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Inquisitor Malkyre has been an inquisitor for 300 years, though all through 

his training he seemed to remain in perpetual youth. While he was an acolyte
he suddenly began to have strange visions, accompanied with them was an 

unnatural strength and speed, a greater psychic presence, and oddly acute 

senses. He began to wake in the middle of the night from these strange

visions, and eventually he began sensetive to the light and prone to pain 

when directly in it. That is when he checked to the records and saw that his 

father (A rich nobleman on a hive world) showed the same symptoms. After 

some research he realized what all the facts pointed too. He was a half 

vampire. Malkyre's is known by inquisitors to be a great swordsman, though 

he is a good shot as well, and his senses can contribute to his abilities as 

well.

Stats WS BS S T W I A Ld
7 5 3 3 3 5 3 9
Frag, Krak, and Rad grenades.

Vampiric Blade - A Daemonblade with Familiar and Vampyre rules.

Dual Plasma pistols: Profile S7 Ap2 Assault 2 at 6 inches and Assault 1 TW 

at 12

Cloak of Shrouds - An artifact cloak that protects and aids his power armour 

from the damaging effects of sunlight, It can also aid in keeping Dawn away 

and dusk stay longer: each turn roll a dice, on the roll of a six, the night 

fighting rules are in effect until your next player turn. It also grants him 

a 4+ invulnerable save.

Artificer Armour

Special Rules

Unit Type: infantry

Independent Character

Eternal Warrior

Stubborn

Acute Senses.

Vampire Cult - all henchmen except for banishers, jokaero, and daemonhosts gain the Vampire rule as above, however, they do not gain the swarm of bats power unless they are already psykers

Vampire: While the night fighting rules are in affect, Malkyre's Strength 

and Toughness are boosted by 1 and he has the feel no pain rule.In addition 

He also gains the Swarm of Bats Psychic Power.

Bloodthirsty: If at any time malkyre's wounds are reduced to zero, he gains

the fleet, rage, and furious charge special rules, and in your player turn 

must attack the closest enemy unit, and gain wounds from killing models in 

combat, otherwise he is removed as a casualty.

Psyker Mastery 2 (This includes Daemonblade Farmiliar)

Psychic Powers: Warp Rift, Swarm of Bats


Swarm of Bats - Range: 18" S3 Assault 2d6
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2)If an Acolyte ever showed even a TRACE of Vampirism, or any other type of imperfection/daemonic taint, they would be purged faster than you can say 'burn the witch".

As such, you should check with the dude running the campaign to make sure that the backstory is legit.


3) Points seem reasonable.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424314/3810616.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424314/3810616.page GMT
WS7 is too high, I'd go with WS6. He is, afterall, just a human. A normal inquisitor is WS4, so WS6 is really good still.

Initiative 5 might be a touch high, but that's not particularly game-breaking in any way.

Now, he has too many special rules and special wargear with special stuff. A custom character should have three special things max, normally one or two special rules and one or two unique wargear options.

You have a special sword, twin plasma pistols (pretty unique), a special cloak, then eternal warrior, stubborn, acute senses, vampire cult/vampire, swarm of bats, and bloodthirsty. That's a total of nine special things going on. In comparison, Vulkan He'stan has two unique wargear items, and one special rule (twin-linked melta/flamer/hammers) that he exchanges with combat tactics. You need to cut down a lot of the special stuff your character has.

Finally, you don't need eternal warrior. Its not necessary, all it does is make it look like you don't want your character to die. As he stands, he has too much going on. Focus on doing one thing with him.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424314/3812143.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424314/3812143.page GMT EW was there because most of the characters had it, stubborn is an inquisitor rule in general, acute senses, vampire stuff, bloodthirsty and swarm of bats were all trying to represent the Vampire, I can remove the plasma pistols. I posted this from a mobile version so I didn't bother to edit it, the WS7 was also a suggested drop by a friend, and was only kept because many characters had it, I will drop it to 6.. just to give you a picture I will post up some of the other characters from the Campaign


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