http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/65.page JForum - http://www.jforum.net Hey this is my first post here and my first W40k drawings in many years, please give comments, I will be doing some posed drawings after I get back into it and relearn the form for Space Marines etc.

Thanks for checking them out.

Both pictures are also in my Gallery here, in better quality etc]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3812928.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3812928.page GMT
I really like these drawings, although the proportions seem a little out (legs+shoulders on the marine), still they are really good.

Look forward to seeing some more!]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813196.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813196.page GMT
But thanks for the advice, will play around with the ratios a bit when I do my next drawing.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813236.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813236.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813513.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813513.page GMT
They're a good start, but try doing some at a 3/4 view rather than a dead on frontal . It'll help you with depth and form more, as your current ones have a more flat appearance. Also, don't draw on lined paper. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813535.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813535.page GMT
Welcome to Dakka ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813691.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3813691.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814285.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814285.page GMT ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814287.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814287.page GMT
Those drawings are pretty good! The only thing I see is the Bolt Pistol could be a tad larger. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814382.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3814382.page GMT A critique? try putting them in action poses or 3 quarter views for much more drama/action. Its easier with the space marines because they are basic shapes to start with.
Keep it up.
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Thanks for all the advice/ praise on the last ones.

Went for a more active pose with the big man, if the scans are gak, do say and I will rescan in HD.

Look forwards to seeing what you think.

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I can say this: Keep at it. Never give up! They look great, and you can only get better with practice.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3820414.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3820414.page GMT WIP/ trial sketch of Horus Warmaster and Primarch of Sons of Horus. As you can see it is very much unfinished, but the top middle down to the knee joint is that oart I worked the most on!

Hope youe enjoy, please leave constructive critisism and yes I know, line paper is for writing, but I am lazy so ef off ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3835630.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3835630.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3839922.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3839922.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3908462.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/424433/3908462.page GMT