<![CDATA[Latest posts for the thread "Please critique a song I wrote"]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/54.page JForum - http://www.jforum.net Please critique a song I wrote
If this isn't the appropriate place to share this, I apologize.

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I'm not into hip hop, so I can't judge it upon those merits. That being said, your rhythm is decent. I feel like you need to turn up your mic a little though. You get a little soft toward the middle.

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 NuggzTheNinja wrote:


The ?]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/646508/7801142.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/646508/7801142.page GMT Please critique a song I wrote The vocals are way too low, the kick drums a tad high and I personally dont like the sound of the snare hits.
Has a nice feel to it though if a bit generic for hiphop.
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