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Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

Ok so this my first attempt to write something from a necron perspective. i wanted to convey the the individualness of a lord compared to his other necrons and his connectivity to them, please read it and comment as you like. i am by no means a proffesional nor do i want to be. i just like good stories. so here goes:

OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:09:50


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

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Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Interesting...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT

This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:04:20


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in be
Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker





Belgium, Mechelen!

love the fluff truly love it! once again necrons have given me something nice to read

I hope more is underway

Check out the Avengers vid! : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9D_Vi2_BtKc&feature=youtu.be

Also take a peek at the new intro I managed to develop for my future videos! = http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk4yVUsqvy0

Avenger Crons : AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! <= fully in painting process. View progress in this thread = http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/454194.page 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:04:43


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in za
Fresh-Faced New User




That was awesome. This was better than most of the fluff in the codexes (codii ?)

Please do continue the exploits of Planet Lord487.0

<edit>
PS. As can be seen from my join date and post count, I'm a lurker, I only post if I feel it will be constructive and it's necessary. Your brilliant fiction forced my hand... so to speak, and I just had to say job well done.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/10 12:48:53


 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

thanks, more to come soon!

Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in gb
Utilizing Careful Highlighting






A post Brexit Wasteland

Some of the only necron fluff i have seen, and you really capture the essence of the necrons!
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT

This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:05:09


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in gb
Utilizing Careful Highlighting






A post Brexit Wasteland

ohh, very nice, im am loving it, and really like how you are progressing th encrons lords personality.
   
Made in us
Bane Thrall






MAKE. MORE. PLEASE.



They stare into your soul.
 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

Thank you every one for your support. I enjoy writing this but for me it is extremely time consuming for I am a very slow writer/typer. I promise more to come as soon as I can and thanks again.


P.S. tell all of your friends, the more comments, the more I am motivated to spin this tale!

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/12 22:18:19


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in be
Blood-Raging Khorne Berserker





Belgium, Mechelen!

Damn man! you write very very decently! love it!

Please continue with this very nice story about the Necrons.

Check out the Avengers vid! : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9D_Vi2_BtKc&feature=youtu.be

Also take a peek at the new intro I managed to develop for my future videos! = http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xk4yVUsqvy0

Avenger Crons : AVENGERS ASSEMBLE! <= fully in painting process. View progress in this thread = http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/454194.page 
   
Made in gb
Utilizing Careful Highlighting






A post Brexit Wasteland

lowmanjason wrote: Then out of nowhere, a blinding flash of electricity bolted from his empty hand striking four warriors. The bolt had taken down 3 warriors and caught Planet Lord487.0’s eye. Watching afar from his command post this gave him a new idea.


Can you explain this bit? And forgive my confusion but who`s hand is it? The terminators?

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/13 21:08:37


 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

sorry about that, that would be the SM leader. (edit made) i'm sure you could figure out what kind of charactor he is!!!

Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Librarian...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

purplefood wrote:Librarian...


Yeay gold star!

Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

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Made in fr
Opportunist



La Rochelle

Waouh...

Continue the good work, this is... so necrontyr

I don't really find the words, sorry, but this is amazing.

SkaerKrow wrote : "We killed our own gods. What chance do you have against us?"
Kurgash wrote: "Necrons, a dead race that is more dead than anyone else. So dead that they rebuild themselves just to die again!" 
   
Made in gb
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A post Brexit Wasteland

Ahh, thanks.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/06/13 22:28:21


 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

OK SO I HAD TO TWEEK A BIT OF THE STORY TO GO ALONG WITH THE NEW CODEX.
GO TO PAGE 2 TO SEE THE RE-BOOT

This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/12/29 21:05:48


Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in nl
Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings






North of your position

interresting view, I think.. nicely done!

   
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

purplefood wrote:The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...


hehe, nope not any more...

Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

lowmanjason wrote:
purplefood wrote:The Ultramarines don't have a 13th company...


hehe, nope not any more...

Okay then...
The Ultramarine chapter never had a 13th company...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

lol... who wrote this story me or some GW punk?

Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Most people like to keep their own stuff within line with GW stuff...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Irked Necron Immortal






Wisconsin

it is in lline with GW stuff, its a made up lord and a made up company within to factions that exist in the GW world. if i had to stick with strictly what was in the codex and other fluff, the necrons would take over the univers and some how the ultramarines would claim victory for it!

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Ariel: He will do what he must when the time comes.
Raziel: By choosing his own death? A sacrifice for the world? You don't know Kain very well.

The Awakening RE-BOOT

DIY Home Theater Repair and Instalation

 
   
Made in nl
Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings






North of your position

most do.

   
Made in us
Bane Thrall






Jesus this gets better every time, keep going at it! i love it so far!



They stare into your soul.
 
   
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Massachusetts

I do like what's written. Thanks for that. I have some minor fluff quibbles. Pariahs are soulless. I never figured soullessness to be a result of their creation, but rather one of their original ingredients. Take one soulless human, add some necron technology and you end up with a Pariah. Getting their hands on a soulless human was always a good way to set up for a conflict between the Necrons and the Inquisition. I can accept the idea that there might have been a soulless Ultramarine. But I doubt the whole 13th company was made up of such individuals, especially if serving with a librarian. In the game, Pariahs cannot teleport, since they are not Necrons. Personally, I never liked that restriction, but just a thought if you want to be strict on yourself. In your narrative, I was assuming your Pariah was teleported to the field of battle. He could have been riding in a Monolith though. Just to be clear, these aren't complaints. Just my point of view.

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