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Made in us
Hurr! Ogryn Bone 'Ead!










C&C welcome!
I want to say i finished this one in 3 hours .. . with waiting for washes to dry and dinner included in that time ! Ive always been more of a get models painted and on the field at a good quality, but i would like to improve my skills and put more effort into my work especially larger pieces such as this !
Thanks for looking
fmj

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All the Emperor requires of us guardsmen is that we hold the line,and die fighting. Its what we do best. We die standing.  
   
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Regular Dakkanaut




Awesome model. Love the rust on the right, extremely realistic
   
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Powerful Phoenix Lord





Awesome paintwork on an awesome kit.
   
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Blood-Drenched Death Company Marine





United Kingdom

Very solid work with well applied weathering.

   
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Hurr! Ogryn Bone 'Ead!






Thank you for the compliments!
If anyone has tips on how I can improve my work! I would be very thankful!

All the Emperor requires of us guardsmen is that we hold the line,and die fighting. Its what we do best. We die standing.  
   
Made in us
Hurr! Ogryn Bone 'Ead!






My Renegade Valdor Tank Hunter! one of my Favorite tanks, not only can it kill stuff in one turn! it can kill itself !!! i loved working on this one , lease let me know what you think, and what i can improve on .
thanks for looking
FMJ






All the Emperor requires of us guardsmen is that we hold the line,and die fighting. Its what we do best. We die standing.  
   
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Decrepit Dakkanaut






Burtucky, Michigan

Well since you asked for it, only 2 things jump out at me. The Chaos symbol on the one tank and the white part on the other are far to clean for how you painted the rest of the tanks. The Chaos symbol needs some metal chips here and there, other wise it looks good. You can find easy and nice paint chip tutorials on dakka.

The white part is just too white. Never paint white pure white because it looks unnatural and you cant really add any detail to it. So go a few shades darker on the white.


That being said those are some nice looking tanks and would look great on the table! Keep that up
   
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Hurr! Ogryn Bone 'Ead!






@kingcracker
thank you, ill be sure to touch that up! more to come... i have a great unclean one, i want to improve
fmj


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Daemon Prince Mammon , Former Deacon of Cardinal Xaphan from the Siege of Vraks . Same question as above but other wise done !




thanks for looking !!!
FMJ

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All the Emperor requires of us guardsmen is that we hold the line,and die fighting. Its what we do best. We die standing.  
   
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Daemonic Dreadnought





Eye of Terror

Agreeing with KingCracker here. The Chaos symbol actually kind of blends into the camo, at least in the pic where the light does not fall directly on it. There's not enough contrast to clearly define it, given the other details on the model.

Very good job overall, a few suggestions:

1) Some weathering could take this to the next level. The GW stipple brush is actually very good, once you get the hang of it. Touch it into some paint, hold it near the model, and run your thumb over the bristles to hit the model with spots of paint.

2) The white does stand out. I am not sure you need to go darker with the base paint. A wash could do the trick, especially a brown or blue one.

3) Looking closely at all the pictures, the thing I would like to see is some oil seepage. It just feels like these tanks are a little worn and the carriage should reflect a lack of proper maintenance.

4) This is me being picky, but I kept looking at the crevaces on both vehicles for build-ups of dirt. Some dry pigment could add a lot to these vehicles.



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@techsoldaten
thankyou! picky is what i want! ill try the wash and oil stains... i ordered the FW weathering powders and cant wait to give them a try!
FMJ

All the Emperor requires of us guardsmen is that we hold the line,and die fighting. Its what we do best. We die standing.  
   
 
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