Nevelon wrote:
Much better, thanks.

You are really close to a couple of formations. You have the armored TF and the 1st co TF. To get the battle demi-co, you need a FA and Dev pic. So pretty close.

I see two different ways to go here.

Replace your captain with one on a bike. Take a standard camp in ruins Dev squad (4xLC) and either a bike squad for the FA pic (probably with grav guns) or upgrade your command squad on bikes, and use the FA pick for something else. A TML/HB land speeder fits the mechanized theme and is reasonably cheap.

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Keep your captain in the CTDA. Take a dev squad in a drop pod, equipped with MMs or GCs. Stick the captain with them to give them S&P. Pod in and vaporize something. FA can be whatever you like in this case.

I have considered going demi company with first company aux and utilizing this tactic
A few thoughts on your individual units:

If you are going to be DSing terminators, you might want to get some beacons and homers.

The capheracts look OK. I think I prefer them geared for CC, but they should do OKish here.

I am thinking about utilizing sternguard as character/unit hunter(ditching meltas for other options) and relying on these guys to do tank busting
If you are going to DS normal assault terminators, I’d try to find points for some SSs. There is going to be AP2 stuff out there, and you want something better then your 5++ to protect you. In general I’m not a huge fan of DSing assault troops, but don’t see you getting a LR into this list.
(If i ditch the meltas on the sternguard I could go th/ss)

I would drop the fist from the sternguard, but they are a fairly standard suicide drop squad.

If you are taking a drop pod command squad, I’d just take the apothecary and 4 specials. I’d either cut them for points, or give them the gear to fight.
( shifting points I could give them grav guns and deepstrike them with the captain)
Tac squads are good. Points allowing, your sarges could use combis. If you stick with a CAD, that 5 man squad would be better off as scouts. If you are just going to be tucked in some ruins camping an objective, might as well get camo cloaks, sniper rifles, and hunker down.
(I cant disagree about the scouts, seems like the smarter investment)
I like the dread, but he’s pricy. I might cut him for points to spend elsewhere.

Tanks are fine. Points allowing, going full LC on the pred can be worth it. Last game I took my Vindi out, I was reminded that sometimes the siege shield can be worth it. Darn immobilize results. Motivated me enough to paint the thing, ready for the next battle. Laughing at terrain is only sometimes worth the points, but looking cool always is. Vindis feel naked without them.