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HQ:
Chaos Lord - Jump pack, Black mace, Sigil of corruption,
mark of khorne, veternas, melta bombs

Troops:
Khorne Berzerkers (terror squad) X5
- Veterans, Champion - power sword
Land Raider - Dirge Caster

Marines X10
- Plasma Gun, veterans, Mark of Nurgle, Sgt - power sword
Rhino - Dirge Caster

Marines X10
- Plasma gun, CCW X8, veterans, Mark of Khorne, Sgt - power sword
Rhino - Dirge Caster

Fast Attack:
Raptors X15
- melta gun X2, veterans, Mark of Khorne, Sgt - power sowrd, Girft of mutation

Warp Talons X5
- Mark of Khorne, veterans

Heldrake
- Baleflamer

So yeah tell me what you think. I know it's not all that competitive, but I wanted to go for a fluffy list instead. ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6267929.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6267929.page GMT BP+CCW?

Always take 2 special weapons on your CSM squads. Veterans here is good cause it is cheap and the Ld is nice.

Raptor champs are a great place to put melta bombs. Move the gift from the champ to your lord(or sorcerer) as they will get better use from it.

Warp talons are really bad, and if you are absolutely set on using them Khorne is probably not the best way to go. Dangerous if they make it, but more of a suicide squad. More raptors would be better IMO.
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Why not put two special guns in the CSM squads?

If you are giving a chaos lord the mark of khorne, you better have a good reason not to give him the axe of blind fury.

You seem light on anti tank.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6270607.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6270607.page GMT
some comments:

you're only filling half the capacity of the land raider. You're paying 230 points to get 10 units into CC reliably, but you're only taking 5. Thats a lot of wasted points.

take 2 special weapons on the CSM squads. Make sure they're the same. Consider taking icon of slannesh and icon of excess.

take 2 raptor squads with meltas. Redundancy for the redundant god!

Heldrakes are great for fluffy lists because they make any list competitive. Take 1 if not 2]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6271951.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/564146/6271951.page GMT