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Hey i have recently got back into 40k after a longish hiatus, i have always loved guard and want to make a good list that can fight decently in close combat as well as shoot well.
i've made a wee 2000pt list but would like some help to make sure it is good enough before i start buying models so any criticism good be great
Below is the list i made please be as brutal as you wish

Cheers

++ Vanguard Detachment +1CP (Imperium - Inquisition) [21 PL, 323pts] ++

+ HQ +

Inquisitor Coteaz [4 PL, 100pts]: Terrify

Inquisitor Greyfax [5 PL, 85pts]: Dominate

+ Elites +

Acolytes [5 PL, 50pts]: Ordo Malleus
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter

Acolytes [5 PL, 50pts]: Ordo Malleus
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter
. Acolyte: Bolt pistol, Storm bolter

Jokaero Weaponsmith [2 PL, 38pts]: Digital Weapons

++ Auxiliary Support Detachment -1CP (Imperium - Officio Assassinorum) [5 PL, 90pts] ++

+ Elites +

Vindicare Assassin [5 PL, 90pts]

++ Brigade Detachment +12CP (Imperium - Astra Militarum) [94 PL, 1587pts] ++

+ No Force Org Slot +

Regimental Doctrine: Catachan

+ HQ +

Colonel 'Iron Hand' Straken [4 PL, 75pts]: Display Astra Militarum Orders, Lead From the Front, Warlord

Company Commander [2 PL, 35pts]: Chainsword, Display Astra Militarum Orders, Plasma pistol

Primaris Psyker [2 PL, 46pts]: Force Stave, Psychic Barrier, Psychic Maelstrom

Tank Commander [12 PL, 217pts]: Display Tank Orders, Heavy Bolter, Heavy Bolters, Heavy Stubber, Kurov's Aquila
. Command Battle Tank: Battle Cannon

+ Troops +

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

Infantry Squad [3 PL, 48pts]
. 8x Guardsman
. Guardsman W/ Special Weapon: Plasma gun
. Sergeant: Boltgun, Chainsword

+ Elites +

Bullgryns [13 PL, 168pts]
. Bullgryn: Bullgryn Maul, Slabshield
. Bullgryn: Brute Shield, Bullgryn Maul
. Bullgryn: Bullgryn Maul, Slabshield
. Bullgryn Bone 'ead: Bullgryn Maul, Slabshield

Ministorum Priest [2 PL, 36pts]: Bolt pistol, Chainsword

Sergeant Harker [3 PL, 50pts]

+ Fast Attack +

Hellhounds [6 PL, 115pts]
. Hellhound: Heavy Bolter, Heavy Stubber, Track guards, Turret-mounted Inferno Cannon

Scout Sentinels [3 PL, 45pts]
. Scout Sentinel: Multi-laser

Scout Sentinels [3 PL, 45pts]
. Scout Sentinel: Multi-laser

+ Heavy Support +

Heavy Weapons Squad [3 PL, 33pts]
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar

Heavy Weapons Squad [3 PL, 33pts]
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar
. Heavy Weapon Team: Mortar

Leman Russ Battle Tanks [20 PL, 401pts]
. Leman Russ Demolisher: Heavy Flamer, Heavy Flamers, Heavy Stubber, Turret-mounted Demolisher Siege Cannon
. Leman Russ Executioner: Heavy Bolter, Heavy Stubber, Plasma Cannons, Turret-mounted Executioner Plasma Cannon

++ Total: [120 PL, 2000pts] ++