram. Marius said "I want the same thing. Show me this path Adelram." Marius turned to the warband "I want our father to hear our song of suffering and torment if I have to blast apart thousands of worlds I will do it."

Marius raised his hand "For our lord Adelram!" Slowly Astartes started to raise their hands chanting the same thing. Adelram looked to Marius and nodded. He nodded back he looked down to Sebastian who looked utterly defeated. The cheering died down after a moment.
Marius looked to Sebastian he released a low screech. Adelram shook his head "I won't kill him." Marius raised his eyebrow in confusion. Adelram looked Marius in the eye "He is my brother. He is simply misguided and I have forgiven him." Marius eyes shot wide in surprise, Sebastian laughed "See he is still weak.." Adelram chuckled "Sebastian. You misunderstand I have forgiven you that does not mean I am not going to punish you."

Adelram turned to Asriel "Asriel! Come over!" Asriel walked over and bowed "Yes my lord." Adelram nodded "I am going to punish my foolish brother. You will heal him to keep him from dying." Asriel bowed again "Very well." Adelram turned to Sebastian and kneeled down he tapped his cheek "By the way Sebastian I was holding back. Now I shall give you the gift of suffering." Adelram lifted Sebastian's face slighty and what he saw in his eyes is fear.
   
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Wonderful. I hope to see the warband return to a galactic scale.


Hmmmm I wonder.
   
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Chapter 20

Uriah stood in front of Isabella's mansion door to him it seemed too gaudy which matched her personality. The door had lined sliver along with gold snake iconography he knocked and waited the door opened and a maid greeted him. She gave a small curtsy as she said "My lady is waiting in her private garden. Please come in." Uriah walked in he did not know why he accepted such an offer of a meeting but it could come out in his favour considering what she has asked.

The maid guided him to Isabella's living room as he walked he noticed Isabella's house had a strange scent to it. The hall had rows upon rows of paintings lining the walls. Some were fairly mundane others quite.. illcit. Being in this house reminds him of his late sister. As they passed through the living room he could see several wine cabinets filled with aged wide.

Uriah could see maids and butlers at work tidying the living room but in his eyes the living room already looked pristine. The maid escorting him lead him through the living room, they stopped at two see through sliding doors. He could see Isabella in the garden drinking a glass of wine by herself at a small table.

The maid bowed slightly "My lady is waiting for you." She opened the doors and gestured Uriah through. As he walked into the garden for some reason instead of the clean air he could still smell a similar but stronger scent that filled the inside of her mansion. Uriah walked over and sat with Isabella. As always Uriah could see she is wearing somewhat revealing clothing looking at her reminded him of his sister even more.

Isabella gave him a coy smile "It's good that you have taken interest in my offer Uriah" Uriah stroked his chin "I have taken interest but that does not mean I have agreed to it yet." Isabella poured herself another glass "You should agree it would benefit us both." Uriah tried to keep his face neutral he did not want to give away any sense of emotion with his response "To join our noble houses? Now let's say we do this who will benefit the most from this?" Isabella sipped some of her wine she licked her lips as she placed the glass down "We will both benefit considering you are the male this new joint house will be in your name."

Uriah folded his arms. He knew it's likely that she is going to "offer" the planetary governor position to him. Hence why she has said the new house will be in his name. Uriah still could not shake the feeling that she is like a snake. Also the rumours of men and women entering her mansion and vanishing.

He played the events of that encounter within his mind. His meeting with skull face the fact that his family line is tainted. Thinking on his dead sister and brother he could see why it would appear that way. Isabella reminded him of his siblings this is something he repeated within his mind so perhaps there is a possibility she is tainted?

How far has this corruption may have possibly gone on for? Could the unknown element be playing the houses or even the imperial forces against each other? Skull face might of actually visited Isabella. Still what is clear to him is that he cannot trust her and he refuses to be under the thumb of someone else.

Uriah smiled "I thank you for the offer Lady Isabella but I must refuse." Uriah watched Isballa giving a large frown "I see. May I ask why?" Uriah narrowed his eyes "I personally wish to find a wife of my own choosing my Lady. I thank you kindly for the offer again but I must refuse."
Isabella tutted slightly "Uriah, you should reconsider." Uriah raised his eyebrow "May I ask why?" Isabella gave him a gentle smile "I know you can feel it. The change on the wind." Uriah did not want to display any confusion in this instance to do so would be weakness "Change? What have you noticed Lady Isabella?" Isabella leaned back slightly in her chair "Do you think we are going to win the war?"

Uriah knew at that moment she might have a connection with skull face "Why do you say that Isabella? You should be careful of such talk." Isabella looked away slightly "Two traitor forces that have made no gains, including ourselves and now a unknown element is at play? Look at how long this war is going for whoever is in the background is delaying the conclusion for a reason."

Uriah's mind drifted to the regicide game with skull face. How he utterly surrounded his pieces and defeated him he wondered what if that is the current situation? Perhaps skull face visited him because the end game is approaching? The fact he infiltrated his mansion with ease skull face could kill him at any moment. Considering how heavily guarded the noble area is and the mansions of the three themselves.
How far is skull faces reach? As he thought those words he remembered his mother she died at the age of 88. She never told him her history but she did tell him that her luck started to change when she was about 18 years of age. If he belived skull face he has been planning this for the past 70 years?

A bead of sweat ran down his forehead it's rare that he ever felt like this his whole life his whole family line was moved about for his whim? What reason would skull face have to do such a thing? He looked up to Isabella who seemed somewhat calm. Uriah spoke out loud in disbelief "I have set the stage to make it so."

Isabella raised her eyebrow at his proclamation "Is something wrong Uriah?" Uriah quickly rose from his seat and gave a small bow "Apologies let me think on your offer I have to leave now." Uriah rushed out thinking as he said under his breath "There is no way..."

Jacob sat in his office, night has set in and he had his table lamp on to illuminate the work he is doing. He had the data from his communication device extracted and placed to paper everything he handled personally considering the nature of the information. After he was done he had the device destroyed.

The third lord general posted to this planet had some ancestry connected to this planet his name Is Lucas Abnov. Jacob started with the first memoir entry

Entry 1


I have been posted to this position after my victory on another planet during this dark age.I heard news of the previous lord general's being murdered within their offices. The emperor guides me I have no fear this is the home of my mother and I will see it free.
The first thing I did was place the civilians in a specific area for housing and had the rest of the inner city placed in the hands of the imperial guard for various uses. I sent out many scouting teams to asses and gather information on the size of the forces we are facing.


Jacob stroked his chin his mind drifted to the map, it's through old reports that he put that together it seems Lucas was the one who set the foundation. He moved to the second entry.

Entry 2

I have observed the traitor forces, I have a good idea of the area's they control. I also decided to up the guard on the noble quarter. The previous general's were killed how one lone assassin could get to the Lord General's quarters and kill him is beyond me.
We are steadily making gains on the traitor forces since I decided to change strategy slightly. We would wait for them to hit each other let them wear themselves down and finally move in and take the area for ourselves.


Jacob nodded in approval he could see it would be a good stratergy it's clear to him that the traitor forces are fighting each other they could save manpower and lives by attacking them after they wear each other down.

Entry 3


For some reason we have been losing our bases, whenever we take an area the whole team suddenly vanish. When we go to investigate there are signs of combat but no corpses. Only dried blood could be seen on the ground. I have seen how the traitor forces fight it's always a masscare of body parts or a sense of decay has gripped the general area.
I will have to revise our strategy
.

Jacob licked his lips he is facing a similar problem he guessed all the lord generals faced this problem but he is the one who most likely made the most gains considering his memoirs were taken by his "friend".

Entry 4

Now our scouting teams have started to vanish. Someone must know our strategy or leaking it. So I have decided to commit to a purge of personel and civilians. It was a grim day but nesscary I had the feeling someone was leaking our plans. I also put the nobles under a extremely strict curfew of 16:00 hours.
This did not go over well but it was necessary. I also had the men at the gates cycled out every day.


Jacob held his chin sometimes purges are necessary but he also decided to purge his forces also. Plus he put the nobles under strict curfew he would be hated by many but he could understand why he has done so.

Entry 5

It seems my plan is working yes my decision has ruffled feathers but it seems to be working we are pushing back the traitor's steadily and enlarging our area of control. We have to advance more slowly due to the purges and because the men at the gates are cycled out it won't be exactly clear where the men are heading out to.
Still at night I feel a strange breeze at my neck.


Jacob went over the entry again he knew this must be the point the "angel" got involved it must be.

Entry 6

This will not be an easy entry to write. For what has just occured but this might be the key to ending the war.
I sat in my office at night going over strategy and the breeze at my neck would not go away. I left to grab myself a cup of coffe and as I returned I found my window opened. I moved to close it and as I turned I saw someone sitting in front of my desk. The person wore a skull helmet and a black cape that seemed to melt into the darkness strange feathers also seemed to float around it.

I assumed this must be the person who killed the last two lord general's if he got past the guard with ease I would not be able to kill him here. If I called out it's most likely he will kill me and leave. Considering he has not done so yet I decided to gain information he is here to talk.
As I sat in my chair I simply asked him what he wanted he told me that he simply grew interested in me. In my stratergy and what I am doing. That I am the first to force him to adapt. I then asked a second question I asked him is he a part of the two traitor forces that we are facing he gave a firm no. He told me he also has an interest in keeping both traitor forces off balance.
I felt my mouth drying at the time as I asked my third question I asked the intruder whether he is going to kill me he simply said maybe. I then blinked and suddenly he was gone. It was like he vanished.


Jacob ran his hands through his hair it's clear the "angel" decided to kill him since Lucas has departed this world to the emperor's side. Jacob ran through his head that he is the 10th lord general to be stationed on this planet.

Entry 7

Again he visited me he told me again that he was impressed that I started to pull conscripts from the civilians. The fact that I also put the conscripts through a rigorous program to check that they can be trusted to do their jobs. Most would stuff a lasgun in their hands give them some basic training and send them on their way.

I knew in that moment that he most likely has many eyes within the inner city itself. One thing that suprised me though is that he started to talk about the time he killed nobles or toppled the criminal empires. He made note that I am a native of this planet and he wonders if I heard the stories. I told him I did and that the actions of the angel is almost held in reverance on this planet. I did point out that it's only on my mother's side and that I am half cadian.
Still he asked whether I believe the stories? That many whisper that the angel will come to smite the enemies of mankind. I told him that the angel is evil and a simple murderer and most likely a heretic. My "guest" seemed to almost nod in approval. I pushed further to ask why he keeps visiting to me. He then told me he wanted to understand the sort of man I am before he kills me.


Jacob knew in this moment that the angel is a force of evil a insidious sort of evil to drag on a war for this long. The question is why he is doing this

Entry 8

Now for some reason we are no longer making any gains. Advancement has ground to a halt it's almost a slugging fest out there between all forces. Also patrols go missing, whole squads of cadian veterans go missing.
He visited me in the night again. I asked how is he doing this he simply told me that actions have consequences. I asked the "angel" to elaborate. He told me that he does indeed have eyes within the city. He actually has many eyes in the city now due to my actions. He had eyes even among the soldiers.

He knows when they will move. He knows what I am planning and which area's I am planning to take. He tells me that before that I was right that the angel is evil. Yet he pointed out that I am also evil. I retroted at that those on the side of the emperor do no evil. He simply told me to tell that to the people who were purged. Many of those people had families. The soldiers had strong nit brotherhoods that were torn apart.
He left with the words to not underestimate the evil that one would do for the sake of family and friends.


Jacob held the paper tightly. He could see that Lucas did nothing wrong sometimes things like that are nesscary. Jacob noted that there are only two pages left.

Entry 9

I decided to do another purge this time it targeted anyone connected to those who were linked to those purged in the past. I have also decided to make a "donation" to the Schola Progenium young children of the noble families and those living in the civilian area. People raged at my decision but I made it regardless. Going over the war strategy again the same thing keeps repeating. Our men vanishing neither side advancing or gaining anything.

The angel came again he questioned me on my decision to send the children away. I told him that it's for the sake of the future. The angel pressed his point saying that I have given up winning the war with that decision. He also noted that my decision to do another purge has landed even more people into his pocket. Even some nobles due to their children being taken they have started to aid him

He told me he has now grown bored of me as he relaxed in the chair at the front of my desk. I personally did not care for his boredom I am not here to entertain him. I did ask him why is he engaging with me in discussion. Before departing in usual fashion he told me that he is using me as a warning. I wonder how he is going to do such a thing?


Jacob hoped to learn something but it seems he got a general summary of the angel more than anything. He knows he is important or a possible key and that he is not on the side of emperor that is clear enough. Jacob looked at the last entry it seems only half done.

Entry 10


Tonight as I write this I feel a chilling breeze at my neck. I can feel the hairs on my neck standing on end.
Still things are turning out even worse. My men are going awol, squads are still vanishing and no progress is being made. I look around me and I don't know who to trust. Everyone could be a spy. Even my own advisors could be in with the enemy. I don't even know whether the communication staff might also be working for the angel. I wonder sometimes is this truly divine punishment?
Even now I wonder who is the angel working for? What does he hope to gain by sabotaging everyone? Prolonging this saga or despair, pain, agony and death? I-


Jacob had a grim thought while writing this entry is when Lucas most likely died. Jacob recalled the men being excuted for desertion. It's still quite an issue something he is trying to fix. Reading Lucas's word's a thought crossed his mind that this issue might of been happening since the war started.

Even so Jacob has thought on doing a purge since every movement of the army is being predicted since reading Lucas's words he now knows doing such a thing would be futile. Jacob strangly seemed at a loss of what to do. Most of what Lucas tried he was going to do. He wondered did every general in the past do the same thing?

Jacob placed the paper on the desk trying to think of a possible stratergy.

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Chapter 21

Noxus sat in the rhino excitement is gripping him he did not care if he is physically displaying it to everyone but finally they are going to deal with the Death guard. Soon as Adelram took control he announced that they are going to end them to everyone's surprise. Noxus looked around the rhino. Adelram sat in silence, Jedrick is sharpening his axe and Marthas looked to be praying. Silas took the skies with his raptors. Noxus thought about Silas for a moment he found it odd how eagerly his raptors decided to follow him again. Marius and his noise marines have a rhino of their own he disliked riding with them since they constantly sing on the way to battle. He enjoyed the fine arts of music but not Marius's kind.

Noxus looked at Marthas' weapon for some reason he liked staring at it. If he stared at it long enough he could hear a faint song. Noxus leaned back in his seat one thing that puzzled him is that Adelram did not bring his creature with him. Noxus eyed Adelram he could not tell what he is thinking now before he was rather predictable.

Noxus asked "Adelram. Where is your crea- I mean Asriel. I saw him in discussion with you after you were done tormenting Sebastian." Adelram looked at him directly his blue eye lenses shimmering Adelram said "He has gone to the inner city to prepare it for us. Asriel called it the "end game." Marthas gave a small laugh "knowing his imagination I wonder what he is going to do."

Noxus gave a thought to what exactly the creature is going to do. Considering he has a neverborn within him and a greater shard at that. It's clear he wields power since Adelram tore off Sebastian's skin with his psychic powers and Asriel repaired it in a few minutes with ease. Sebastian's "punishment" lasted almost an hour reducing Sebastian to a mere shell. Even so Sebastian still had that arrogant look about him even though he now rarely speaks. He also recalled that Adelram had Sebastian stripped of his wargear and had him chained up. Right now he is being guarded by the tech priest Caius, he has his servitors mounted with heavy guns that is trained on Sebastian 24/7.

Noxus sighed he itched to get to fighting to his surprise Adelram began speaking "Noxus." Noxus perked up "Yes?" Adelram held the chin of his helmet slightly "Do tell me how did Sebastian secure these Rhino's?" Noxus thought on his question he shrugged "These are actually are our old Rhino's we found them at various parts of the city. I guess not only people were sent here." Adelram nodded in understanding.

Noxus moved to ask Adelram a question there is a specific reason why Sebastian has not moved to destroy the death guard and he wondered if Adelram has the means to defeat them. Noxus folded his arms as he asked "Adelram, you are aware of the defences of the Death guard? Do you have the means to get past it?"

Adelram removed his helmet and smiled at him, Noxus flinched he hated when he does that, Adelram looked out of the driver's window "I do. Still I will need everyone's help to do so." Noxus raised his eyebrow in confusion "So wha-" Suddenly the rhino halted. Adelram placed his helmet back on and moved to get up "Right everyone. Let's deal with our cousins."

Noxus stepped out of the rhino he could see the whole warband is here. Looking around this area of the city it had strange growths. Tentacles, boils and pus oozing on buildings and as he took a step a strange green like substance sticks to his feet. He could even see flowers bellowing out a strange green mist.

He soon looked forward and saw it a strange green wall of swirling green mist. He heard rumours in the old camp from Astartes who ventured this far but has never seen it personally he heard stories of how the warband tested the wall with slaves those who get too close simply disintegrate. He could also see thousands upon thousands of flies circling the mist. Adelram stopped next to him gazing at the wall "Asriel has detailed the specifics of this "wall" to me. I can deal with it considering the sorcerer who placed it here is now dead. Still it's more of a dome than a wall." Noxus turned to Adelram "Which Sorcerer?" Adelram did not answer perhaps it's something he did not want to talk about.

Noxus looked to the wall again "How can we be sure that we can beat whoever is on the other side?" Adelram walked forward slightly and placed his hands around his back "We can handle it. Asriel scouted beyond the wall he warded himself to do so he has said that the Death guard actually are not great in number. A bulk of their forces is actually the humans of this city." Noxus thought on what he just heard he did notice that whenever they fought the death guard they had a great number of cultists. The issue is that even if they kill their masters the cultists make poor slaves due to all the unnatural diseases they are carrying. It became policy to kill and destroy everything touched by the Death guard.

Adelram suddenly drew his blade to Noxus' surprise he ignites it, Adelram walked forward a few paces and turns to everyone. He pointed his blade at the wall Adelram announced "I am going to tear down the edifices of the plague god! His power will not hold sway here any longer! Yet I will need time! Time all of you will give me!" Everyone released a cheer. Noxus looked around he did not cheer he is still not sure how exactly Adelram is going to tear it down. Caution has always served him well it's what kept him alive so far.
Adelram walked back to the rhino, Noxus can see everyone getting into position. Noxus drew his sword with a flourish. He can see everyone is eager a proper battle is approaching. Behind him he can hear Adelram starting to chant. Noxus focused on what is front of him since anything can happen. This place is filled with the power of the plague god and they will have to be prepared for that.

Noxus waited all he could hear is Adelram chanting and the buzzing of the flies. The unnatural boils on the buildings popping. Noxus closed his eyes thinking that perhaps this might be his moment. He is within Adelram's circle. He is his own marine he does not follow anyone. Everyone will be watching for potential stars.

Noxus opened his eyes as he heard a gurgled chant. The droning of prayer, suddenly a tide of cultists pour out of the wall of mist. Jedrick shouts an order"Open fire! Don't let them get close!" Havoc's and Marius' noise marines begin firing into the crowd of cultists. Heads exploding, limbs torn off and those hit by the sound waves are reduced to a red mist.

Those of their number who had bolters began rapid firing into the tide of cultists. Noxus can see several cultists heading straight towards him. He held his blade with both hands he waited he had to do this at the right moment. Noxus counted 4 cultists all holding plague touched knives.
Noxus took several slow breaths as they got close he swung his sword sideways bisecting all 4 cultists in a clean stroke. He can see Jedrick annihilating any cultists that seem to get close to the havoc's. Marthas kills cultists three at a time with each weapon movement. Noxus can see That Marthas' movements were... unnatural. As his weapon moved it screamed a ear splitting sound. As the weapon cracked into a cultist a song began emanating from his weapon.

Noxus can see at this moment he is no match for either of them but that can change. He has to be better. He has to get better in order to get their wish. Adelram's wish is everyone's wish. Noxus hacked apart two more cultists with clean sword movements. As time went on the cultists numbers were whittling down.

For some reason he can't help but feel somewhat impressed these men and women are gladly running to their deaths. At least he can use them to appear better to practice his blade work. The true challenge has not arrived yet. As he thought this another cultist came charging towards him. Noxus casually impaled the cultist.The man is still reaching forward trying to kill him.

Noxus looked the cultist over he looked ugly and diseased. Honestly he thought they should be killed just be their looks alone. Noxus removed his blade and and with a swift motion he removed the head of the cultist. Noxus looked around to see everyone killing the last dregs of the death guard cultists. Noxus wondered where is Silas and his raptors? They would of killed them more quickly if they actually helped.

Noxus sighed and readied himself again he had to remind himself in this place the plague god holds sway. He had to tell himself that he should focus on himself not on others. He waited a for seconds nothing else came out of the wall of mist. He looked around to see confusion among the warband.

Adelram's chant is still going, Noxus took a quick look behind him he can see Adelram is glowing, a pink mist is swirling around him along with pink eldritch fire dancing over his armour and sword. Adelram is holding his blade with two hands while chanting. The blade is pointing upwards. Noxus looked foward he wondered why the Death guard have not come out yet? Suddenly he felt someone grabbing his leg. He looked down a dead cultist began moving. The cultist looked up showing a large grin with yellow teeth. All the carcasses around him started to move surging up wards. Jedrick made another command "Fire upon the dead bodies!" Noxus swiped his sword around his legs chopping off the arms of the cultists reaching for him.

Noxus stepped back slightly wondering just what in the name of the dark prince he is seeing. All the cultists they killed have began to rise again. Tentacle like growths is erupting from their skin. Boils are enlarging. At once all of the risen cultists released a deathly rasp. At once all of them surged forwards. The havoc's with heavy bolters began blasting into their lines.

This time they did not stop, they held no concern for mortal injuries even if arms and limbs were blown off. Noxus began losing form he began swinging away just to cut down the risen cultists. He can see some Astartes are being overwhelmed and dragged down. He cursed the same is occuring to him. Some malign intelligence is guiding them picking at certain people.

The risen cultists swarmed over him he is going to be dragged down as he heard the sound of a jet pack. Silas crashed in front of him along with his squad blowing back the risen cultists. Noxus scowled "What took you so long!" Silas shrugged "I wanted to choose the perfect moment for my entrance." Noxus ground his teeth in annoyance who did Silas think he is what did he think he could do with just his unit. Silas turned away from him he held his hand up to the raptors who were advancing with him Silas said "I got this. Just watch and learn." he leaped into the air and crashed down again into the middle of the pack of risen cultists. The cultists sensed prey they can easily overwhelm. They moved to pile on Silas, Noxus smiled he knew that Silas has done something foolish he is going to get dragged down and killed.
As the first risen cultist approached Silas his sword arm moved Noxus could not even see the motion the cultist's head simply toppled away from his shoulders. Using his jet pack to aid him he began slicing apart the cultists. It was almost like a dance. A sliver blade cutting through air anything that made contact with it died. The cultist did not get up again.

He moved and twisted through the crowd bisecting, slicing off arms, heads and legs. Noxus bit his lip. He can see clear as day Silas is essentially stealing the show. At once many of the risen cultists assaulting their lines turned away and moved to kill Silas. Noxus looked around to see no one is moving to help.

As the cultists moved in Silas jumped high into the air with his jetpack he turned mid air and dived down almost head first to pick up speed. As fell downwards he straightened his body and as he approached the horde of risen cultists he activated his jet pack again pushing him forwards. He twisted spinning with his blade slicing apart the risen in a straight line towards the Rhino's. As his speed slowed down he rolled and landed one knee in front of Jedrick. Jedrick scoffed "Show off." Silas rose and gave a bow "I aim to impress Jedrick."
Noxus clenched his hands in frustration. With that spectacle everyone had eyes on Silas. Noxus can see that Silas's act dealt with almost half of the horde. Jedrick pointed forward with his axe "Advance!" As he yelled the command Adelram's chanting finally stopped.The warband stopped in their tracks.

Noxus looked behind him, He could see the mist and flame is gathering to Adelram's sword mixing together. Adelram raised his sword with both hands he slashed downwards releasing a large wave of pink fire. Noxus can see the fire and mist mixed together hurtling straight towards him. Instinct made him cover his face the wave washed over him yet he felt nothing. He could hear rasps of the risen cultists. Noxus turned forward to see they are burning to ashes.
The energy is moving with a life of it's own consuming anything touched by the hand of the plague god. The boils twisted and changed into beautiful flowers, the tentacles shuddered and wrapped around the buildings turning into tree vines. Smaller versions of the flowers sprouting upon them.

As it touched the rotted flowers spewing green gas, colour soon returned and a pink mist bellowed out of it. Finally when it reached the wall of mist it became consumed in a pink inferno. The flies caught in the flame began burning distorting and finally popped into pink flower petals that moved in the wind.

Noxus grabbed a petal and looked around he smiled. He could see everyone is in awe of what has just occurred. Noxus looked to Adelram he is kneeling on the ground using his blade to support himself. Noxus could see doing this took a lot out of him but from here it's the warbands time to shine.

Noxus looked towards the burning wall The flame began dying down and finally the wall of mist vanished. Noxus dropped the petal he readied himself for battle again in the distance he can see the Death guard Astartes. They looked clearly ready for combat he counted roughly the number of Death Guard Astartes he smiled at the thought that just from looking that Adelram is right they are not great in number. He could actually see that it is likely the warband outnumbers the death guard

Noxus nodded he said under his breath "Now here comes the fun part." Noxus searched for the leader considering what Silas just did he can't be cautious he has to stand out. He traced his eyes over the enemy again. He spotted the Lord. He wore terminator armour he has a large horn bursting through the forehead of his helmet and he wielded a giant two handed axe.

Jedrick pointed forward "Charge! Slay them all!" Everyone roared in approval everyone charged. Noxus licked his lips in anticipation. As Noxus ran towards them he could see the Death guard are not cheering. Or even issuing orders they are just standing ready to take the charge.
Noxus breathed in and out just a few more seconds until the clash. Noxus eyed Plague marine standing near the Lord. He pointed his blade forward, Noxus smiled as they finally they clashed together. Noxus imapled the Death guard Astartes he did not seem phased in the slightest. Noxus removed his blade and moved to make another attack. The plague marine drew a rusted blade covered in green slime.

Noxus curled his lip in disgust. He did not even want his blade to make contact with such a thing. Noxus stepped back slightly he decided to simply dodge his attacks and wait for an opening. Noxus can see clearly the plague marine's blade work is shoddy. He waited for the plague marine to make another attack he simply dodged to his left and speared his sword into his neck he twisted removing his head.

The plague marine crumpled to the ground. Noxus nodded in satisfaction he searched the brawl for the lord. After a moment he could see him hacking one of their own in half with his axe. When he saw that he froze. He wondered could he truly kill him? He is wearing terminator armour so it will not be easy to cut through and he is favoured by the plague god. Yet if he could kill him if he did. Everyone will look to him. He will be one of the favoured in the warband.

Noxus gripped his blade he shouted "Forget caution! Your head is mine!" Noxus charged towards the nurgle lord his back is turned. Noxus smiled he could get a preemptive strike. He readied his blade to slash the nurgle lord in the back as he got close. He is now a few paces he raised his blade readying to strike as he finally got close he bought it down. Noxus mind raced his back is still turned he might even kill him with this blow.

Yet with unnatural speed the nurgle lord turned around he swatted away his strike with his hand. The nurgle lord then placed both his hands on his axe and moved to swing side ways. Noxus tried to block he twisted his blade to his right side to try and block he caught the strike barely but he found for some reason the nurgle lord's axe is cutting through his blade. His blade is eroding it is starting to rust.

The nurgle lord sliced through shattering his blade, Noxus felt his axe cleaving through his body a surge of pain erupted in his body. The axe kept going and suddenly he felt himself tumbling to the ground. The lower half of his body felt a great burning sensation. Noxus grit his teeth the pain is too much he tried to move he could not feel his lower body or his arms.

Soon pink flower petals began falling upon his body, suddenly he felt calm. The pain went way he just felt tired for some reason. He wanted to close his eyes.

He blinked, the nurgle lord is standing over him raising his axe. His eyes began to feel more heavy with each blink. He could see the axe descending upon him. As his vision began darkening he saw small pink flashes he soon heard a gurgling scream. The scream reverberated in his mind he then heard someone calling his name until finally he closed his eyes.

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Chapter 22

Noxus felt like he is floating like a feather drifting in the air but he could not move he could not see either his vision is simply pure darkness. He tried to move his hands the thought to move them is there trying to commit the action nothing occurred he feels nothing. Next his legs the same occurred he tried to speak no words would come out of his mouth. He can think of what he wants to say but no words would come.

The last thing he recalled is the battle with the death guard he aimed to be a star he is going to kill the nurgle lord. The thought of killing the leader and then pain. Pure agonising pain. He then felt tired and felt or wanted to sleep and after that the gurgling scream reverberated in his mind and someone was calling out to him.

Noxus tried to blink rapidly to perhaps clear his vision in the end the same darkness filled his vision. Another thing is that his head seemed to be stuck in one place. In his vision a small pink petal floated past him the only thing of colour in the darkness he tried to drift forward it he tried to move to chase it but he could not move. He tried to focus on the moving petal instead it seemed like it is trying to lead him.

Focusing on the petal as it moved through the darkness an iron coffin appeared before him the petal circled the coffin. To him it looked ugly and cold at first but the more he looked at it he realised that it seemed almost inviting. That it won't be cold but filled with warmth the coffin is heavily stylised a mix of iron and bone. The petal moved onward, the wide cold galaxy is bought into his view across the galaxy he could see the scar. A warp scar splitting the galaxy in half. One side full of light and the other full of darkness and terror.
The petal continued to move the picture now bleeding away he saw a tree. A tree bearing apples all of them looked different Noxus noted that there are four types. One looked clean and pristine, one shone with an unnatural light, the third bore tiny gnaw holes and the fourth seemed to be covered in a small amount of blood. Noxus looked at the apples he wanted to eat the shiny one horror filled his breast as the apples began to wither and change a great power or being twisting it to it's own ends. He tried to see who it is all he caught is a flash of an oddly familiar smile.

The image bled away and he felt tired again he wanted to sleep like before. As darkness filled his vision again he closed his eyes.

Adelram looked up to the large tube of green liquid, wires and machinery covered it there is even a small vox built in just in case the occupant awakens. It also kept the occupant alive. He touched it with his hand and sighed. He wanted him to get past the battle unscathed even though they killed all the death guard to the last man they lost a few of their own. Due to their plagues the gene-seed of the dead emperor's children could not be harvested.

Still he is the first Adelram said his named out loud "Noxus". Adelram recalled when he told him of his plans with the warband Noxus was so excited then. Jedrick and the others said to let him die that he is not worth it but he couldn't for some reason. Noxus is the first to hear of his vision he has the right to see the end.

Adelram looked around Caius' workshop, Caius is tinkering away at his table and Sebastian is silent in the corner chained up while servitors have guns trained on him Sebastian has not said a word since the duel. Adelram can tell that Sebastian still has some fight in him even though he subjected him to his punishment.

Adelram heard the doors of Caius' workshop opening considering the sound of the footsteps he knows it's an Astartes. He turned to see that it is Jedrick.

Jedrick walked up to him and looked up to the tube and folded his arms in annoyance "I shall ask again why are you keeping him alive?" Adelram turned his head slightly to the tube "because I want to Jedrick." Jedrick shook his head "Noxus was never that strong or skilled he barely even stood out. I still wonder why he aimed for the Death guard lord." Adelram smiled as he looked up to Noxus "Noxus had something to prove of course." Adelram eyed Noxus up and down half of his body is missing, even his hands are missing.

It took much of his power to stop the curse on the Death guard lord's weapon. The plague afflicted upon Noxus began eating away at his body. In almost a few minutes the lower half of the body left behind rotted away along with the power armour. Adelram looked to Noxus features they are still perfect even after what he has been through.

Adelram turned to Jedrick again who still looked visibly frustrated he tapped one of his feet slightly in irritation "So what are you going to do with him then?" Adelram removed his helmet he looked up to Noxus again "I have an i-" Jedrick cut him off "You are really going to do that? We don't even have the resources." Adelram smiled gently "As I said Jedrick I have an idea, I will go through with it but I will do my best to accommodate him. Trust me."

Jedrick shrugged "Fine. Still whenever someone is put into one of those things they go Insane. I still think it's better to k-" A sound came from the tube both Adelram and Jedrick turned to it in shock. Noxus' mouth began moving he began to speak ++A coffin of iron and bone will be one's new home as we move to the stars we will see a mar of scars. A garden full of opulence where people jump, scream and pray yelling at the gods to shine upon them all. A tree of delight's will be in sight a great being will twist and torch certain delights in sight .++

Adelram eyes went wide a large grin line his features "Did you hear that Jedrick?!" Adelram turned to Jedrick he removed his helmet and scratched his head "That came from the speaker right?" Adelram shook his head "No. He spoke to us! He spoke to us here!" Adelram tapped his head. Caius came walking over going by his movements he could see he is confused "Astartes Adelram are you messing with the equipment?" Adelram grabbed Caius and looked directly at him he found himself jubilant he is now confident of what he is going to do with Noxus "Caius. I want you to prepare a dreadnought coffin for my brother." Adelram smiled again " A coffin of Iron and bone. I want your complete attention on this!" Caius nodded in approval. Adelram released Caius and turned to the tube excitement gripping him.

Commissar Liam sat in his office polishing his bolt pistol he did this to remind himself of his duty. The weight of executing cowards and traitors at first he had a heavy heart but due to the horrors of this dark age he had to steel it. He had to close his ears to the screams of the soldiers he had to close his heart to their suffering. He could not allow himself to understand to understand will cause him to falter in his duty.

Liam murmured "I had to execute ten soldiers today." for some reason the amount of conscripts going awol or outright abandoning their posts has increased dramatically. It's getting to the point that he is executing conscript squads everyday. What's even more worrying is that they heard nothing from the traitor forces. So far they have only fought the diseased ones and even then they seem more like a rag tag band trying to get away from something.

Liam felt a cold breeze at his neck he turned around slightly to his opened window he saw the stars and the cicatrix maledictum marring the sky. He turned away in reflex and muttered a small prayer it has been said that it's bad luck to look directly at it. Liam placed his polished bolt pistol on the desk. The cold breeze assaulted his neck again but it is far colder than before Liam rubbed his neck. As he placed his hands back down on the desk someone grab him around the neck.

He struggled he tried to reach for his bolt pistol a knife is placed near his eye. He froze, who ever his assailant is did not seem like he wanted to kill him yet. Liam heard a low unnatural chuckle gritting his teeth he said "Who are you heretic!" the assailant spoke his voice distorting slightly "An angel." Liam's blood ran cold "You are a myth!" The angel gave another low chuckle "So many myth's are true and Commissar Liam and don't bother calling for help the men on this corridor are mine." Liam's heart began beating rapidly, the soldiers guarding the hall are cadians they are not conscripts why would they be heretics after all that has happened to them?

The angel seemed to have read his mind as the Angel said "many of them have been on this planet for so long. Fighting this long war. Friends have died. Brothers and sisters have died. They feel the imperium is not doing enough if they did their planet would still be here. I actually agree with them if the imperium sent an Astartes force to reinforce you perhaps you could of done something. Not everyone here think's the same Commissar."
Liam tried to calm himself down "So what are you going to do heretic? Kill me?" The angel fell silent for a few moments and spoke a single word "Yes." Liam began struggling something began wrapping around his body. The strange thread soon reached his face covering it completely he screamed but it came out as a muffle.

Velisha sat in her room contemplating what may have happened to her lord. He has not sent any flies to her recently she tries to speak to the ones that hover about her mansion but they are silent. If they do say something instead of a buzzing sound it is a gargled scream of anger. She held her hands together and gave a small prayer to the grandfather. She wore her veil in thanks to him when she was afflicted by disease her late husband sought priests and talented doctors.

Her husband did all he could but found no success, back then she was ready to die but when the day came when the disease pained her the most. So She prayed. She prayed to anyone to help her and a small fly came it buzzed gently comforting her.
The pain soon went away and after a few days and the deliberating effects of the disease vanished. What she found oddly amusing is that her husband soon fell to the same illness and it claimed him in a few days the flies comfort her in her sadness even now. The flies buzzed that her husband is in a better place.

Still Velisha frowned if her lord has not contacted her that means the war is shifting. Perhaps it is the unknown element? She looked out of the window it's night but for some reason it's far more noisy than usual. Velisha shrugged her flies will protect her she even refused guards, she actually lives by herself she found the solitude comforting since no one is here she can listen to the flies more intently.

She placed her head on her pillow and tried to sleep, perhaps even put together a plan to win this city for the grandfather and her lord. Her eyes slowly shut. A large thud sound came suddenly from her door. She looked up to the door for a moment and placed her head down again. Velisha heard another thud again she gazed at the door. She squinted her eyes and smiled joyfully "Perhaps it's a message of sorts?!" Velisha hopped out of her bed her black night gown waving at her ankles She opened her door at looked out into the dark hallway. Flies are hovering at parts of the wall as always. She stepped out of the hallway and looked around. A cold breeze brushed at her neck she turned and looked down the dark hallway. For some reason fear started to creep into her heart she calmed herself by breathing in and out "The flies always protect me when there is an intruder why am I worried?" Velisha said out loud. Still she stared down the hallway it seemed like the darkness is moving there is a scratching sound coming from the ceiling.

Out of the darkness on the ceiling something is crawling towards her it seemed like a strange creature with a bellowing cape feathers hovered about it. Velisha took a step back, the creature stopped. She began taking several paces back her mouth quivering. The creature looked at her directly the creature had a skull for a face that moved like a living one. A black tongue snake like tongue flicked out it had deep blue eyes that blinked and the teeth were fangs.

The creature began rapidly moving towards her, she broke into run she has to get out of the mansion. The fear came back her breathing increased rapidly she had to steady her thoughts. At the moment she is currently on the second floor the front door is not too far Valisha shouted "Grandfather! Help me! Please!" She continued to run the flies did nothing.

For some reason tears ran down her face the fear of death coming back to her the memories of when the disease gripped her. She could see the stairs she called out again "Grandfather! Please help your daughter!" the flies in the corridor finally began to move. Velisha turned her head back slightly the flies are moving to swarm the creature.

Velisha stopped and turned to it she pointed smiling "See! The grandfather protects his children!" The creature began to chant and the flies swarming it were consumed in pink flames. Velisha began shaking again the creature began advancing slowly if any fly got close they were burned to ashes.

Velisha quickly turned away and continued to run reaching the stairs She ran down and rushed to the door. She grabbed the handle and went at work to undo the lock and turned the handle to open the door yet it won't open. She roughly turned the handle again her hands beginning to sweat at the motion

The creature is still on the ceiling coming towards her. She turned her back to the door slowly and slid downwards to her bottom. The creature stopped it looked at her again, Velisha tried to calm herself thoughts filled her mind of the possibility that the creature is not here to kill her.The creature began opening it's mouth the jaws unhinging it rapidly move towards her she screamed.

Isabella lay in her bed with lovers a maid and a butler who served in her mansion. A coy smiled her lips in actually all of them are her lovers Isabella thought to herself. Both were sleeping she felt the need to freshen up. She gently got off her bed and put on her night gown on and left her room to go to the bathroom. She rubbed her neck in annoyance Uriah did not accept her offer most noble males would jump at the possibility to marry her and join houses. Yet he refused but what bothered her most of all were his last words "I will set the stage to make it so."

Isabella wondered if Uriah is also connected to the powers like she is. In her garden a snake visited her it whispered so many things. The voice was also quite charming as well. The snake introduced itself as Sebastian he wanted to learn things and in exchange he will show her a bounty of delights.

Ever since conversing with the snake her tastes changed she loved drinking vintage wine, her joy of art increased and a far more increased need to share her bed with someone and the fact many young nobles offering their hands in marriage to her. All she did was tell the snake a few things whenever it came.

Still the snake stopped visiting. Isabella moved to a plan to try and get Uriah to take herself as a wife. It's clear enough that Uriah is favoured to become the new planetary governor it's obvious to everyone within the noble area. As she reached the bathroom a cold breeze brushed her neck gently making her hair stand on end. She rubbed her neck and stepped into the bathroom.

She walked over to the sink and washed her face. Isabella moved to open the cabinet above the sink, one odd thing is that she can't help but stare at the mirror for a few moments. To admire her looks or correct it in this case it's to admire. She smiled and opened the cabinet and picked out a small towel to wipe her face. Satisfied the towel is placed back within the cabinet.

Isabella closed the door and looked at the mirror again, her heartbeat slowed starting at the mirror there is someone standing behind her. A man wearing a skull helmet along with a hooded cloak. She turned slowly Isabella opened her mouth to scream and instantly the man placed his hands on her mouth.

The man placed one finger to the lips of the skull helmet "Ssssh. I am here to talk Lady Isabella." Isabella found herself breathing heavily through her nose she nodded slowly. The man removed his hand slowly. Isbaella took a gulp in a situation of negotiation as always she tried to speak first "So I take it you are part of the unknown element?" The man wearing the skull helmet chuckled "Indeed. I am quite impressed the current general figured out that much."

Isabella held her gown tightly trying not to appear nervous before him "Are you here to kill me?" The man shook his head "If I was going to kill you. You would be dead. The maid in your bed right now would of done it for me while you slept." Isabella's eyes went wide she tried to calm herself "I see. So what do you want?" The man moved to the door and leaned back on it "Asriel." Isabella raised her eyebrow in shock "You are giving your name so freely?" Asriel nodded "Indeed. I think we can come to an understanding."

Isabella felt her heart calming down slightly "What sort of understanding?" Isabella watched Asriel pull a knife from his belt and twirl it in his hands "I want you to serve my lord." Isabella grew confused and covered her mouth slightly thinking that maybe he is an agent of Sebastian she removed her hand from her mouth and smiled "I assume you work for Sebastian?" Asriel stopped twirling his knife and gripped the handle tightly, Isabella felt she said something she shouldn't have "No I do not serve him." Asriel said firmly after he said that Isabella noted his voice softened as he said his next words "Sebastian has now been put in his place. The true lord is coming and I personally don't want to kill you. You have skills that my lord will possibly need in the future."

Isabella thought about his offer if she refused it's clear Asriel will kill her. Asriel stood up right he looked at her and gestured his hand out "So Lady Isabella what is your choice?"

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It took me a whole book and 21 chapters of the second one to realise I am using he and she way too much. Soo I looked up better sentence structuring advice on the net, so enjoy. Oh and I am terrible at writing poetry.

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I actually really like how you put both the power and military struggles into the story, so it’s not just one dimensional.

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lliu wrote:
I actually really like how you put both the power and military struggles into the story, so it’s not just one dimensional.


Thanks! It is something I tried to aim for when I decided to do the second story.
   
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Chapter 23

Jacob rummaged his hair in frustration he wondered why is this happening? How did this happen? Riots, Murders and Desertion. Commissar Liam was found hanged on one of the statues in the noble area his entire forehead missing and his bolt pistol stuffed within it. He wondered if this is some sick joke? Another problem is the murder of Velisha Marfire, she was found on another statue her torso was torn away. The most disturbing thing about her murder is that many of her organs were missing or half eaten.

Jacob ground his teeth, even more troubling the noble woman Isabella Glodmar is now also missing. He decided to place Uriah under house arrest for his "protection". He has been helpful but it's likely he could be in with the enemy and that may of been the reason why he donated so much of his wealth to the war effort.

Jacob held his hand's together tightly as his mind shifted to the next problem, the fact that many conscripts and even cadians have deserted. It did not suprise him that this occured with the conscripts even in such large amounts but cadians? He could not believe it he did not want to believe it.
Jacob took a deep breath to calm himself down he had to think. He still had to win this war even though these issues are holding the small remainder of the army in the inner city. Jacob tried to focus, even at night he can hear men outside barking orders sending squads out to maintain order in the inner city. Jacob rose from his desk he turned to look outside of the window. He knew he could be proud of one thing that there are some who still know their duty to the emperor even when everything is going wrong.

Jacob felt a cold breeze on his neck, he was about to move to rub his neck but stopped Lucas' memoir's flashed within his mind. The very memoirs sitting in his desk drawer under lock and key. He moved his hand to his laspistol and turned pointing at the weapon at the chair.
Jacob narrowed his eyes at the person now sitting in front his desk "Monster, Heretic and murderer." The intruder gave a small clap of applause "You are the first person to actually ready themselves. I am impressed perhaps if you were sent here earlier things could of been different." Jacob looked the intruder up and down he matched the description of the "angel" a skull helmet and a cloak that seemed to melt in with the darkness. Jacob turned his gaze to the door he shouted "We have an intruder!" The angel did not move an inch he still sat in the chair casually.

Jacob waited no one came, he could feel his mouth drying his finger on the trigger of the laspistol "So what do you want "angel?" " The angel chuckled "I wanted to see you of course. As I said before I am impressed you turned around in such a fashion. Perhaps you read up on the history of Lord General Lucas?" Jacob could not help but shift his eyes to his desk drawer.

His eyes went up to the angel again "You killed a good man." The angel scoffed "No one is good here general. Don't give me that, you knew of Lucas' history yet you made the same mistakes or you did not fix the mistakes left behind by your predecessors." Jacob could not help but go through his past decisions if he made an error somewhere. "I don't see where I made an error heretic." The angel sighed "Must I explain it to you? Fine let's start with the conscripts why do you think they are deserting? Do you ever try to understand why?"

Jacob lifted his finger from the trigger slightly. He could not think of any other reason than they are traitors and cowards "They are cowards who failed in the face of duty." The angel shook his head in clear annoyance "They are men and women who have lost families due to your foolish decisions. They are men and women who have little to no family left and they wish to see no harm come to them." Jacob could not help but laugh slightly "Do you really think that they would desert for such a reason? If they cared for their family they would stick to their duty as by the mandate of the god-emperor."

The angel sighed again it annoyed Jacob that such a agent of darkness is mocking him he wondered why he is letting him speak "Lord general Jacob. These people don't care for the duty because they don't care for this planet. They don't care for you or the imperium itself why should they care when the very thing that is meant to protect them is taking away the thing most precious to them?"

Jacob bought his finger close to the trigger again "The only precious thing in this galaxy is the god-emperor heretic. I remember cadia. I saw what your kind did." The angel shrugged "Never denied we do those things but at least everyone on our side enjoyed it. Shame I was not there actually." Jacob readied himself to pull the trigger as he was about to do so he heard screams outside the normal instinct would be to turn ones head but in this instance he could not a monster of darkness who is perpetuating this war is in front of him.

The angel turned his head slightly to try and look outside the window "It seems my people are moving in." Jacob narrowed his eyes "My men are doing their duty. If I kill you here..." The angel shrugged "pull the trigger then." Jacob placed his other hand on his gun aiming directly at the angel his fingers are resting on the trigger. He looked at the angel for a moment he did not know why but he wanted to know something before he commits "Before I kill you heretic. For what dark reason did you start this long war of pain and suffering?" The angel sat still he looked up slightly "For family of course. I will do anything for them I will do anything for my lord." Jacob heard the angel's words for such a small reason, for such a selfish reason he has caused this all this death and suffering. He made the soldiers of the god-emperor give up their lives trying to end this war for such a petty reason. Jacob closed his eyes for a moment he opened them again and fired his laspistol.

Uriah sat in his living room he could hear the screams outside. He can hear the sounds of gun shots and lasfire. His own "guards" the imperial guard soldiers have left to check what is happening outside Uriah waited and prayed. He prayed to the god-emperor to save him. Uriah felt his mouth drying as he said each word of the prayer, he heard his mansion door opening and the stomping of boots. The the barking of orders and the dying screams of the guards who left to check what was happening.

Men and women armed with autoguns and lasguns came into his living room. Some wore worn out uniforms, others wore civilian clothing. They pointed their guns at him in unison. Uriah rose from his chair and raised his hands another person walked into the room. It was someone he recognised. Uriah said his voice shaking "Skull face." Skull face turned and looked at him in silence "Greetings Uriah." Uriah looked skull face up and down he could see dried blood matted his gear and he is holding a familiar robotic arm. Uriah gulped "Is your Lord here?" Skull face moved his free hand to his helmet and removed it. Uriah could see he had somewhat dark skin and blue eyes that are slits he smiled "Asriel." Uriah grew confused "Asriel?" Skull face nodded "It's my name. Still things moved ahead quite quickly so I am doing this a bit early. Still the city is largely in chaos at least I got the screams for you." Uriah bit his lip slightly "So you have come to kill me?"

Asriel shook his head "No. As I said you will serve my lord." Uriah grit his teeth he never bowed to anyone and he won't do so now because a random person told him his family owed him "I refuse." Asriel shrugged "perhaps you will change your mind once you see him." Uriah dropped his hands in shock "When I will see him?" Asriel nodded, he smiled "Yes. I just sent him a message to bring everything here."

Uriah watched Asirel turn his head to two men in the group "Bring him outside." Both of them proceeded to walk behind him and poked their guns in his back "Get moving." uttered one of the gunmen. Uriah cast his head downwards and began walking out of his mansion. As he reached his living room door Asriel walked with him Uriah could not help but look down to the cybernetic arm he is holding. Uriah could see that it was roughly torn from the person it belonged to. Uriah deep down had a good idea on the owne of the cybernetic arm. Asriel caught him staring "Are you gazing at my souvenir? I took it from the lord general before I killed him I even let him take the first shot." Uriah diverted his eyes away from the arm as they reached his mansion door.

Asriel smiled he walked to the door and opened it, As the door opened Uriah simply looked outside. People are being gathered in a small circle. Uriah can spot nobles, civilians and even some soldiers. Uriah stood in his tracks wondering what is going to happen to everyone. He wondered for what reason they are being gathered, Uriah then felt the gun poking his back. Uriah grimace slightly as he walked out of his mansion.

Adelram sat in the rhino with Jedrick, Silas, Marthas, Camila and Isira, as per Asriel's message they took everything. The serfs and slaves are on Goliath trucks and majority of the warband are in rhinos. Adelram surveyed the people riding within it. He can tell clearly that Isira dislikes Camila's presence it's clear to him that Isira is jealous of how Camila can catch everyone's attention with her music. Even Marius of all people took a liking to her, Camila has told him that Marius has been stalking her.

Adelram reassured Camila that Marius would not dare lay a finger on her that she belongs to him and him alone.

Jedrick grunted in annoyance breaking his concentrating Adelram sighed "What is it Jedrick?" Jedrick shrugged "I don't see why Asriel is having us bring everything. I thought we are going to trash the inner city not move in." Adelram thought on the psychic message sent by Asriel, he said that the city is largely in chaos he has men at both gates waiting for them. The last thing he said is to bring everything, the slaves, important equipment and their personal serfs.

Adelram leaned back slightly thinking he voiced his thoughts "I think he has a way off world." Silas who is not wearing his helmet raised his eyebrow "why did he not mention that earlier?" Adelram leaned his head back slightly thinking it's likely that Asriel wanted him to secure the warband then move to leaving the planet.

Adelram agreed with Asriel's possible reasoning since what could they do off world with only 5 Astartes?
Marthas chuckled, Jedrick scoffed "What is so funny?" Marthas smiled "It's clear he had a way off world a long time ago. Think on it don't you recall the time when we discovered Lily and Elizabeth's location? He pressed that Lily is an important piece. Asriel pretty much had us drop everything to get them. Also we have a tech priest a host of servants, slaves and a whole warband now. All the pieces are together." Isira leaned forward surprised "What?! So he spent all his time on this planet putting everything together? Prolonging the war gathering the pieces needed?"

Silas frowned "I don't exactly like being manipulated in such a fashion." Adelram looked at everyone who is in discussion. Oddly he found he did not exactly care if almost everything happened due to his manipulations it's the end result that he cares about and Asriel largely put everything in his favor. Adelram looked at Camila who seemed reserved holding her violin tightly Adelram smiled "Camila what do you think?" Camila shot up looking around the rhino clearly nervous "I-I-" Jedrick scowled "Spit it out woman he asked a question."

Camila looked away slightly "From the short time I have known him. I think he did everything for all you no matter how much he suffered to get there." Adelram bore a large grin under his helmet "Exactly Camila I share the same opinion." Silas moved to interject "Fine I agree he did it for us. Still we have no idea what the neverborn in his head is planning." Jedrick nodded in agreement "I agree with Silas I still don't trust it."

Adelram's cheerfulness began to subside "The neverborn makes him more useful. More powerful it's under control." Marthas moved to speak "I agree with Adelram. It was placed within him for a reason perhaps it's a divine mandate?" Isira leaned back and folded her arms "My lord. What if he did not have it?" Adelram frowned "He does so there is no point discussing it. It's dangerous to remove it anyway and the only other way is death. This is the end I will hear of the subject." Everyone grew silent at his proclamation.

Silas turned his head slightly away "So Adelram. What are you doing with the cripple? Why isn't he dead yet?" Adelram sighed heavily in annoyance "Are we going to discuss this again?" Silas turned his head to face him he stared at him accusingly "He is useless. A cripple. Give him some dignity and kill him. Even if he is someone barely of note anyway." Marthas looked to him as well "I can see Silas's point. He is an invalid right now something that has no use to the dark prince Adelram."

Adelram removed his helmet he stared directly at Silas he made his power felt within the Rhino. He can see everyone getting slightly uncomfortable he smiled gently "He is special Silas, Marthas. I want him to be there when father comes to see us." Silas held his ground "He will call him ugly and a cripple he will have us kill him. That is what will happen if we ever meet our father."

Jedrick held his hand up "I agree with Adelram." Silas looked at Jedrick with surprise "Really?! Why?" Jedrick held his chin "Well. He is a strange one for sure and he spouts terrible poetry as a cripple." Silas sighed "Fine I will drop it." Adelram nodded "Thank you Jedrick. Now that will be the end of that topic." Adelram placed his helmet back on the rhino ground to a stop.

The driver called out "My lord we are at the south gate. There are men waiting." Adelram looked at everyone "Time to greet my new followers." Adelram rose, Jedrick moved slightly to stop him "Are you going out by yourself?" Adelram nodded "Indeed I am. Relax Jedrick." Jedrick held his place and sat back down. Adelram stepped out of the rhino he walked up to the gate it was rather poor and makeshift he assumed they had a large number of imperial guardmen patrolling it at one point.

He approached the gate he saw a group of soldiers wearing worn out imperial guard uniforms. All of them looked at each other in surprise as they approached. Adelram could see they were not sure what to do so they simply saluted. Adelram scanned the group "Who is in charge?" A man stepped forward he had fair skin, brown eyes and black hair he looked about Camila's age. He saluted nervously "It is me sir. Abraham Lokon." Adelram looked Abraham up and down he could see he has seen some fighting "Right Abraham you will ride with me in the Rhino and direct me to my servant. I assume he has told you of me?" Abraham nods "Yes sir he has." Abraham looked to his men, Adelram noticed this "Your men will remain at the gate."

Abraham looked down slightly "Yes sir." Adelram folded his arms "Right follow me then." Abraham raised his head and nodded. Adelram could see that Abraham walked behind him he turned his head slightly "Walk with me Abraham." Abraham in surprise ran up next to him, Abraham still looked clearly uncomfortable "Tell me Abraham what's the matter?" Abraham replied "It's just..." Adelram looked down at him "It's just what?" Adelram stared at him for a few moments it dawns on him finally on why he seems uncomfortable "Ah. I see you see the horns on my helmet and you are now wondering what you have gotten yourself into?"

Abraham's eyes went wide "No sir! I don't me-" Adelram raised his hand to quieten Abraham's protest Adelram stopped walking "You see Abraham the new god you will be following shapes all of us differently." Adelram removed his helmet "What do you see Abraham?" Abraham dropped to his knee's he started weeping uncontrollably "I had no idea... they said you are all monsters. I.. I.." Adelram placed his helmet back on he helped Abraham to his feet Adelram spoke softly "You fought for me in your own way and as your lord I will ensure you enjoy the fruits of your labours." Abraham nodded slowly.

Adelram stepped on the rhino with Abraham. Adelram can already see Isira staring at him hungrily. Marthas and Silas had clear disinterest but Jedrick scowled "What took you so long?!" Jedrick pointed at Abraham Also who is this?" Adelram tutted "Quiet Jedrick he is our guide." Jedrick looked at the new passenger and then back to him "So... What did you do?" Adelram leaned back in his seat "I just showed him a little bit of his new life."

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Chapter 24


Asriel waited in the noble area, the mansions now in ruin and the crowd of people being watched by his men. Uriah stood with him with two armed men aiming at guns at him if he tries anything. Isabella sat in the front garden of her mansion at a table her Butler serving her a glass of wine. Asriel smiled to Isabella this is almost like a show to her. Isabella noticed the gesture and smiled back. She rose from her table and walked over to him.

As she did so Uriah's eyes went wide "Isabella?! You are with the heretics!" Isabella tapped Uriah on the cheek "Indeed I am. Asriel simply gave me an offer I can't refuse." Asriel could see Isabella is wearing a different dress it is quite revealing since he took her away for a time she has tried to seduce him but he payed no mind. Asriel felt a small spike in his mind "You love me more instead don't you?" said Meliva. Asriel hissed "Not now."

Meliva grew silent, Isabella looked at him she is clearly concerned "Is something wrong Asriel?" Asriel shook his head "I am fine." Asriel looked at the gathered crowd of people he intends for them to be an offering or present for his lord when he arrives. Thinking of his lord Asriel sent his mind out above the inner city he can see Rhino's moving towards the Noble area.

Asriel drew his mind back and smiled "It seems he will be here soon." Isabella visibly excited said "Is he?! I can't wait to see him! I wonder if he is a charmer like.." Asriel grew annoyed "Please don't mention his name in my presence." Isabella grew silent "Very well." Uriah stepped in front of Asriel the two armed men readied their guns, Asriel raised his hand to stop them. Asriel sighed "What is it Uriah?" Uriah looked visibly angry to Asriel "You know I won't bow to him." Adelram cocked his head slightly "Why do you think that? As I sa-" Uriah cut him off "I have never bowed to anyone. Not my family, not to rivals or you. Your lord is scum. Looking at you if he is anything like you.... You are trash, your lord is trash." Asriel narrowed his eyes at Uriah he found himself getting annoyed "Watch your next words Uriah. Insult me but don't insult my lord."

Uriah laughed "Oh I see! So that's your trigger button! Right then! Your lord is a maggot! A piece of filth!" Asriel handed Isabella the cybernetic arm she looked at it in confusion. Asriel casually removed his glove revealing his black nails they turned into talons in a flash he grabbed Uriah's throat digging his talons in. He watched Uriah gagging trying to pull away his hand. Asriel frowned "Not everything pans out. Oh well. Uriah I am going to cause an extreme haemorrhage it's going to be quite painful please enjoy it." Asriel focused he could detect Uriah's blood has began to boil. Uriah is now gagging grasping relentlessly at his arm trying to remove it from his neck.

Uriah skin began turning extremely red, Asriel smiled he released his grip Uriah stumbled back after a few moments his body became consumed in flames. Uriah released a shrill scream as he rolled on the ground Asriel sighed "seventy years of work gone like that." Asriel looked at Isabella who is in shock "How did you do that? Are you a witch?" Asriel placed his glove back on "You have much to learn Lady Isabella." Asriel perked up slightly "Oh can I have the arm back?" Isabella handed him the cybernetic arm Asriel stroked it slightly "I will keep this for sure to remember the planet by." Asriel looked at Uriah who has now stopped moving "Right. My lord should be here soon."

Adelram can see out of the driver window there is a gate seperating the the noble area. The road ends here. Adelram sighed "We can't take our Rhino's through here "Everyone out!" Adelram stepped out of the rhino with everyone. There are stairs leading upwards, driving through the city he can clearly see the city is gripped in the middle of a revolt of sorts. Chaos is everywhere they drove through without any problems.
Abraham told him that largely majority of the civilian area is in upheaval and many of the imperial guard that has joined him has turned on their old comrades. They took them by surprise he made note that Asriel was a great help in the fighting.

Adelram turned his gaze on the warband who is now waiting for his command. The Goliath trucks holding their slaves and servants. All of it is his. Now when he gazes at them even the slaves oddly he does not see discontent but adoration and expectation. Adelram announced "Right everyone up the steps! I want two squads guarding the vehicles!" Everyone nodded.

Adelram slowly walked up the steps as he reached the top he saw several ruined mansions. In the plaza he see's a crowd of people surrounded by armed men and women. He scanned the area searching for him after a moment he spotted him. Asriel is in discussion with a woman there is also a burnt corpse a few paces away from him.

Adelram walked up to Asriel with some of the warband in tow he can see everyone looking at them in shock. Asriel turned noticing the commotion he smiled and approached he bowed "My lord." Adelram nodded "Asriel. I see you have gathered some people here." Asriel smiled again "Yes they are for you." Adelram titled his head back slightly in surprise "For me?" Asriel turned his head to the gathered crowd "Yes." Asriel turned his head back "I also want to introduce someone." Asriel gestured the woman over she curtsied "Greetings Lord Adelram I am Isabella Glodmar." Adelram looked the woman up and down "So what can she do Asriel?" Asriel nodded "She has great knowledge on the politics and movements of noble houses my Lord." Adelram mused on that information "I see. That will be useful." Adelram removed his helmet he smiled, Isabella looked at him in clear shock her eyes rolled back slightly she fainted, Asriel had to catch her before she fell to the ground.

Adelram frowned "Well... that was unexpected." Asriel looked down at Isabella "I will take her back to her mansion to rest." Asriel walked away towards a mansion largely intact. Adelram could see servants walking over to Asriel helping him carry Isabella.

Adelram placed his helmet back on he could see the armed men and women guarding the crowd are clearly shocked as well. Adelram closed his eyes for a moment he opened them and walked towards them he announced "You all belong to me! Serve me and you will enjoy the delights denied by the imperium!"

Adelram watched everyone stand at attention "Since you fought so hard. Here is my first gift to you!" Adelram turned to the warband members gathered "And to my brothers!" Adelram smiled under this helmet "The war is over! Now we enjoy the spoils! Go into the city! Enjoy the bounties! Take what you want! Those who are not with us?! Do as you please with them!" Adelram could see almost all the warband are in clear surprise. An Astartes raised his hand "Are you telling us to do what we want to those not with us?" Adelram nodded he spread his hands out "Indeed. Go enjoy yourselves brothers."

Adelram watched the warband dispersing grins clearly displayed on their lips. Some of the armed men and women also left. Adelram could see Silas, Jedrick and Marthas leaving he called out "You three wait." They all stopped in their tracks, Silas turned to him and frowned "You want us to do something don't you." Adelram removed his helmet and clipped it to his belt he looked at the crowd and smiled. He can see a mix of horror and adoration on their faces. He turned back to Silas, Marthas and Jedrick "Indeed what I have here is not enough. This is a dear gift from Asriel but I need more materials." Marthas stepped forward "What exactly are you doing?" Adelram stroked his chin "I am going to try my hand at art. Never had an interest exactly but perhaps I might gain a love of it if I make something."

Marthas raised his eyebrow "Art? I have more pres-" Adelram raised his hand "Marthas think of it as a monument to our victory then?" Marthas closed his mouth offering no further protest, Jedrick shrugged "I am quite curious what he is planning actually. So what do you need?" Adelram looked to the crowd and quickly counted "I have 60 people here. I need you to find me 60 more people." Silas creased his brow "You want us to go slave hunting." Adelram began shooing them away "Yes. I want you to do that get to it." All three Astartes began walking away silas sighing in annoyance.

Adelram scanned the dispersing warband for Camila and Isira he called them over they both bowed. Adelram looked to Isira "I need you to tie my hair back. Can you do that?" Isira displaying clear happiness "Yes I can do that." Adelram slightly went to one knee Isira began tying his hair in a pony tail. Adelram watched Asriel walking out of the mansion he smiled "Asriel come over." Asriel walked over and bowed "Do you need something my lord?" Isira finished tying his hair he rose, Adelram nodded "Indeed I need several gallons of cement and water. Go find Abraham and get him and his men to help you gather it for me. After that you will remain here I will need your help for this." Adelram looked to Isira "Actually I will need both of you." Both Isira and Asriel nod. Asriel ran away to gather the materials.

He gave a gentle smile to Camila "Please play a song. Something... classical." Camila nodded she got her bow ready and began playing. As the song filled his mind the image of the art he is going to create began framing itself.
   
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Chapter 25

Adelram gazed at his work he spent weeks on the structure, now that its finally done he felt an odd sense of regret. Regret that in the past he did not try hard enough to invest himself in artistic pursuits. Adelram looked over to Isira and Asriel his two helpers for this project they were currently gazing up at the sky Adelram oddly felt cross they should be gazing at his art not drifting off looking upwards "Isira and Asriel my work is in front of you." Adelram said sternly. Asriel looked down "Apologies my lord.", Isira cast her head down slightly and tutted "I am looking at your work my lord. Your piece of art is affecting everything around it."

Adelram thought on what Isira just said he has been so absorbed putting it together he did not notice the changes around him. Even though the work took weeks, Adelram looked up the skies are now in upheaval and the screams from the inner city seems to be drawn to his piece of art. The wailing coming from his piece of art eclipsed the screams coming from the city. When the screams came he had Camila stop playing her violin. Adelram found the screams actually helped him to focus instead of distracting him, Camila was soon dragged away by Isabella since she could not stand how "scruffy" Camila looked. Adelram somewhat agreed with Isabella the imperial guard essentially ruined her looks in a sense.

Adelram rubbed his hands slightly, he smiled as he looked over to Asriel and Isira "I want both of you to gather everyone. It's complete." Isira and Asriel gave a small bow and walked away.

Adelram went over his creation again, the "statue" is made from 120 people all interwoven together reaching up to an icon of slaanesh. The symbol of slaanesh was carved from marble and embedded with the jewellery. Both items were easily found in the mansions. Adelram then had Jedrick, Marthas and Silas gather 60 extra slaves some tried to run and he was forced to put everyone in cages after that all three left to their own devices. The cement and water was gathered, it was prepared and Adelram began creating his work. He would grab a slave and using telekensis position them in the place and position he wanted them. Asriel and Isira would then cover them with cement leaving their mouths exposed and then they used eldritch fire to aid in the drying process.

He did this with each individual slave until his work was done. Adelram pulled the string holding his white hair back and placed his helmet back on. He waited, he wanted to see the reaction.

After a few minutes he can hear the stomping of feet and the sound of discussion. Adelram felt his excitment building he had to contain himself until they arrive. Adelram heard the gates opening and closing he turned and spread his arms out wide "Welcome brothers! Please gaze upon my work!"

Adelram smiled he could see Marthas, Silas, Marius and Jedrick in the crowd. Many who were not wearing helmets stared at his statue in silence no praise or jubilation was seen from them. Adelram furrowed his brows he wondered if they disliked what he created it was his first time. They continued to stare for a few moments more Adelram frowned "So none of you like it I take it?" Oddly it took a few seconds for someone to respond it was Jedrick who stepped forward "Er. No I personally love it I just... have no words to describe it to be honest."

Adelram could see everyone murmuring in agreement. Adelram did not know exactly how to feel about what Jedrick just said "So, what's the problem then?" Jedrick folded his arms and shook his head "I said I like it. To describe it I see a great statue displaying the torment of the slaves of the false emperor." At Jedrick's proclamation Marius pushed his way through the Astartes and began screeching at Jedrick turned to Marius in annoyance "What do you mean the statue is not important?! You are saying through the statue he made a beautiful song?!" Marius nodded, Jedrick scowled and pointed "Look the 120 people are still alive I might add howling in misery. Look at their faces! They are moving like it's alive!" Adelram turned he noticed that the statue faces are making expressions he was quite sure the surface was flat when he did them.

Adelram turned back to Marius and Jedrick, Marius is squinting his eyes he released a low rumble. Jedrick sighed "You can't see it? I can see it clearly! Silas what do you think?" Silas was standing in the front he shrugged "I have no opinion." Jedrick walked up to Silas his annoyance spilling out with each step "You do have an opinion. You are wearing your helmet and gazing at the statue like a stone what do you see?" Silas looked away slightly "The statue is moving. I am currently taking pictures using my helmet."

Jedrick shook his head "Right send me the pictures." Adelram watched Jedrick standing still for a moment after a few seconds he shook his head in confusion "It's impossible. It's not even moving!" Silas shrugged "Now leave me be and let me take more photos." Jedrick called out "Marthas! What do you see." Marthas walked out the crowd and looked at the statue "What stands out to me is the icon of the dark prince blazing brightly with purple flames" Adelram turned to look up at the icon it looks plain to him and no fire could be seen the only detail is the jewellery shining off it slightly.

Adelram turned back "It looks rather plain to me Marthas." Marthas shook his head "Lo-" Jedrick interrupted "Look. All of you are noticing something that is not there." As soon as Jedrick said that everyone erupted into an argument over the meaning of the statue or what they are actually seeing.
Adelram found he actually prefers this response oddly he gestured to quieten everyone down "I can see everyone has their own interpretations. I am just happy all of you like it how about each time with conquer a world I will do something like this for you?" The warband largely all nodded in agreement. Adelram smiled "Now. It's time to leave. Asriel!"

Asriel squeezed through the Astartes he bowed "Yes my lord." Adelram nodded "I assume you know of a way off world." Asriel stood still as he flatly said "Yes."

Adelram sat in the rhino with Asriel they are driving northwards out of the north gate of the inner city. Adelram had only the both of them within the Rhino when Asriel announced he knew of a way off world many of his brothers wanted to kill him so he decided to have only the both of them as passengers within the rhino to avoid any annoying arguments or disagreements with his brothers. Adelram placed Marthas, Silas and Jedrick with Lily and Elizabeth without them they can't use what is most likely a ship Adelram looked at Asriel "So I assume it's a ship?" Asriel nodded "Yes it's held underground but to get there you need certain key words that were given to me by Meliva."

Adelram surprised said "Underground? Is there a passage?" Asriel held his chin slightly "Of a sort the passage can be large or small the passage is big enough to fit vehicles through." Adelram folded his arms "So what is the ship like?" Asriel scratched his neck slightly "Very big. The ship holds a lot of valuables that Astartes can use." Adelram raised his eyebrow at what Asriel just said he mused on the information that there is many valuables one can use.

Adelram oddly felt excited "So is there anything dangerous about the ship? Any deficiencies I should know about?" Asriel shook his head "No. The only odd thing is that Meliva said only the prize winner can activate the ship I have no idea what she means." Adelram's eyes grew wide within his helmet he chuckled "So that's why we were sent here."

Asriel perked up slightly "I assume something happened on cadia?" Adelram did not react he personally did not want to go over that tale with him Adelram wanted to look foward "So to speak, are we arriving at the location soon?" Asriel looked out of the driver window "Yes have the driver stop." Adelram gestured to the driver he acknolwedged and the rhino ground to a halt. Adelram could hear all the other vehicles stopping.

Asriel stepped out of the vehicle and walked to the front he took several paces forward. Asriel knelt down to the ground slightly, Adelram wondered what he was doing at most he could hear a long line of words in the dark tongue after several seconds a small black inky square pool appeared in front of Asriel it expanded filling out a section of the road. Asriel walked back to the rhino he entered and seated himself down.

Adelram held his gaze at the pool as it bubbled he turned to Asriel "So we just drive into it?" Asriel nodded. Adelram looked at the driver "Keep going going." "Acknowledged" responded the driver. The rhino began moving as the rhino moved into the pool it was like the rhino became submerged in water and after a second they were on a road again. They were now in an underground tunnel oddly enough he felt a strange force pressing on his mind.

Asriel looked out of the window "The death guard tried so hard to find this place not knowing they walked over it, killed over it and died over it. Now I have to concentrate." Adelram raised his eyebrow "Concentrate?" Asirel nodded "Yes. I bound neverborn to the walls and roads if someone steps over or drives over a certain point they will be summoned."

Asriel cast his head down slightly and began murmuring, Adelram could see on his tactical display the temperature is dipping. Asriel stopped his chant and the tempreature returned to normal the pressure on his mind vanished "It's safe to go now my lord." Said Asriel.

The rhino continued into the tunnel, Adelram looked out of the window to see they are coming to a large open door as they drove through what he saw shocked him. They drove into a large underground ship bay holding a battleship in the docking area. Upon seeing it Adelram felt a lot more better charging the wall on cadia. Adelram called out to the driver "Stop the rhino." The rhino grew to a slow halt Adelram moved to leave Asriel followed after him.

Adelram looked up to the ship he could see everyone else is following suit, Adelram removed his helmet and clipped it to his belt he smiled "It's mine. Mine to use to spread agony and suffering for my wish." Lily came walking over in awe "It's beautiful! I can't wait to see the command chair!" Adelram watched her run to the docking bay area a ramp is extended to let vehicles and people on. As she ran to the ramp Adelram heard a large noise of random screeching numbers Caius came walking over the noise continued, Adelram frowned "Enough with the noise what is it?" Caius fell silent he gazed up at the ship in almost reverence "Astartes Adelram you are aware of what class of ship this is?" Adelram oddly found Caius is displaying almost clear emotion in his voice "I am aware of the weaponry but not the exact class." Adelram could see the lance batteries and Nova cannon but it's clear the ship has been modified for Astartes use he could see dread claws mounted on the ship.

Caius raised his hands "It's an apocalypse class battleship! Yet just gazing at it the ship is slightly larger than normal variants perhaps to add Astartes equipment similar to a battle barge." Caius pointed again "Lo-" Adelram interrupted him "You can examine the ship later Caius we must leave." Adelram turned to the warband "Get everything on the ship! I want it prepped to leave!" Adelram turned to the ship again he said quietly "This is only the first step."

Adelram walked the halls of the ship he is going to the bridge he had the warband is fan out exploring the ship and what they found was interesting. When Asriel said there are valuables there is far more than that suits of terminator armour, resources to put together a dreadnought and several run down tanks that could be used along with thunderhawks. Even a teleportarium was found on the ship Caius is already at work trying to get it operational.

Adelram finally reached the bridge he can see familiar serfs in their old positions. He is on the bridge because Lily sent a message to him that the ship is not activating he had a good idea why going by the past discussion with Asriel. Lily is pressing buttons at the command throne panel clearly frustrated "Why won't it work! Dammit!" Lily slammed the arm of the chair. Adelram looked over "Problems?" Lily nodded "Yes. I ran all the commands I can think of to activate the ship but it's not working."
Adelram approached the panel he knew the standard intiation to start a ship he simply pressed the buttons. After a moment the screens flicked on data and information flowed down the screen as the various engines and machinery within the ship started to activate.
Lily scratched her head "How did you do that?" Adelram shrugged "I just had the right touch I guess." Lily rubbed her hands together "Right let's get going!" Adelram held her shoulder "No wait a moment. Is the ship loud speaker working?" Lily nodded "Yes it is. Do you want to say a few words?" Lily pressed a button on the console "You can speak everyone on the ship will hear it."

Adelram nodded he spoke firmly "We are setting out. Setting out to an unknown galaxy ready for us to spread suffering and torment! We will bring corruption and darkness to those who cling to the false the emperor! We will gain our wish! Ready yourselves! For all of you are my Harbingers of Sin!"
   
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Part 1 Epilogue

inquistor communication log

System Atovila

Planet lock Zatos

Numerous daemonic enties detected. Request Astra militarum?

Negative, threat too large to contain identified a beacon on long range scanners drawing in the great enemy

Send request to Adeptus Astartes chapter Salamnders?

Negative, threat is too large.

Initiate protocol 666?

Affirmative.


Belaris leaned back in his chair away from the communication device he creased his brow in frustration the system meeting with the other ordo malleus inquisitors was draining "Another planet has fallen to the great enemy..." said Belaris. Belaris sighed he also lost someone resourceful he could call upon. Even with the information given perhaps it was too late? Belaris looked around his office on Athor he had a choice to come here to prevent a possible disaster or go to Zatos to hunt the false angel. Belaris went over the reports of the MIA inquisitors and those confirmed to be killed. All of them investigated the Angel perhaps if this case was picked up by him sooner this could of been prevented.

Belaris heard his door opening he looked up he saw that it is Michael Nors one of his acolytes, he is a sanctioned psyker like him but his skills lie in divination and more often than not he has been accurate it's why he is in his service. Michael gripped his staff "Sir, you remember why we came here?" Belaris rose from his chair he walked over to Michael the servo's of his power armour winding at the motion he has worked with Michael for years now Belaris finds that Micheal reminding him of his visions keeps him alert "I do. You remember the divination? The vision?" Micheal nods "It is why the grand master sent a strike team to aid us just in case. Even the grand master saw a similar vision." Belaris sighed the weariness setting in "Is the request for the Salamanders on standby to be sent?" Micheal nodded.

Belaris turned away "We can't take any chances we have to find it so it does not get to that point." Belaris heard Micheal speak out the divination or "prophecy" "Through bright blue gem the bird will shriek to consume all within reach. It will caw to the sky as it flies high to devour everything in the sky." Belaris closed his eyes as he muttered a prayer to the emperor "We will find it. Emperor guide my hand."

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So yeah end of part 1 the next part of the story will be called the twin dark stars and will kinda focus on two certain characters. Hope everyone enjoyed part 1.

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fething loved it man, had me glued to the screen the past few days. Keep up the goodwork!
   
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fething loved it man, had me glued to the screen the past few days. Keep up the goodwork!


Thanks! something is coming soon!
   
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The twin dark stars

Intro

In the time we left Zatos I explained to my lord how the galaxy changed that the imperium is divided by the cicatrix maledictum or the great rift. The 13th black crusade and other events that happened almost simultaneously caused this great rift to occur. It's been one hundred years since that happened but due to the nature of the warp some planets experienced little to no time shift. I also added that the imperium has moved to create new weapons to my master's surprise. I pointed out that it's vetted by a living primarch, my master was shocked he asked which one and I told him it's the primarch of the ultramarines.

I added that he bought new weapons and part of those new weapons are Astartes. My lord was in sheer disbelief at that fact but his response was interesting he was relishing the opportunity to face them. When the news spread around everyone had the same response. As everyone got used to the ship Marthas created a temple of sorts in one of the large areas of the ship. My lord trusted Marthas with the suits of terminator armour and the first to get one was Silas. From what I hear to get one is quite deadly so to speak I was called a few times to repair torn of limbs and grievous injuries I have no idea what Marthas is doing.

Apart from that Marthas does not really talk to me anymore, he says he is too busy or he has other things to focus on. Jedrick gathered many of the human soldiers and pretty much has done what he did before on the last ship. Those who grow tired of his leadership or want the strength and power Marthas provides go to the temple.

Another note is that Jedrick has also started to lose interest in talking to me as well I mean I can come and go from his place but he does not seem to want to converse. Now the traitor? Sebastian has been stripped of his power armour he is no longer chained but it seems he has lost all interest in doing anything, I think my lord is using him as a trophy or warning of sorts.

The Astartes Noxus has been placed within a dreadnought when he woke up in the medical tank the contents were drained and he thrashed uselessly when my lord told him he is going to be entombed within a dreadnought. He shouted and begged not to be placed within it. My lord did not exactly care in a sense he wanted Noxus's "visions" or poetry and he wants Noxus to see his father when he ever does arrive. My lord made my task on this ship is to record whatever he says. At first my lord had interest but after awhile he decided that Noxus in the end did not have anything useful to say and stopped coming to me for updates. His last words on Noxus "At least my brother has some combat use."

He did not exactly me order to stop so I kept writing and recording his words when he speaks it's like he is sleep talking. Well... he spends majority of his time sleeping. Oddly I had a dangerous thought that I actually disagreed with my lord Noxus had some interesting things to say if you think about it.

Finally to talk of recent days? We hit two worlds. The first? using the nova cannon we smashed aside the small escorts protecting the planet and crippled the cruiser ships and because the warband were eager to try the new gear Caius has repaired(He has also been training tech serfs) they landed on the planet. They essentially enslaved the population I asked my master if he needs me to do anything but he said it's not required. I did not know exactly how to feel about that I spent 100 years trying to be better for him yet he said he does not require me to do anything.

He did have Isira infiltrate the lower class populace and Isabella handling the upper class during the war and ordering them to corrupt a portion of them to make the battle easier. Camila was also there on the battlefield(At the far back playing music) playing her violin. The music she has been playing lately has gotten... strange? Even so when the warband was done my lord tried his hand at painting some of the people captured he tore their souls from their bodies and placed it into the painting. The painting moves and screams if one looks at them. He hanged them within the house of the planetary governor for the imperials to find.

The second planet? Had barely any defenses I asked my lord if he needs me to do something he told me no again. He had Isira and Isabella in act the same plan. When the battle was won my master decided to hold another feast this time the populace was the meat he also partook. After the feast was done and the warband was going to leave my lord found a piano on the world and took to practising he seems to enjoy playing with Camila. Camila also enjoys when she practices with him.

Since then the corruption on the ship is.. thick extremely thick far more than the last one. I can see my lord subtly changing growing in power as he grows the less he asks of me. Of course I do not mind I think. At least I think so.

Now about myself? Nothing much has changed save I dream of killing people I dream of hacking and eating tearing people apart. So nothing really important. Now I wonder what planet my lord will choose to attack next.

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Chapter 25

In the void one star looks upwards as another star falls towards it.

Asriel walked the halls of the ship the thick smell of musk in the air the corruption permeating every part of the ship. The halls of the ship are now painted in vivid colours mixed with other vile unidentifiable colours, the sounds of screams of pain and pleasure echoing through out every hall. When this all started happening his lord said that it should be embraced because the warband has to to become a form that his father would find pleasing to look at.

Asriel often wondered what his lord's father actually looked like. His master has described him in detail when he recorded his words yet Asriel wanted to see him to understand why all the Astartes are so fixated on him. Perhaps if his lord get his wish then that day may come soon.
Asriel thought upon his task at this time to record Noxus' words no one exactly cared for them anymore but he found it interesting to say the least. Noxus words must have some purpose it's clear to him that he is a psyker but his gifts took a far different turn. Noxus is held in a rather large room located near the docking bar area he is chained heavily to the wall.

Asriel did not exactly see the point in it because Noxus is always asleep by his own volition perhaps subconsciously using his powers to put himself in a deep slumber. Noxus hates what he is and does not want to feel or see the state he is in when he ever awakens. When Noxus is dropped into battle he is sometimes still sleeping but even so he fights and largely anyone who gets in his way usually is injured or killed.

When Asriel thinks of Noxus he wonders at times if there is anything he could do he barely knows him but he feels that perhaps he could do something. So in his spare time which he has plenty of now Asriel took to studying machinery and manipulating it with his psychic powers. Asriel wondered if he could mix biomancy and the discipline he is studying together he might be able to sort something out.

Asriel reached Noxus' chamber he entered in the code to enter, as Asriel entered the room he looked up to the large frame. The dreadnought looked bulky and was rather crude to say the least his weaponry is two large fists. The black and pink paint is heavily chipped and worn out. Noxus room has a host of spare parts and machinery scattered so quick repairs can be done to the frame.

Asriel grabbed his seat and sat in front of Noxus and waited as always he waited for him to say something. Asriel opened his journal containing many of his words, Asriel traced his finger down the page and smiled. Asriel felt tiny prick within his mind "Why do you keep coming here to listen to this piece of junk?" said Meliva. Asriel sighed "So what made you decide to finally talk after that long silence?" Meliva moved slightly gently trying to comfort him "don't worry I just thought you would enjoy the peace and quiet and I personally dislike that you are wasting our time."
Asriel shook his head in disagreement "Lord Adelram ordered me to this." Meliva retorted "He doesn't care. He care's more about delivering torment to his enemies and creating music on the piano and practising with Camila than what you do here." Asriel looked down the page again he clenched his hands "I can't shake the feeling that this would be important one day." Meliva sighed "like what? What could be so important? How about instead of doing something boring like that we have some fun?"

Asriel grimace slightly in annoyance "no. I will do this for example in many of his possible predictions he mentions a tree multiple times. This must be important." Meliva hissed "A tree? It could be any tree you focusing on this you are going to slip away from his attentions." Asriel perked up slightly "What do you mean slip away? Slip away from who?" Meliva chuckled "Of our master of course. He is right now paying more attention to the new slaves you bought him than you or are you to blind to notice it?"

Asriel frowned "If he wants to spend time with them that is his wish. Why should I interfere with that? It's not my place." Meliva tutted in annoyance before falling silent again. Asriel hoped she would remain so. Asriel looked up at Noxus again he was about to rise until he heard a voice it was gravelly due to the vox. Noxus spoke slowly ++Darkness rises in one's mind.++ Asriel wrote down Noxus words he tapped his pen on his cheek "darkness rises in one's mind? Darkness in who's mind? I wonder.." He looked up to Noxus again who continued ++Darkness seeks vengeance for all that comes to it as it seeks to devour all that is sin.++

Asriel quickly wrote the last sentance he gazed up to Noxus again who is now silent. Asriel smiled weakly "So that's it?" Asriel rose from his seat he turned to leave Noxus shouted his voice echoing ++A SHINING SWORD PIERCES THE DARKNESS TO SET ONE FREE++
Asriel froze he flicked open his Journal he slowly wrote it the words down. Asriel surprised said under his breath "this has never happen before..." Asriel waited for a few moments just in case he has something else to say. After a few minutes Noxus did not say another word if Asriel listened closely he can hear him sleeping soundly, Asriel rushed out of the room he wondered if his lord would like to know of this update.

Asriel walked to the uper levels largely only those owned by Astartes may walk the upper floors there is no system in place anymore each Astartes now have their own personal serfs to do with as they wish. Asriel approached his lord's chambers he can hear music. Asriel opened the twin doors slowly. Asriel looked around his lord's room he has fully delved into sorcery largely leaving behind his past as an apothecary his room is now filled with strange books. He did instruct Caius and detailed heavily the process of creating an Astartes to Caius' glee. This information he then taught to his serfs in varying levels. Asriel recalled how rapidly his lord has been increasing in power he has surpassed him ages ago in such a short time frame it's also clear he is now swelling with the favour of the slaanesh.

Asriel continued to examine the room, Great silk strands lined his walls, his master had a vintage wine storage they looted from a planet and he had skulls lining the walls of his room that either weeped black tears or wailed in torment. There are several chained slaves in the room some crying due to the wounds inflicted by his master and others caught within the corruption of slaanesh exploring all manner of pursuits.

Camila and his lord have been trying to interwove all of these sounds together into music. Asriel can see small wisps dancing around both of them. His lord missed a note, the wisps dissipated his master swore in annoyance Camila stopped "Adelram are you alright?" Asriel in surprise wondered how she could easily call him by his name he looked at Camila her hair has grown back slightly and which has been handled by Isabella. Camila is also wearing a slik dress that exposed her back. His lord turned to her "It's alright we are getting closer." Camila lowered her violin "Same time?" Adelram smiled gently "Yes. Please be here."

As Camila walked by she smiled at him gently as she left the room Asriel could see she has fallen completly and utterly just by looking at her eyes. Asriel wondered what exactly happened between Camila and his master during the month he traveled the warzone on Zatos.
Asriel looked to his lord who rose from the piano Asriel walked forward and bowed to one knee "My lord." His lord did not even look at him as he spoke "So what is it Asriel?" Asriel cast his head down slightly "There has been a change in Noxus. I think his visions are getting stronger." His lord sighed "I see. So Asriel why don't you try something else?"

Asriel looked up "Try something else? I..." His master walked over to the wine storage and poured himself a glass "Anything you want. Just do it." Asriel began thinking what does he want to do? He could not think anything he held no desire to do anything but to serve "What do you wish me to do?" His lord creased his brow slightly "Think of what I asked you. Now I have things to do leave me."

Asriel slowly rose and walked out of his chambers confused he wondered what could he do. Art largely held no interest for him. Murder happens almost every minute on the ship and murder does not really move him at all. Music is covered by Camila. As Asriel said Camila within his mind it drifted to the thought how she said his name so casually. What is Camila to his lord now?

Asriel shook his head trying to focus he said out loud "Try to do something I want..." Asriel had no idea where to start. As he walked the halls thinking he bumped into someone the person in Asriel's eyes purposely tumbled to the ground. Asriel could see it's a woman who is clearly displaying her leg seductively Asriel simply raised his eyebrow in confusion. The woman sighed as she got to her feet "You are seriously boring you know that?" Asriel recognised the voice Asriel said "Sitri."

Asriel folded his arms "Does Marthas know you are doing this?" Sitri shrugged "He does not exactly care anymore he is entirely focused in turning the Astartes around him into the best warriors they can be." Sitri leaned in close to him "So are you busy Meliva?" Asriel frowned "That's not my name." Sitri smiled "What is a name really? Only the gods know our true names."

What Sitri said caught Asriel's attention "So is Sitri your true name then?" Sitri leaned back "Well, it's a part of it the person who I work for revealed it to me." Asriel knew that both Sitri and Naberius are Marthas' helpers but they are not exactly his servants. Marthas said they both walked the realm of slaanesh and returned Asriel narrowed his eyes at Sitri "you two don't move without a reason. What do you want?" Sitri pouted "Why don't we talk about what you want? Well you largely don't want anything since Meliva had you in that church." Asriel growled in anger his teeth shifting with his anger "How did you know about that?!" Sitri casually shrugged "Don't worry Naberius and I won't tell a soul. I know it's quite a sore spot."

Sitri then twirled around laughing to Asriel's confusion she stopped and moved in close to Asriel and fully removed her hood Asriel recognised Sitri as a she but looking at her face in full view it was almost completely sexless. She had long flowing white hair that shimmered slightly she leaned in close to kiss him. Asriel did not stop the gesture but it just confirmed he felt nothing at all. She moved to his ear and whispered "Only you can hear me right now. The other one is blind at the moment so listen. If you wish to serve Adelram don't do what he just told you to do. Don't listen to the neverborn within you keep on the path of the one in iron." Sitri leaned back smiling she placed her hood back on and walked away down the corridor into darkness.

Asriel looked at his book all of Noxus's words recorded so far. Oddly enough he felt a small sense of purpose now but a tinge of conflict on side due to the directive his lord just gave him. Asriel decided to go to his room to review what he recorded so far.

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I want to ask why the new direction where asriel is not asked to do anything or help in anyway? Why marthas and everyone else doesnt have the time of day for asriel? makes me a little bummed for him honestly. I thought he would be staying a scribe of adelram's recording his words, contiuing to discuss philosophy with marthas and overall still recording everyones histories and asking questions. Damn you write so well it really bummed me out haha.
   
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I want to ask why the new direction where asriel is not asked to do anything or help in anyway? Why marthas and everyone else doesnt have the time of day for asriel? makes me a little bummed for him honestly. I thought he would be staying a scribe of adelram's recording his words, contiuing to discuss philosophy with marthas and overall still recording everyones histories and asking questions. Damn you write so well it really bummed me out haha.


It's more to do with when you truly commit yourself to the road of slaanesh you start to lose interest in certain things really quickly. Think on the novel Fulgrim in the horus heresy they fell pretty dam quickly compared to everyone else Asriel was like a... novelty of sorts but soon as they found their chief excess it utterly consumes them before the warband was just moving around the galaxy doing whatever. Now they have a clear objective and the corruption is heavily setting in now slaanesh was essentially using Asriel as a vehicle to bring utter corruption to the warband.

Also you feeling bummed is mission accomplished with slaanesh always got do more and reach higher or this could happen in a second.

None of the warband hate Asriel its just you know.. they are getting slightly bored of him or they have other important concerns. Of course our glorious warband leader being the prideful chaos space marine he is does not want to say it out loud he does not want to get bored of him so he gave him that order at the end of the last chapter. Now? Being the loyal slave to darkness that Asriel is and he cares for his lord so what do you think Asriel is going to do? There is going to be a lot of suffering coming up and he will endure it all for him.

The next chapter shall explain further.

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Chapter 26

Both stars slowly rise as they reach to kill the bird in the sky

Asriel felt himself panting he was out of breath it's clear he is chasing someone or something within the halls of the ship. He felt tired but alert the strange thing is that it felt like he was gazing at this from a distance he felt inclosed within his own body. He felt his head moving upwards he can see a man running screaming for someone to help him.

Asriel wondered why he hasn't closed in on him he can easily catch up with a normal human even so he felt joy in the hunt. The man he was chasing eventually tripped, Asriel jumped on top of him fangs tearing off flesh and cutting with his claws. Asriel could hear his screams reverberating in his mind his pulse fading as he devoured him.

Asriel blinked he opened his eyes Asriel was on his bed looking upwards Asriel rose from his bed. Asriel creased his brow the dreams have started to happen ever since they got on the ship the last dream was far more vivid than before. Asriel instinctively searched for the taste of blood in his mouth moving his tongue around slightly he could not taste any blood within his mouth but the dream felt so real. Asriel looked around his room there are some weapons on the wall and his desk is filled with stacks of books. Asriel got off his bed and went to his desk he flicked through a book his recordings on combining biomancy with the heretech discipline he felt he was on the cusp of something but he needed to work on it more. Asriel heard a knock on his door he wondered who it was Asriel opened the door manually. Asriel frowned when he saw who it was "Isira. What do you want?" Isira's skin colour is now far more porcelain with a slight shade of pink, mutation is for more rife on the ship than before.

Isira almost barged into his room she looked around "Asriel you can do far more with your room. Spice it up a little." said Isira. Asriel folded his arms "I said what do you want." Isira sighed "fine I will get to the point. How do you feel about your position within Lord Adelram's eyes?" Asriel gave it a thought other than he does not talk to him as much anymore he never thought exactly on how he feels about the situation all he knew if his master did not want to see him that is his directive. Asriel walked over to his desk picking up a book containing Noxus words "I don't think much on it if he does not need anything of me at the moment I will oblige."

Asriel can see Isira shaking her head "Asriel you are part of the competition now." Asriel raised his eyebrow "Competition? I don't understand." Isira sat on his bed "Think on it how much he sees Camila compared to you." Asriel held his confusion "And? It's his right if he wants to see her." Isira wiped her hand down her face in annoyance "Here I am trying to give you some small advice and here you are too dense to realise it."

Asriel narrowed his eyes at Isira "What do you want me to realize? If my lord enjoys Camila's company his happiness is mine." Isira's mouth fell almost agape she chuckled slightly "So selfless for him. That is so you, fine then do what you want." Isira got up from his bed and left his room. Asriel held the book in his hand he looked down to it he could not shake the feeling that it will be truly important but now the book felt like a heavy weight in his hand. His lord told him to do something else but Sitri said to focus on the one in Iron. The one in iron he assumed to be Noxus.

Asriel gripped the book part of him wanted to drop it but Sitri said that doing this will serve his lord's interest if that's the case he can't stop and do something else. Asriel's heart twisted slightly in his chest it felt like he was doing something wrong Asriel bit his lip as he left his room.
Asriel walked the halls back towards Noxus' room each step felt extremely heavy Asriel recalled the last time he failed his lord. It was so long ago to him but to his master it's only been a few months. He did not want to feel like that again but a part of him disagreed with his lords stance on Noxus. Noxus is not useless. Everyone insults him Silas calls him cripple and disgusting. Marthas considers him a useless invalid. Lord Jedrick and Adelram thought they could get something out of him and largely defaulted to Silas and Marthas' viewpoints.

Asriel warred with himself until he found himself in front of Noxus' door his hand slowly moved to the panel he pressed each number slowly the doors slid open. As always Asriel sat in front of Noxus and waited. Asriel waited for several minutes, minutes soon turned to hours. Asriel sighed "Not talking today?" Asriel got up to leave as he did so a voice boomed from the dreadnought "Why are you here creature?" Asriel's eyes went wide he sat back down again "Lord Noxus I-" Noxus interrupted him he repeated "Why are you here creature? I asked a question." Asriel looked away slightly thinking he then looked up to Noxus "I am here to record your words." Asriel waited for a response, the dreadnought shifted slightly it strained at the chains "Why are you recording my ramblings? Of a mad fool? Of a cripple?"

Asriel rose from his seat he shook his head in disagreement "No Lord Noxus don't say that. I think what you are saying is important." Noxus stopped straining at the chains "Who told you to do that?" Asriel looked down to the book "Lord Adelram did. He said you might have something useful to say." A laugh came from Noxus the laugh crackled due to the vox speaker "So has he found anything useful?" Asriel held the book he looked away "My lord is doing other things now I continue to record your words and if something of note comes up I tell him about it" Noxus chuckled "I see he has most likely lost interest what you are doing is a lost cause. You are doing this out of pity I don't need it." Asriel flicked his head towards Noxus and stepped forward slightly "I am not!"

Asriel flicked open the book he pointed at several pages "You mention a tree multiple times. This must be important. Now Lord Noxus you are awake can you tell me what it is?" Noxus sighed it sounded like a grumble "It is a tree of the gods. That is what I assume it is the location of said tree I have no idea." Asriel quickly annotated the words Asriel mused out loud "tree of the gods..."

Asriel flicked to another page "Yesterday you said darkness rises in one's mind. Can you tell me the meaning behind that?" Asriel waited for Noxus to respond after a few seconds Asriel said "Lord Noxus are you still awake?" Noxus voice boomed out after a moment "I am still awake about that passage don't worry about it. It's nothing." Asriel raised his eyebrow "Lord Noxus after you said that several lines dealing with the darkness came after that are you sure it's nothing?" Noxus strained forward at the chains he spoke firmly "I said it's nothing creature." Noxus stepped back slightly "Now go away I want to sleep." Asriel rose he gave a small bow "I see. I will be here same time tomorrow." As Asriel said that he could hear Noxus sighing in annoyance. Asriel left the room after today events he felt assured that this is correct as he walked the halls back to his room he saw two serfs in discussion "Paul was found torn to pieces." the other serf responded clearly concerned "Aye his master never harmed him so this is strange." Asriel listened in but dismissed it he had to focus on going over his book again perhaps he could find different meanings to Noxus words while he slept.

Asriel was close to his room he saw a hooded person walking by he stopped in front of him he coughed "So you found purpose then? A purpose to follow?" Asriel raised his eyebrow "Naberius? What do you want?" Naberius hackled he coughed again "No reason I just wanted to see the strength of your desire to walk this road. I do say if you go to your room and look at that book again you will be trapped on this road of suffering and complexity. Asriel cocked his head slightly "Turning back from what and road of suffering? Complexity? What are you talking about?" Naberius nodded "You still think on arbitrary terms you think that everything is evil that there is no good. That you are evil do not fret child you are the purest good because you suffer the most for him. Suffering is the wine for the body and soul. To experience the complexity of the cosmos is the true good of the galaxy."

Asriel shook his head "I am not suffering Naberius." Naberius chuckled "Oh really? Or are you just denying it? You are not curious as to why Camila speaks so casually with your lord? You know he only allows those he truly favours to say his name like that."

Asriel looked away slightly he hated talking with him it's like he is peeling him away layer by layer he hated it. Asriel scowled "What do you want Naberius?! Enough with the rhetoric! Speak plainly!" Naberius shrugged he walked to Asriel and held his shoulders with both of his hands. Naberius removed his hood Naberius had similar eyes to him but it's far different. It's like he has seen far greater things in his life time. At that moment looking at Naberius and Sitri Asriel wondered who they truly worked for. Naberius spoke almost in a whisper "It's as I said if you open that book in your room. You will be put through the purest suffering. All the suffering the complex webs of you growing yourself for your lord will be nothing compared to the path that you can now walk but if you can handle it you will meet the purest good in the galaxy."

Naberius tapped his shoulders and nodded, Naberius placed his hood back on and walked down the hall into darkness. Asriel looked at the book again for some reason it felt like a lead weight that he should drop it. Asriel held the book tightly he made his way to his room and sat at his desk.
Asriel placed the book down and gazed at it his lord said find something else to do. Perhaps he should torch it and focus on that. Yet Asriel recalled the state Noxus is in he knows he wants someone to listen to him. If he didn't he would not explain the meaning of the tree to him and the fact Noxus stated it's a tree of the gods it must be important in the future. Another thing he found noteworthy is his vision on the darkness the fact Noxus did not want to speak further on it shows he is hiding something.

Asriel opened the book again, he turned to the page he read it out loud all together "Darkness rises in ones mind. Darkness seeks vegnance for all that comes to it as it seeks to devour all that is sin. A shining sword pirces the darkness to set one free...." Asriel mused on the fact it's most likely related to the warband since sin is mentioned. The issue is identifying the darkness. Asriel began writing down possible theories on what that is he smiled it's been a long time since he last did this.

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Haha nice. The new direction is refreshing. All of a sudden he's back at square one and has to work it up again.

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