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Here is what I'm thinking about running with:
Positive:
Heed the Wisdom of the Ancients
Scions of Mars

Negative:
Eye to Eye

HQ: Epistolary (9#, 555 Pts)
1 Epistolary @ 555 Pts
Force Weapon; Plasma Pistol (x1); Psychic Hood; Command Squad; Veil of Time
1 Adamantine Mantle @ [35] Pts
1 Psychic Hood @ [0] Pts
4 Command Squad @ [380] Pts
Bolter (x2); Meltagun (x2); Drop Pod; Terminator Honors
1 Drop Pod @ [30] Pts
Storm Bolter; Inertial Guidance System
1 Apothecary @ [80] Pts
Bolt Pistol (x1); Thunder Hammer (x1); Terminator Honors
1 Narthecium @ [0] Pts
1 Reductor @ [0] Pts
1 Company Standard Bearer @ [80] Pts
Bolt Pistol (x1); Thunder Hammer (x1); Terminator Honors
1 Company Banner @ [0] Pts
1 Sergeant @ [70] Pts
Storm Shield (x1); Thunder Hammer (x1); Terminator Honors

Elite: Venerable Dreadnought (1#, 133 Pts)
1 Venerable Dreadnought @ 133 Pts
Dreadnought CCW; Storm Bolter; Assault Cannon; Venerable; Extra Armor; Smoke Launchers

Elite: Venerable Dreadnought (1#, 133 Pts)
1 Venerable Dreadnought @ 133 Pts
Dreadnought CCW; Storm Bolter; Assault Cannon; Venerable; Extra Armor; Smoke Launchers

Troops: Tactical Squad (6#, 115 Pts)
5 Tactical Squad @ 115 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasmagun (x1); Lascannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (6#, 115 Pts)
5 Tactical Squad @ 115 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasmagun (x1); Lascannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (5#, 95 Pts)
4 Tactical Squad @ 95 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasma Cannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (5#, 95 Pts)
4 Tactical Squad @ 95 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasma Cannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Heavy Support: Devastator Squad (5#, 145 Pts)
4 Devastator Squad @ 145 Pts
Heavy Bolter (x2); Missile Launcher (x2)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Fast Attack: Land Speeder Squadron (3#, 235 Pts)
3 Land Speeder Squadron @ 235 Pts
Heavy Bolter (x2); Multi-Melta (x1); Assault Cannon (x2); Heavy Flamer (x1)

Heavy Support: Predator Annihilator (1#, 139 Pts)
1 Predator Annihilator @ 139 Pts
Twin Linked Lascannon; Heavy Bolter (x2); Extra Armor; Searchlight; Smoke Launchers

Heavy Support: Whirlwind (1#, 90 Pts)
1 Whirlwind @ 90 Pts
Vengenance Missiles; Whirlwind Multiple Missile Launcher; Extra Armor

Total Roster Cost: 1850
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As was said above you have alot of diversity in your choice of vehicles and weapons within squads, which can be a good thing. However, I have found that anything but tactical squads works best when focused on one task. My suggestion: take 4 of the same type of weapon in the devastator squad and focus it on one task. Similarly, keep your vehicles and vehicle squads focused on either infantry or armor hunting.

You also have an extremely expensive command squad. Generally it's better to keep those simple since they are just marines and thus have the same vulnerabilities. I'd reccomend dropping the banner and limiting yourself to just one thunder hammer.

The last thing is more of a personal issue but I dislike the 5 man marine and devastator squad, especially devastators with 4 heavy weapons. The issue is that the squads cannot sustain many casualties and continue to be effective or even score. I realize the idea is to get your opponent to target multiple small squads, but my experience has been that this just doesn't work. All it does is let your small squads get trashed. Then again, I always put a heavy and special weapon in my tactical squads because I like them to be flexible.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267384.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267384.page GMT HQ: Techmarine Commander (1#, 150 Pts)
1 Techmarine Commander @ 150 Pts
Techmarine Commander; Power Weapon (x1); Bolter; Servo-Harness
1 Artificer Armor @ [20] Pts
1 Auspex @ [0] Pts
1 Servo-Harness @ [35] Pts
1 Signum @ [0] Pts
1 Terminator Honors @ [15] Pts

HQ: Techmarine Commander (1#, 150 Pts)
1 Techmarine Commander @ 150 Pts
Techmarine Commander; Power Weapon (x1); Bolter; Servo-Harness
1 Artificer Armor @ [20] Pts
1 Auspex @ [0] Pts
1 Servo-Harness @ [35] Pts
1 Signum @ [0] Pts
1 Terminator Honors @ [15] Pts

Elite: Venerable Dreadnought (1#, 140 Pts)
1 Venerable Dreadnought @ 140 Pts
Dreadnought CCW; Storm Bolter; Assault Cannon; Tank Hunters; Venerable; Extra Armor

Elite: Venerable Dreadnought (1#, 140 Pts)
1 Venerable Dreadnought @ 140 Pts
Dreadnought CCW; Storm Bolter; Assault Cannon; Tank Hunters; Venerable; Extra Armor

Troops: Tactical Squad (9#, 195 Pts)
7 Tactical Squad @ 195 Pts
Bolter (x5); Meltagun (x1); Heavy Bolter (x1); Drop Pod
1 Drop Pod @ [30] Pts
Storm Bolter; Inertial Guidance System
1 Sergeant @ [45] Pts
Bolt Pistol (x1); Power Fist (x1); Terminator Honors

Troops: Tactical Squad (6#, 115 Pts)
5 Tactical Squad @ 115 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasmagun (x1); Lascannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (6#, 115 Pts)
5 Tactical Squad @ 115 Pts
Bolter (x3); Plasmagun (x1); Lascannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (7#, 125 Pts)
6 Tactical Squad @ 125 Pts
Bolter (x5); Plasma Cannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Troops: Tactical Squad (7#, 125 Pts)
6 Tactical Squad @ 125 Pts
Bolter (x5); Plasma Cannon (x1)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter

Heavy Support: Devastator Squad (6#, 230 Pts)
4 Devastator Squad @ 230 Pts
Heavy Bolter (x4)
1 Sergeant @ [15] Pts
Bolter
1 Razorback @ [95] Pts
Twin Linked Lascannon; Extra Armor

Fast Attack: Land Speeder Squadron (3#, 235 Pts)
3 Land Speeder Squadron @ 235 Pts
Heavy Bolter (x2); Multi-Melta (x1); Assault Cannon (x2); Heavy Flamer (x1)

Heavy Support: Predator Annihilator (1#, 130 Pts)
1 Predator Annihilator @ 130 Pts
Twin Linked Lascannon; Heavy Bolter (x2)


How about this for a list then, taking in the advice of the posters above.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267504.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267504.page GMT
where are the techmarines going anyway? they shold be in squads or with servitor retinues, but you have neither. a good thing would be to take a libby in a squad in a drop pod with fear of the darkness. that way you can drop in and scare a bunch of his army away making your gun line have fire taken off of them for a turn maybe more.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267536.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267536.page GMT plas squads. I would also give both libs J-packs to counter charge into MC's and fury o ancients to snipe acrossed as many bugs as possible for wounds/armor saves. I would stick with libs also because although they need a 6 to wound a MC if they do its a psych test and thier goes a MC in one pop. BTW you do break your Land speeders up into 1 per unit for target priority tests right.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267544.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267544.page GMT HQ, that way you can run him alone or in the devastators for the reroll. If you take two I'd also reccomend a servitor retinue either to back up the predator or kitted out for shooting.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267579.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267579.page GMT tac squads with las/plas and then knock out his MC's, continue on to hand his 'stealers their own buttocks with the HB's. Also, fact of life, Dreds get murdered by anything with AT weapons. Take pred Annihalators. They cost just about the same +/- 10 pts. Sit them down somewhere and let the nids try to hurt your tuff front armour, then blow 'em butt first back to wherever they came from. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267756.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267756.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267875.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/267875.page GMT
Wierdly enough, my VENERABLE DREADNOUGHTS have about 4x the survivability of those craptastic deathtraps. I have quite enough anti tank in the list, more than I probably need.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/271284.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/209784/271284.page GMT