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HQ: Company Command Squad
Vox/ Plasma Gun/ Regimental Standard/ 1 Power Weapon/ Carapace Armour/ Krak Grenades

Elite:
Vet Storm Trooper/ Power Weapon
9 Storm Troopers/ Grenade Launcher/ Flamer

Troops:
Platoon Company Command Squad
Vox/ Melta-Gun/ Grenade Launcher/ 1 Power Weapon/ Krak Grenades

Alpha Squad: Vet Infantry Squad (Grenadier Doctrine)
Vox/ Grenade Launcher/ Autocannon Crew

Beta Squad: Vet Infantry Squad (Grenadier Doctrine)
Vox/ 2 Grenade Launchers

Charlie Squad: Vet Infantry Squad (Grenadier Doctrine)
Vox/ 2 Grenade Launchers

Delta Squad: Vet Infantry Squad (Grenadier Doctrine)
Vox/ Grenade Launcher/ Flamer

Echo Squad: Infantry Squad
Vox/ Grenade Launcher

Alpha Red: Heavy Weapons Squad
3 Lascannon Crews

Beta Yellow: Heavy Weapons Squad
2 Autocannon Crews
1 Missile Launcher

Heavy Support:
Leman Russ Demolisher/ Pair of Plasma Cannons/ Lascannon

Super Heavy Support:
Baneblade/ 3 Twin-linked Heavy Bolters/ 2 Lascannons/ Demolisher Cannon/ Mega Battle Cannon + Co-Axial Autocannon.

Allied Deathwatch:

HQ: Deathwatch Space Marine Librarian/ Force Weapon

Troops:
9 Deathwatch Space Marine Veterans
2 Power Fists/ 1 Pair of Lightning Claws/ 2 Power Weapons/ 2 Heavy Bolters
+ 1 Deathwatch Rhino








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As for the legal parts, it's pretty weak. You have almost nothing that can take out AV14, which unless you're going up against Dark Eldar a lot, you're going to encounter at 2.5k levels.

1: Drop the Voxes and Power Weapons on the normal squads, change the Grenade Launchers to Melta or Plasma, and ditch the Autocannons seeing as your squads are likely to be pretty mobile. Grenadiers is also pretty expensive.

2: Heavy Weapon Squads are generally seen as too expensive for what they do.

3: Buy some Chimeras for your Veteran squads with the points saved from ditching Grenadiers.

4: Get rid of the Plasma and Lascannons from the Demolisher since they'll be Snap-Firing most of the time.

5: I'm assuming your Storm Troopers are armed that way because of the models you have. Either way, you won't be getting anything out of them that you can't get with 5 guys and 2 Plasma Guns.

6: You also only have 1 Infantry Squad in the Platoon. You have to have 2 minimum.

Really, it's a very mish-mashed list. First thing to do would be to fix the illegal options, then work on the above points. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6197764.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6197764.page GMT ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6197783.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6197783.page GMT

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I only have these models so need to work with what I have, will work on legalising it as you say, so I have to add a second platoon company command squad right?]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198097.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198097.page GMT
You need a second Infantry Squad: another 10 Guardsmen. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198230.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198230.page GMT tbh if someone says no to it, they're probs not worth having a game with as it's for fun. Reduced to 1999pts as well now, removed deathwatch.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198294.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198294.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198422.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198422.page GMT apoc then haha


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Have made simple swaps, added in a second ccs and removed the deathwatch to make it legal]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198446.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198446.page GMT Apoc is 3000 points, and so far you haven't edited the original list at all. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198465.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198465.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198480.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198480.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198483.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198483.page GMT Apoc (which you should have specified earlier), then you don't need to abide by any FOC.

If it is not Apoc, then no Superheavies. Most games aren't Apoc, so make sure to agree with your opponent before playing.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198501.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/543147/6198501.page GMT