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My legion is set in the time frame just after the Istvaan Massacre, finally free from the shackles of the imperium and full of anger. I am going to try get across in my a legion still fresh from istvaan flexing there now freedom to bring utter bloodshed to those who cross there path, I hope you like them! I'll keep this updated with regular progress, but here's what I have so done so far.

Close up of Tactical Marine -









1st Tactical marine squad



1st Rhino





1st 5 Red Butchers








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I like the the Power Armored Assault troops & the Butcher Terminators.

I look forward to seeing the Land Raider painted to completion, I noticed in one of the pictures that is was sitting in view.]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9464850.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9464850.page GMT
Now for the critique...your paints look massively thick. To the point of obscurring detail heavily on the close-up model you've shown. It's really hindering the final aesthetic.

The metallics look exceptionally thick/heavy. In general I think you need to water down your paints a bit (as easy as just wetting the brush most of the time). Metallics could use a heck of a lot of watering down - or even try drybrushing them over a thin black undercoat.

You've got plenty of nice detail on the model, but a lot of it is getting clogged up! ]]> http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9465298.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9465298.page GMT http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9466120.page http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/preList/731014/9466120.page GMT