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WARLORD
CCS w/carapace, Master of Ord., Regimental Banner, 1x sniper

2x Veteran Squads w/carapace, 3x Plasma Guns

4x Veteran Squads w/carapace, 3x Meltaguns

CCS w/carapace, Regimental Banner

Basilisk

2x Exterminators w/Heavy Bolter Sponsons, Hunter Killer Missiles

]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6107832.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6107832.page GMT Id change a few vet squads to plasma and try n fit creed in for 4 orders a turn... Looks good just hope you don't fight helldrakes ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6107870.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6107870.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6109429.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6109429.page GMT CCS. Also I believe with only 6 vet squads most of them would be dead or sustaining major casualties by the time they are in range to even benefit from orders.

Most space marine alpha strike lists include multiple dreadnaughts and marine squads with flamers and heavy flamers, I think this list would struggle from most pod lists.

You also dont have much long range anti tank or ap1-2. As mentioned I would suggets trying to get some plasma to keep deathstars at bay or hurt them when they really get close.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6110631.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6110631.page GMT
Threw in some plasma, and traded out my Lord Commissar for another CCS. Gave both CCSs banners, and one of them a Master of Ordin.

With my last 25pts, I gave the tanks missiles, and the CCS a Sniper.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6111153.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/555550/6111153.page GMT