Sephyr wrote:

Very decent, Slayer. I'd try another tack for a WE book, though:

-Unable to selected Chaos Sorcerers or Dark Apostles as HQ.

-Unique Land Raider variant Land Raider Ngrakal: AV 14/14/13, armed wit three heavy bolters, transport capacity 16. Dedicated transport for Khorne Berserkers, Khorne-marked Chosen and Khorne-marked terminators. Includes a dozer blade.

-World Eater Warlord traits:
1-Lord of the Gore storm: One use only. All Khorne-marked units withing 12" if the Warlord gain the Fleet USR for a turn.
2-Fell Duellist: In a challenge, the Warlord gains the Rampage USR and the Feel n Pain (5+) special rule.
3-Mechanized Assault: The warlord and his unit treat any transport as having the Assault Vehicle USR.
4- Bane of Psykers: Every time an enemy psyker has a power blocked by Deny the With, they also suffer an S5, Ap- hit.
5- Against All Foes: The Warlord and hit unit gaint the Rending USR on all close combat attacks.
6-No Battle Too Far: One use only. This trait must be declared before rolling any reserves for that turn. Once used, all units arriving from reserve can assault after arriving.

-Khorne berserker units can have two additional models purchase items from the chaos melee rewards list.

-Berserker champions replaced by Skull Champions, who can access a different wargear list.

-Devourers: Khorne-marked Terminators with the Hammer of wrath and Furious Charge USRs for +5 points per model.

New Wargear:
-Istvann Banner: Once per game, the unit can re-roll all failed to-wound rolls with shooting or melees attacks. Against loyalist marines, the unit can also re-roll to-hit rolls in that same turn.
-Collar or Khorne: Grants a static 4+ Deny the witch roll the the model/unit.
-Butcher Cannons become available for Khorne-marked Havocs for 20 points.
-Destroyer bandolier: The character gains Radiation grenades (-1 Toughness)
-Warhound Rhino: Vehicle upgrade. At the cost of one Hull point, the rhino can serve as an assault vehicle for that turn. All charges made out of such vehicles count as passing through difficult terrain.


Artefacts of the 12th:
-Unending Spite: A power sword with the Rend and Rampage USRs. If the character wielding it loses all wounds but is engaged in close combat at the time, he remain is play for one turn longer (and cannot receive any extra wounds). During that turn, he gain 1d6 extra attacks and re-rolls all failed to-hit rolls.
-De'Shea Skull: One use only. Once per game, the skull can be unleashed to destroy any Game Objective within 3". It ceases to have any Mysterious Objective abilities and is worth no victory points.
-HammerBlow: A unique chaos warbike that grants +1S, +1T and +1 Wound, as well as the Skilled Rider USR. All Overwatch rolls of 1 made against the it and its unit cause the shot to hit the firing unit instead.

Corrupted Butcher's Nails [25 points]
This model adds 1 to its Weapon Skill, Ballistic Skill, Strength and Attack characteristics. At the end of any turn in which this model did not kill an enemy model, one friendly model within 2" of the champion takes a an automatic hit from one of this model's Close Combat Weapons (your choice). If there are no friendly models within range, this model deals one hit to itself from one of its Close Combat Weapons (your choice).

-Slaughtertome: Daemon/Mark of Khorne only. Keep track of the number of models killed by units with Daemon/Mark of Khorne. Consult the following chart; these effects are cumulative and affect units with Daemon/Mark of Khorne within 12". [45 points]

0-7- Unworthy: No effect.

8-15- Slayers: Roll an additional D6 for charge range and discard the lowest of all dice rolled.

16-23- Bloodthirsty: Gain +1 Attack.

24+- Seas of Blood: Ignore Armor saves.

Gauntlet of the Slayer [25 points]
During a challenge, if this model deals more wounds to the enemy model than the enemy model has wounds, any excess wounds are dealt as automatic hits enemy unit within 2" using the Strength and AP of the Champion, and with the Ignores Cover special rule

Legion Rules
All units must take the Veterans of the Long War special rule if it is available.
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Alpha Legion: All models with VOTLW and Infantry who are in Power Armor gain Infiltrate for +1 point per model.

Special Unit: Special Cultists that have Infiltrate, Stealth, and Sniper Rifles

Downsides: Daemons are now Allies of Convenience.
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Iron Warriors: All models with VOTLW gain Tank Hunter

Special Unit: Destroyers (basically the unit from Horus Heresy: Betrayal)

Downsides: Daemons are now Allies of Convenience
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Thousand Sons: Can’t take anything except Thousand Sons and units with the Mark of Tzeentch. All Aspiring Sorcerers and Sorcerers gain an extra Psychic Mastery Level and may take Divination Powers.

Sacred Number: A unit with a unit composition of 9 or 18 entitles one model in the unit with the Champion of Chaos to a free Gift of Mutation.

Special Unit: Cult Thousand Son Terminators

Downsides: May only take models with the Mark of Tzeentch
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Night Lords: All models with VOTLW gain Night Vision
Raptors become a Troop Choice
Units and models without Terminator Armor or Bikes may take Stealth for +2 points per model

Special Unit: n/a, but Warp Talons are now Scoring

Downsides: Only have 2 Heavy support Slots, becomes 4 if playing 2000 pts or higher
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World Eaters: All models with VOTLW and a close combat weapon may exchange it for a Khornate Chainaxe at no additional cost as long as it is represented on the model.
(Khornate Chainaxe is R: Melee Str: User AP:5 Special Rules: Shred)

Sacred Number: Any unit with a unit composition of 8 or 16 entitles one model in the unit with the Champion of Chaos to a free Gift of Mutation.

Special Unit: Cult Khorne Berserker Terminators

Downsides: No Psykers. May only take models with the Mark of Khorne.
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Death Guard: All models with VOTLW may count their bolters as a CCW when in combat.

Sacred Number: Any unit with a unit composition of 7 or 14 entitles one model in the unit with the Champion of Chaos to a free Gift of Mutation.

Special Unit: Cult Plague Terminators

Downsides: May only take models with the Mark of Nurgle. Only two units of troops may take Rhinos, all other troop units in Rhinos count as Fast Attack choices
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Emperor’s Children:
All models with VOTLW and a bolter may replace it with a Sonic Blaster for 2 points per model. Heavy Bolters may be replaced with a Blastmaster for 10 points.

Special Unit: Cult Noise Terminators

Downsides: May only take models with the Mark of Slaanesh