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Made in hr
Regular Dakkanaut



Slavonski Brod-Croatia

Hello all

Here is my 8th video . Was a litle sick this two weeks so could not get a game to record.
Hope you like the video and feedback would be great.

Thank you for watching
And sorry for the bad english

   
Made in us
Bonkers Buggy Driver with Rockets





Houston, TX

First and most importantly, beautiful armies and terrain! Very impressive all the way around.

Very nice editing and effects. Smooth quick transitions with just a bit of music and some nice text to highlight the main points.

During deployment, zoom out a bit so we can see the overall layout of the whole battlefield instead of zooming in and jumping from unit to unit.

Thanks for keeping the turn summaries very brief. I think anyone making a video bat rep should aim to keep it about 10 - 15 minutes. It is hard to find time to watch anything longer and you can still cover the main points of the battle in this amount of time. So good job here.

I'm sorry, but the sniffling is a little distracting. I know you were sick and there isn't much you can do about it, but just giving my feedback!

It might be good if you can include a text summary of the objectives accomplished by each side at the end of each turn like you did for Slay the Warlord and First Blood by writing out the objectives accomplished to help us follow the scoring a bit better.

Overall, I liked it. I don't watch many video battle reports, but this was good. I would like to see some nice photos of the armies involved as they looked really nice and it is hard to get good views of them in video reports. If you could, please check out my ork battle report on this forum and leave me some feedback on mine!

Xhorik 87th Drop Troops P&M blog https://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/775655.page

Project log and campaign featuring Orks, Imperial Guard, Marines, Tyranids: http://www.xhorikwar.blogspot.com/
Currently focused on our Horus Heresy campaign with White Scars, Death Guard and Imperial Militia.  
   
Made in hr
Regular Dakkanaut



Slavonski Brod-Croatia

The Riddle of Steel :
Thanks for the feedback .
-For the deployment ill do what you said on the next batrep
-Ill put the text for the objective that are accomplished at the end of the summaries
- ill take some pictures of the army next time

And sorry for the snifing i didnt notice that i was doing it all the time during filming
   
Made in us
Bonkers Buggy Driver with Rockets





Houston, TX

I know how it is to be sick! You just start sniffling so much you don't even notice it. But seriously, the armies and terrain look fantastic. I am looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. It's not too common to see a large ork army painted to a high standard.

Xhorik 87th Drop Troops P&M blog https://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/775655.page

Project log and campaign featuring Orks, Imperial Guard, Marines, Tyranids: http://www.xhorikwar.blogspot.com/
Currently focused on our Horus Heresy campaign with White Scars, Death Guard and Imperial Militia.  
   
Made in us
Never Forget Isstvan!





Green Bay, Wisconson

Nice Bat rep. good looking armies.. Well done.

 
   
Made in us
Stealthy Space Wolves Scout





Florida

That ork army is beautifully painted! I like how sweet and to the point the report was as well. The editing was nice.
   
 
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