model collector wrote:Nice galaxy at the bottom of the pool, the pylons do appear slightly un eldary in asthetic, but weathered they should look fine and practice makes perfect. Black and red could be interesting, though i would try to push for something else, try showing him all the craftworld colours along with their respective themes, as such come up with a strong background and narrative. Where is the portal? Why is it in a rough state? Why has an army had to use it? Who are they fighting? Name characters and try to gain accolades for them in games, e.g. if an autarch kills a carnifex add some leftover carnifex bits onto the board or his base and add 'carnifex slayer to his title eg. Hopefully you will both develop more ideas for the board to better convey a very individual army.

I'd really love a closeup on the galaxy by the way.