ELITES
5x Assault Terminators w/ Thunder Hammer+Storm Shields
Land Raider Crusader dedicated transport w/ multi-melta - 460 pts[q/uote]

Sound.

Ironclad Dred w/ Hurricane Bolters, Seismic Hammer, Meltagun
Drop Pod w/Deathwind Missile Launcher, Locator Beacon (drop on first turn so other drop pods won't scatter within 6") - 200 pts

Not so hot on this one. The Ironclad is a assault Dreadnought but will land in a Drop Pod and cannot assault out and then it only has a single offensive tank busting weapon and hurricane bolters. The Drop Pod doesn't need the deathwind as that cannot fire first turn it lands, blow up the Pod bye-bye deathwind and you've wasted points. 200 points for this unit is a lot.

Dred w/ Assault Cannon
Drop Pod w/ Storm Bolter - 150 pts

Hmmmm ok. I like multi melta as it's cheap but it only has a single role but assault cannon can maul infantry and vehicles. Consider a heavy flamer as other weapon for when getting close to infantry.

TROOPS
Scout Squad w/ 2x sniper rifle, 1x missile launcher, 1x bolter led by Sgt Telion - 135 pts

I can't remember but do you get sniper rifles for free? Telion is ok for that BS5 krak shot but worth 50 points for that? I don't think so. You could get a small Tact Squad with a transport for same points giving you more multiple threats.

10x Tactical Squad w/ melta-gun, missile launcher, sgt w/ power fist + plasma pistol + melta bombs
rhino dedicated transport w/ storm bolter- 265 pts

5x Tactical Squad sgt w/ chainsword+ plasma pistol+ melta bombs
rhino dedicated transport w/ storm bolter

Ok good start you've got transports. Bad choices is you don't need power fist because you'll combat squad down and 5 Space Marines don't win combat much. Get in a combi melta to boost the squads damage out put.

Next squad would be better with combi melta TBH instead of plasma pistol.

In a 2k list you need more troops. You've got 20 in total.

HEAVY
Dred (thanks to MOTF) with vanilla load out (CCW, MM, SB)
Drop Pod w/ Storm Bolter - 140 pts

Ok setup here.

Thunderfire Cannon- 100 pts

Predator w/ 2x Heavy Bolters, Storm Bolter - 95 points

These two are odd choices. Take two Preds or two TFC but I would make the most out the MOTF and get full Dreadnought heavy support.

FAST

Land Speeder Storm w/ Heavy Bolter - 50 pts (plan is to have scouts secure objectives until tactical squads can reinforce)

There it is. Any help at all would be appreciated.

Storm and Scouts won't hold an objective for long. For a cheaper objective unit those Scouts are costing 175 points.

Really you need to decide what you want because that single Land Raider won't last. I would probably drop it or double up on it and Terminators but that doesn't leave loads of room for Dreadnoughts. I would probably go 3 x Dreadnoughts with assault cannons, 3 x Dreadnoughts with long range anti tank weapons then fill the rest with MOTF and Tactical Squads in Rhinos; but put HKs on the Rhinos.

Dreadnoughts run in front of Rhinos and give cover, pop smoke so get cover themselves. Long range Dreadnoughts deal out anti tank along with missile launcher Tactical Marines and HKs on Rhinos.

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