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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
This is the second part of this RP: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/284273.page Anyone who was involved in the previous RP, you know what I'm on about, but read any of the ending posts of the last thread if you missed any. Now, while this is a fairly basic storyline, I'm already involved in multiple RPs, GMing one, so between being both a GM and RPer in this thread and the others that I'm involved in, it's not gonna be easy. Ah well. Fifteen years after the Tyranids' claimed the Naruke solar system, the Imperium have returned to the system to reclaim it, since orders have come through from The Highest Authority that the world MUST be reclaimed for the Emperor, for undisclosed reasons. That it is asked is enough, and the servents of the Emperor obayed. A taskforce, comprising of the merged Naruke nineteenth 'Nidbanes' and the tattered remnants of the Elysian 146th 'Skyfire' regiments have been dispatched, with General Strikt commanding the 265th Naruke/Elysian Imperial Guard. A team of Xenologists lead by Inquisitor Ralt and his Deathwatch Kill-team are also part of the taskforce. A small taskforce of Blood Angels have also joined the taskforce, but their reasons are unknown to all but themselves - they are being commanded by Chief-Librarian Mephiston and Captain Castigon of the second company, "The Blooded". A small convoy of ships, identifying themselves as Imperial Guardsmen of Nucia, under the command of a supposed "Commissar Nikev" have also joined the force. Fortunately for the Commissar, noone is checking the records. As the formidable Imperial force approaches the planet, none of them expect any trouble.
But unbeknownst to them, the Imperium is not the only force keen to take this world.. Yeah, not my best intro ever, but it'll do. My best can be found here for those who are interested: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/304483.page Sign up form: Character name: Character age: Character rank/profession/allegiance: Character personality: Character appearance: Character height: Character equipment: Character bio/background story: Picture(if you can find one):
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Post by: Scrazza
hmmm I would be tempted to join, but I am already in one of your RPG. 
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Scrazza wrote:hmmm I would be tempted to join, but I am already in one of your RPG.
I've been, previously, involved in around 7ish RPs at ONE TIME. If I can do that, you can do this  .
And the job's gonna be a good 'un boss! 
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Post by: Scrazza
I have to read the 17(!) other pages 1st then.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Scrazza wrote:I have to read the 17(!) other pages 1st then.
Nope. If you join I can give you a "mission briefing".
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Post by: Scrazza
ahh. and what army should my character belong to? I have no Idea. I don't want to be a space marine. that's for sure. maybe an elysian?
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Scrazza wrote:ahh. and what army should my character belong to? I have no Idea. I don't want to be a space marine. that's for sure. maybe an elysian?
Do your research on the various factions.
Besides, you could be a tech priest, a guardsman, General Strikt (but not Lord Commissar Nikev.. ) or whatever the hell takes your fancy really.
Only people who've read the first WoA will know why the BA are here..specifically the end parts.. -looking at you NIkev-
If he hasn't noticed this thread yet, I doubt he's been online today. Ah well. I'm gonna hop over to the first War of Attrition and post some stuff quickly.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:
A taskforce, comprising of elements from Nucian and the merged Naruke nineteenth 'Nidbanes' and the tattered remnants of the Elysian 146th 'Skyfire' regiments have been dispatched, with Lord Commissar Nikev in command of the Nucian forces, and General Strikt commanding the 165th Naruke/Elysian force.
WOAH WOAH WOAH! Dude......this was established that Nikev does NOT work with or For the Imperium......if you need more, PM me and I"ll tell you the tale of Nucia and why Nikev fights not for the Imperium.
But NIkev can NOT command Nucian forces under the Imperial control.....however, you can have a Nucian Taskforce that 'mingle' with the Commissar's forces.....but if its cool I'd like to control them. :/
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Post by: shas'o vera
hmmm, Leroy marine or myself, its so hard to chose!!
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:
A taskforce, comprising of elements from Nucian and the merged Naruke nineteenth 'Nidbanes' and the tattered remnants of the Elysian 146th 'Skyfire' regiments have been dispatched, with Lord Commissar Nikev in command of the Nucian forces, and General Strikt commanding the 165th Naruke/Elysian force.
WOAH WOAH WOAH! Dude......this was established that Nikev does NOT work with or For the Imperium......if you need more, PM me and I"ll tell you the tale of Nucia and why Nikev fights not for the Imperium.
But NIkev can NOT command Nucian forces under the Imperial control.....however, you can have a Nucian Taskforce that 'mingle' with the Commissar's forces.....but if its cool I'd like to control them. :/
Wut.
If that's the case, how did he fight with other imperials in the last war of attrition, and how can the Nucian taskforce (the Commissar's forces) mingle with the Commissar's forces (the Nucian taskforce)?
The nucian's aren't under imperial control, they're júst told to go here and they are. Well, they are under there control in a way I guess.. ah well, feel free to PM me.
My bad  .
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
C'mon guys! You know you wanna join..
..and if you don't, I'm going to hunt you down and eat your children/Khorne
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Post by: Klawz
Character name: Captain Varl
Character age: 50
Character rank/profession/allegiance: Captain of the 5th Naruke Armored Company
Character personality: Grim and cynical
Character appearance: Tall, missing an arm, covered in nasty scars
Character height: 6' 2"
Character equipment: Power sword, Las-pistol
Character bio/background story: Has served as head of the Naruke PDF for many years, and was one of the last people off planet.
(please note: in alternete reality (one in which the nids lost) he went on to become head of the mperial Guard stationed in the Naruke section)
Picture(if you can find one):
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
You abandoned the first one! Shame on you!
Hmm. The Nucians are NIkev's, but I'm pretty sure he'll be OK with this. Also, I'm assuming your character has a prosthetic arm?
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Post by: Klawz
Darkvoidof40k wrote:You abandoned the first one! Shame on you!
Hmm. The Nucians are NIkev's, but I'm pretty sure he'll be OK with this. Also, I'm assuming your character has a prosthetic arm?
Naruke, not Nucian...
Shame on me!
And yeah, robot arm FTW!
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Klawz wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:You abandoned the first one! Shame on you!
Hmm. The Nucians are NIkev's, but I'm pretty sure he'll be OK with this. Also, I'm assuming your character has a prosthetic arm?
Naruke, not Nucian...
Shame on me!
And yeah, robot arm FTW!
Man I'm just not with it today.. I DID only get about 3-4 hours sleep last night though  .
Man, where's NIkev? He knows 'bout this thread!
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism
Character age:He has no age, he's just that bad-ass
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe
Character personality:He is who he is
Character appearance: Asking too much
Character height:Asking too much
Character equipment: Powersword, Enhanced Boltpistol, and special armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit.
Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. they travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. I don't feel like describing how the Nucians joined the Eldar, so I won't do it till later.
Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism
Character age:He has no age, he's just that bad-ass
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe
Character personality:He is who he is
Character appearance: Asking too much
Character height:Asking too much
Character equipment: Powersword, Enhanced Boltpistol, and special armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit.
Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. they travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. I don't feel like describing how the Nucians joined the Eldar, so I won't do it till later.
Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev.
Hey, no offense dude, but I really don't see how it's asking too much for you to just write 6'1 or whatever and he is [nice, kind, evil etc] - and as for that special armour.. meh.
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Post by: shas'o vera
quick question, can i use a pelvic thrusting guardman?
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
shas'o vera wrote:quick question, can i use a pelvic thrusting guardman?
No. Please keep this pelvic thrusting stuff away from the thread.
Will you be joining?
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Post by: shas'o vera
Darkvoidof40k wrote:shas'o vera wrote:quick question, can i use a pelvic thrusting guardman?
No. Please keep this pelvic thrusting stuff away from the thread.
Will you be joining?
yes i will be, let me just get leeroy marine and his rhino...
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
shas'o vera wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:shas'o vera wrote:quick question, can i use a pelvic thrusting guardman?
No. Please keep this pelvic thrusting stuff away from the thread.
Will you be joining?
yes i will be, let me just get leeroy marine and his rhino...
About that.. it was a bit unrealistic.. I mean, rogue scouts I can buy, but having multiple fully servicable rhinos/bikes/land spieders/freemcannons was just too much.
So my advice is, just keep it a bit more real (or atleast as real as you can get in a fictional universe!).
Anyway, didn't most of them die?
And you could say they were left on the planet like Arkus was, unless they escaped somehow.. I don't remember.
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Post by: shas'o vera
Darkvoidof40k wrote:shas'o vera wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:shas'o vera wrote:quick question, can i use a pelvic thrusting guardman?
No. Please keep this pelvic thrusting stuff away from the thread.
Will you be joining?
yes i will be, let me just get leeroy marine and his rhino...
About that.. it was a bit unrealistic.. I mean, rogue scouts I can buy, but having multiple fully servicable rhinos/bikes/land spieders/freemcannons was just too much.
So my advice is, just keep it a bit more real (or atleast as real as you can get in a fictional universe!).
Anyway, didn't most of them die?
And you could say they were left on the planet like Arkus was, unless they escaped somehow.. I don't remember.
alright then, leeroy blood angel marine?
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:Commissar NIkev wrote:Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism
Character age:He has no age, he's just that bad-ass
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe
Character personality:He is who he is
Character appearance: Asking too much
Character height:Asking too much
Character equipment: Powersword, Enhanced Boltpistol, and special armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit.
Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. they travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. I don't feel like describing how the Nucians joined the Eldar, so I won't do it till later.
Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev.
Hey, no offense dude, but I really don't see how it's asking too much for you to just write 6'1 or whatever and he is [nice, kind, evil etc] - and as for that special armour.. meh.
Mind.....taking....too much stress.........Mind .......*Mind Explodes and brings half of America to destruction*
Personality - Prefers to leed by example, Very Kind fellow, but can be a real hard-ass when needed.
Height - 6'1"
Well good sir, he was wearing the special armour in the First War. I just never said it as Special Armour.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:Commissar NIkev wrote:Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism
Character age:He has no age, he's just that bad-ass
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe
Character personality:He is who he is
Character appearance: Asking too much
Character height:Asking too much
Character equipment: Powersword, Enhanced Boltpistol, and special armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit.
Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. they travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. I don't feel like describing how the Nucians joined the Eldar, so I won't do it till later.
Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev.
Hey, no offense dude, but I really don't see how it's asking too much for you to just write 6'1 or whatever and he is [nice, kind, evil etc] - and as for that special armour.. meh.
Mind.....taking....too much stress.........Mind .......*Mind Explodes and brings half of America to destruction*
Personality - Prefers to leed by example, Very Kind fellow, but can be a real hard-ass when needed.
Height - 6'1"
Well good sir, he was wearing the special armour in the First War. I just never said it as Special Armour.
The suit just seems too "nah, not gonna happen" to me. I mean, before something can start being produced, it has to go through the mechanicum (usually).
How about just saying it's carapace armour? You're not gonna need the other stuff in this RP anyway.. probably not anyway.. -plots-
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:
The suit just seems too "nah, not gonna happen" to me. I mean, before something can start being produced, it has to go through the mechanicum (usually).
How about just saying it's carapace armour? You're not gonna need the other stuff in this RP anyway.. probably not anyway.. -plots-
*sigh* *facepalm* * sigh* Nikev(considered dead/heretic to the Imperium) goes to the Mechanicum, "Hey could you make this for me?" Clerk "Get'em" *Inquisition busts in ending Nikev's quest for Isha* The Eldar made the armour, its a mix between eldar and standard Imperial armour, pretty much all it does is make it so I can fight Nurglings and things of that nature and not be killed by the poison and what-not. It adds no strength, maybe more flexible that standard armour but thats it.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Ah, right. Mmm.. he'll be a bit noticable to any vindicare assassin who happens to be hanging around, or for that matter, anyone .
There is a simple way of solving this, hower - wear clothes over the top .
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
*man in bulky awkward clothing walks into bar*
Man - "Give me a drink"
Bartender - ......."Get him"
*Inquisition busts in guns blazing ending NIkev's quest*
that is a very good suggestion  changing my clothes...you'll never find my Identity!
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:*man in bulky awkward clothing walks into bar*
Man - "Give me a drink"
Bartender - ......."Get him"
*Inquisition busts in guns blazing ending NIkev's quest*
that is a very good suggestion changing my clothes...you'll never find my Identity!
Just wear typical Lord Commissar clothing + standard Carapace armour on top.
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Post by: Grambo
Character name:Graeme
Character age:23
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Mercanary,Merc Colonel
Character personality:nice towards most people,hates idiots.Hate tyranids.
Character appearance:Sorta tall,weres a trench coat.No facial hair.
Character height:6'3
Character equipment:Bolt gun,bolt pistol,power sword,the bolt guns have hellfire rounds,reinforced carapace armor.
Character bio/background story:Grew up in a privilged family,went to school,but was "drafted" in to the imperium guard.He rised through the ranks and was a commisar at one point,his whole battalion was massacerd by a tyranid ambush,he was the only survivor.He is now a colonel in a mercanary army.
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Post by: Grambo
So,when does this start?
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Post by: Grambo
So can i start?
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Grambo wrote:Character name:Graeme
Character age:23
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Mercanary,Merc Colonel
Character personality:nice towards most people,hates idiots.Hate tyranids.
Character appearance:Sorta tall,weres a trench coat.No facial hair.
Character height:6'3
Character equipment:Bolt gun,bolt pistol,power sword,the bolt guns have hellfire rounds,reinforced carapace armor.
Character bio/background story:Grew up in a privilged family,went to school,but was "drafted" in to the imperium guard.He rised through the ranks and was a commisar at one point,his whole battalion was massacerd by a tyranid ambush,he was the only survivor.He is now a colonel in a mercanary army.
Does noone want to be in the Imperial guard?
As for him being a mercenary, there isn't really anyway he could get into the planetary system.. and mercenaries don't tend to have entire armies.
Nit-picking time..
Commissar's are trained exclusively at the schola progenium as far as I know, and so you cannot start off as a guardsman and then become a commissar. And Commissar's don't change profession to become colonels - while I realize you wrote mercenary, I think you should change your characters' fluff to something like the following:
Graeme was born to a noble family on Naruke II, but during the Tyranid invasion in 999.M41 they were all killed by a Tyranid invasion - but he survived because he was rescued by Imperial Guardsmen fleeing the planet during the evacuation. He was later inducted into the schola progenium. He graduated to become a stormtrooper, and later a Commissar. He is currently a Commissar assigned to a platoon in the Imperial Nucian forces. Ever since his family were killed by Tyranids, he's had an uncontrollable hatred for them, and is eager to return to the planet of his birth in search of any Tyranids so he can exact vengeance.
Also, to fit in with what I've written above for you and the timeline of the whole RP, could you also make him aged 27-30? It'd just make much more sense.
--
I only suggest this because it will make it much easier for your character to interact with other characters, join in with the RP more and etc etc.
I'm OK with the hellfire rounds, but remember your character won't have an endless supply of the ammunition.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
No, you cannot start yet as the RP hasn't started yet. I'll tell y'all when.
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Post by: Grambo
Character name:Graeme
Character age:27
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Imperium of Mankind Commisar
Character personality:nice towards most people,hates idiots.Hate tyranids.
Character appearance:Sorta tall,weres a trench coat.No facial hair.
Character height:6'3
Character equipment:Bolt gun,bolt pistol,power sword,the bolt guns have hellfire rounds,reinforced carapace armor.
Character bio/background story:Graeme was born to a noble family on Naruke II, but during the Tyranid invasion in 999.M41 they were all killed by a Tyranid invasion - but he survived because he was rescued by Imperial Guardsmen fleeing the planet during the evacuation. He was later inducted into the schola progenium. He graduated to become a stormtrooper, and later a Commissar. He is currently a Commissar assigned to a platoon in the Imperial Nucian forces. Ever since his family were killed by Tyranids, he's had an uncontrollable hatred for them, and is eager to return to the planet of his birth in search of any Tyranids so he can exact vengeance.
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Post by: Grambo
Thanks dark.
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Post by: VikingScott
Might have to pull a character from the dead.... (jks)
Or at least pull out another insane tank commander...
Nah same character twice would be boring.
Character name: Isaac Karakov
Character age: Mechanicus implants make a mockery of age
Character rank/profession/allegiance: Tech-preist, dislikes the Mechanicum.
Character personality: Sceptic, follows own motives.
Character appearance: Freaking guess!
Character height: 1.65 M. 3.15 with servo arm and other mechandrites fully extended.
Character equipment: Utility mechandrite (a weaker servo-arm pretty much), Medical Mechandrite, Servo-arm, Respirator, Electoo inductor, Balistic Mechandrite, Plasma cutter mounted on the utility mechandrite. moddified Heavy stubber.
Character bio/background story: Was present during the last war on Naruke. Got sent off of the planet on a charge of losing a super-heavy vehicle under his command. ( WoA 1st timers will get this.  ). Sent back as part of a penitence mission for losing said Hellhammer and for experimenting with tech.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
I take it you did read the entirety of the last WoA?
And Grambo, you're welcome. But may I make a suggestion - I've seen your writing in another RP thread; so I think that perhaps you should write your in character posts in microsoft word/equivelent and spellcheck before posting? Nothing personal, I tell it to everyone whose grammar might not be the best.
And going off what you wrote in the other RP - remember speech marks and whatnot.
Now, about that Hellhammer..
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Post by: VikingScott
Yeah I did read the whole of it. I got to say it did go a little ott with the blood angel marine at the end.
So am I in?
(Yeah i thought I should put a little inside joke about my last character in )
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Of course ye be.
OTT? Nah, he did a Mephiston kung-fu swastika shurikan wielding monkey move on the 'nids. 'Nuff said.
Anyway, it allows me to pwn anything with him now, and he IS the reason for the BA's being there incase anyone hadn't worked it out yet.
Anyway, anyone else got the Aliens Vs Predator video game? Got it today, and I have to say, damned awesome but messy game.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
SEE? SWASTIKA SHURIKAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY EXIST!
And there was me thinking I'd invented something else instead of doing maths.. again..
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Post by: VikingScott
Darkvoidof40k wrote:
OTT? Nah, he did a Mephiston kung-fu swastika shurikan wielding monkey move on the 'nids. 'Nuff said.
......... and that's not OTT? Mephiston is a special character. Kinda allowed.
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Post by: Grambo
Mkay,thanks,il do that.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
VikingScott wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:
OTT? Nah, he did a Mephiston kung-fu swastika shurikan wielding monkey move on the 'nids. 'Nuff said.
......... and that's not OTT? Mephiston is a special character. Kinda allowed.
He isn't a special character in this RP, he's just what and who he is. Besides, Mephy has much to teach him.
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Post by: VikingScott
I advise against using an established character. at least not in detail. Say he is present at certain battles and such but don't directly involve him.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
I will be using him, however only Arkus and other BA's will know what is passing between them, so none of the other characters will know what they're saying.
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Post by: VikingScott
aww. crap. I'm gonna have to bail on this one. Going away for a while soon. Won't be able to participate.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
I'm going away in a weeks time, and a lot of people are on holiday anyway. Not much will happen for now though, so if you want I'll keep your character alive for you.
Btw, how long are you going away for?
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Grambo wrote: He is currently a Commissar assigned to a platoon in the Imperial Nucian forces.
Woah Woah Woah WOAH!!!!!
I am very protective of the Nucians............the only Nucians established were the rouge Nucians....and I most certainly do NOT! have any Imperial Commissars in that Army......sorry bud, but you've got some bio editing to do......
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Ah, but you said there were imperial and rogue nucians.. damned confusing. -edits-
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Character name:Graeme
Character age:27
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Imperium of Mankind Commisar
Character personality:nice towards most people,hates idiots.Hate tyranids.
Character appearance:Sorta tall,weres a trench coat.No facial hair.
Character height:6'3
Character equipment:Bolt gun,bolt pistol,power sword,the bolt guns have hellfire rounds,reinforced carapace armor.
Character bio/background story:Graeme was born to a noble family on Naruke II, but during the Tyranid invasion in 999.M41 they were all killed by a Tyranid invasion - but he survived because he was rescued by Imperial Guardsmen fleeing the planet during the evacuation. He was later inducted into the schola progenium. He graduated to become a stormtrooper, and later a Commissar. He is currently a Commissar assigned to a platoon in the Naruke forces. Ever since his family were killed by Tyranids, he's had an uncontrollable hatred for them, and is eager to return to the planet of his birth in search of any Tyranids so he can exact vengeance.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Damn, these LOOPHOLES!!!!
Thanks for editing it......that is greatly appreciated
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
No problem.
Tbh, if you want, I could just get rid of all the stuff about the nucians and Nikev and you could just have him coming back because he heard about the expedition heading back there and he felt sentimental, and he got to go along with some Nucian troops because a certain friend in the inquisition who was there during the Tyranid invasion had a few contacts..
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
haha, nah its all groovy, thanks though. I'll just think of some other reason(like I did in the first one) for the Nucians to go there a second time.....well....technically....I never found what I was looking for on the first War.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
What were you looking for? Or rather what was Commissar Nikev looking for?
Also, how is he still a commissar? Seeing as how he's rogue he isn't a part of the commissariat anymore.. right? >.<
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
He was searching for a Tear of Isha.......a link to finding her....
An army with no order is a band of vagabonds that are doomed to fall on the field of battle by those who prepare. Just because they are rouges doesn't mean they are without order. They pretty much fight with the same tactics as a regular Imperial Guard army except with a few changes because they fight alongside eldar and must accommodate accordingly.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
@NIkev - changed the OP fluff, hopefully it's better for everyone now.
@ VScott - Hope you haven't abandoned us completely yet.
@ everyone else - last week of the summer hols, I think I'll kick everything off, that is, assuming everyone'll be back by then.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Guys, on Monday I'm on holiday again for 10 days-ish. I'll be able to get on the internet though for an hour or so a day.. hopefully anyway..
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:@NIkev - changed the OP fluff, hopefully it's better for everyone now.
Appears Fantastic TO ME 
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Here's Arkus' MK2 profile, with quite a bit information on Naruke in the last 15 years.
Name - Arkus Pallemon
Age - 117
speciality - Close assault.. with anything..
equipment - Chainsword, Boltgun, Bolt pistol, Plasma pistol, severely damaged power armour with unauthodox battlefield repair
height - 10 ft 7
Biography - Exiled from the Blood Angels chapter due to a single, cataclismic decision that ruined him. He was a good warrior, but on the doomed world of Erkus IV, he chose to detonate missile silos on the planets surface, destroying a large Ork force, including the Waaagh!'s Warboss. However, he also caused the death of 30 of his battle brothers, an unforgivable crime. After, he went where he wilt and did what he wilt, still fighting in the name of the Emperor whenever he could. Otherwise, he was guns for hire in the Imperium, working for whoever could get him wargear, information, transportation or whatever he requires. In 999.M41, he found himself on Naruke II, fighting with thousands of Imperial soldiers and a company of Red Scorpions, defending the planet against Nurgle Daemons and Chaos Astartes, a Tau colonist force and a tendril of Hive Fleet Leviathan. Naruke II was lost, thousands of Guardsmen died along with even more civilians, and the Red Scorpions battle company was heavily depleted, down to only a couple dozen men, with many of their vehicles destroyed. Arkus remained behind, parting with a then recently acquainted Nucian Commissar, Nikev. Arkus, and the Dreadnought Zindler, fought against thousands of Tyranids assaulting the final strongpoint that the rest of the Imperials had evacuated in the capital city. Zindler was eventually overcome by a raging Carnifex, his reactor-core going critical and taking many Tyranids with him. Arkus succombed to the Black Rage, but, like the Blood Angels' chief Librarian, Mephiston, managed to control it. When he was fighting who he believed to be Horus and his traitor marines, he was really tackling the Tyranid Hive Tyrant and all the beasts it commanded. He defeated all the Tyranids that stood in his path, until the Hive Tyrant was dead. Following his experiences defeating the Black Rage, in which he believed he had been approved of by the Emperor himself, he became a fearless warrior. After that, he fought for roughly fifteen years, fighting against the Tyranids, Tau and Traitor marines that remained on the planet. The planet was invaded many times, and amongst others, rampaging Ork warbands fought across the planet with rogue humans, Daemons, Kroot and all manner of other creatures. The planet became a gladitorial fighting ground where the strongest went to prove themselves in those cultures that value martial prowess strongly. Arkus defeated all who stood before him, slaying Kroot shapers, Ork Warboss's, Chaos champions and anything else that got in his way.
appearence: Bald, big, muscly and yet somehow easy going.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism
Character age: 55(but his condition is as if he was in his mid-20's due to controlled exposure to the warp)
Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe who hunt down the forces of Nurgle and search for the Tears of Isha.
Character personality:Understanding, hardworking, get the job done kind of guy. But he knows when the time to relax is
Character appearance: Light skin, due to being almost constantly in his full-body suit.
Character height: 6' 4"
Character equipment: Enhanced Powersword, Boltpistol, and special Armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit, but is disguised as a standard Imperial Commissar Uniform unless activated and sealed.
Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. They travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. Being rescued from the forces of Nurgle, The Lady of Nucia assigned the Knights of Nucia along with Commissar Nikev, to the Ulthwe attachment to travel the verse and hunt down and rescue Isha. Searching for her Tears to track her down.
Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
New profile, eh? *eats*
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Not really new. I just wasn't very lazy at the time and thought I'd give NIkev a proper profile update.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Not really new. I just wasn't very lazy at the time and thought I'd give NIkev a proper profile update.
It is an updated version of the last profile. It is recent. Hence, it is new.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Ey, when is this show going to get on the road?
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:
Anyway, anyone else got the Aliens Vs Predator video game? Got it today, and I have to say, damned awesome but messy game.
Just now saw this and didn't care to check if I saw it at an earlier date. Yea, I got it when if first came out........BIG Disappointment. I wish they would come out with Aliens: Colonial Marines. That will probably make me goo in the store because its so amazing.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
This RP will be starting this week!
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:This RP will be starting this week!
This was said 2 weeks ago, and the week before that......I may cry if it does not start this week
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:This RP will be starting this week!
This was said 2 weeks ago, and the week before that......I may cry if it does not start this week
No..it wasn't... 
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Darkvoidof40k wrote:@ everyone else - last week of the summer hols, I think I'll kick everything off, that is, assuming everyone'll be back by then.
See? That's all I said about it previously.
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Also, I think we may need to find more players.. we only have about three signed up or something.. and I don't want this RP starting with the kind of numbers the last one ended with.. 
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
FLUFF UPDATE in the OP, everyone!
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
CURRENT CHARACTERS Klawz: Character name: Captain Varl Character age: 50 Character rank/profession/allegiance: Captain of the 5th Naruke Armored Company Character personality: Grim and cynical Character appearance: Tall, missing an arm, covered in nasty scars Character height: 6' 2" Character equipment: Power sword, Las-pistol Character bio/background story: Has served as head of the Naruke PDF for many years, and was one of the last people off planet. (please note: in alternete reality (one in which the nids lost) he went on to become head of the mperial Guard stationed in the Naruke section) Picture(if you can find one): Commissar NIkev: Character name:Commissar NIkev Sism Character age: 55(but his condition is as if he was in his mid-20's due to controlled exposure to the warp) Character rank/profession/allegiance:Commissar/ Commander of the Knights of Nucia/ Allegiance to the citizens who worship the Emperor and the Eldar of the detachment from Ulthwe who hunt down the forces of Nurgle and search for the Tears of Isha. Character personality:Understanding, hardworking, get the job done kind of guy. But he knows when the time to relax is Character appearance: Light skin, due to being almost constantly in his full-body suit. Character height: 6' 4" Character equipment: Enhanced Powersword, Boltpistol, and special Armour designed to protect against neurotoxins and can become a vacume suit, but is disguised as a standard Imperial Commissar Uniform unless activated and sealed. Character bio/background story:Commander of the Knights of Nucia and fights alonside a special detachment of eldar from the Craftworld Ulthwe. They travel the universe in order to find and save the Eldar God Isha. Being rescued from the forces of Nurgle, The Lady of Nucia assigned the Knights of Nucia along with Commissar Nikev, to the Ulthwe attachment to travel the verse and hunt down and rescue Isha. Searching for her Tears to track her down. Picture(if you can find one): I have yet to draw a pic of Nikev. Grambo: Character name:Graeme Character age:27 Character rank/profession/allegiance:Imperium of Mankind Commisar Character personality:nice towards most people,hates idiots.Hate tyranids. Character appearance:Sorta tall,weres a trench coat.No facial hair. Character height:6'3 Character equipment:Bolt gun,bolt pistol,power sword,the bolt guns have hellfire rounds,reinforced carapace armor. Character bio/background story:Graeme was born to a noble family on Naruke II, but during the Tyranid invasion in 999.M41 they were all killed by a Tyranid invasion - but he survived because he was rescued by Imperial Guardsmen fleeing the planet during the evacuation. He was later inducted into the schola progenium. He graduated to become a stormtrooper, and later a Commissar. He is currently a Commissar assigned to a platoon in the Naruke forces. Ever since his family were killed by Tyranids, he's had an uncontrollable hatred for them, and is eager to return to the planet of his birth in search of any Tyranids so he can exact vengeance. Darkvoidof40k (me, the GM!): Name - Arkus Pallemon Age - 117 speciality - Close assault.. with anything.. equipment - Chainsword, Boltgun, Bolt pistol, Plasma pistol, severely damaged power armour with unauthodox battlefield repair height - 10 ft 7 Biography - Exiled from the Blood Angels chapter due to a single, cataclismic decision that ruined him. He was a good warrior, but on the doomed world of Erkus IV, he chose to detonate missile silos on the planets surface, destroying a large Ork force, including the Waaagh!'s Warboss. However, he also caused the death of 30 of his battle brothers, an unforgivable crime. After, he went where he wilt and did what he wilt, still fighting in the name of the Emperor whenever he could. Otherwise, he was guns for hire in the Imperium, working for whoever could get him wargear, information, transportation or whatever he requires. In 999.M41, he found himself on Naruke II, fighting with thousands of Imperial soldiers and a company of Red Scorpions, defending the planet against Nurgle Daemons and Chaos Astartes, a Tau colonist force and a tendril of Hive Fleet Leviathan. Naruke II was lost, thousands of Guardsmen died along with even more civilians, and the Red Scorpions battle company was heavily depleted, down to only a couple dozen men, with many of their vehicles destroyed. Arkus remained behind, parting with a then recently acquainted Nucian Commissar, Nikev. Arkus, and the Dreadnought Zindler, fought against thousands of Tyranids assaulting the final strongpoint that the rest of the Imperials had evacuated in the capital city. Zindler was eventually overcome by a raging Carnifex, his reactor-core going critical and taking many Tyranids with him. Arkus succombed to the Black Rage, but, like the Blood Angels' chief Librarian, Mephiston, managed to control it. When he was fighting who he believed to be Horus and his traitor marines, he was really tackling the Tyranid Hive Tyrant and all the beasts it commanded. He defeated all the Tyranids that stood in his path, until the Hive Tyrant was dead. Following his experiences defeating the Black Rage, in which he believed he had been approved of by the Emperor himself, he became a fearless warrior. After that, he fought for roughly fifteen years, fighting against the Tyranids, Tau and Traitor marines that remained on the planet. The planet was invaded many times, and amongst others, rampaging Ork warbands fought across the planet with rogue humans, Daemons, Kroot and all manner of other creatures. The planet became a gladitorial fighting ground where the strongest went to prove themselves in those cultures that value martial prowess strongly. Arkus defeated all who stood before him, slaying Kroot shapers, Ork Warboss's, Chaos champions and anything else that got in his way. appearence: Bald, big, muscly and yet somehow easy going.
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Post by: Cadet_Commissar_Ludd
A Captain Varl? Paguerism!
/Runs away before Dark hits me
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Post by: Gorskar.da.Lost
Character name: Warboss Gorskar Ugskragga (commonly nicknamed Gorskar the Lost due to the unerring ability of his Waagh! to never get to where they decide to go)
Character age: 88 (he's really quite successful)
Character rank/profession/allegiance: Warboss of a very small Waagh!, and current leader of the Flamin' Wheelz tribe.
Character personality: Vicious, brutal, fairly cunning, and a half-competent strategist. Is a suprisingly fanatical disciplinarian.
Character appearance: Vibrant green skin, extremely muscular, part of his head and left arm have been replaced with bioniks due to wounds over the ages.
Character height: 10ft 2in
Character equipment: Personalised shoota (it's got two barrels, for extra Dakka), Power Klaw grafted to left arm, crude targeting array inbuilt into his bionik bonce and a reliable old suit of 'eavy plate armour, with his personal bosspole attached to the back.
Character bio/background story: Gorskar leads a Waaagh! comprised of various kults of speed, the most notable of which is his own tribe, the Flamin' Wheelz. Unfortunately, he can never seem to get to his desired destination of Armageddon no matter how hard he tries due to a mixture of inept grot map-readers and plain bad luck. Despite his successes on other worlds, he still feels cheated by the universe and vows that when he finally does reach Armageddon, he will show everyone "how you smash up a world good an' proper."
Picture(if you can find one):
(that's my actual model of him. I was going to convert one, but I liked this one so much...)
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Welcome to Naruke II. I'll PM you tomorrow about ways for you to enter the RP when it starts. Edit: @ Ludd - not my character, don't give a damn. Fancy joining the RP?
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Post by: Cadet_Commissar_Ludd
No offence Dark but I got way to much on my plate anyway. Gowab, DoS and Pelvichammer are enough for me unlike you.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Cadet_Commissar_Ludd wrote:No offence Dark but I got way to much on my plate anyway. Gowab, DoS and Pelvichammer are enough for me unlike you.
Weak minded fool.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Hmm.. I would still like more players.
It's a shame VScott won't be participating.
I'll just advertise on my other RPs.
God I have to resurrect Gowab..
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Okay guys! RP starts now!
Now, if you're on the Imperial side, you're either
1) aboard your ships, heading towards Naruke II.
2) Survivers from the last war who are on the planet.
If you're an Ork, you're either;
1) already on the planet, fighting all the rogues, criminals, other Ork warbands, the Human population (made up of survivers of the first war who were abandoned and any security, PDF or military forces left behind) and anyone else that shows up. And there WILL be others showing up.
2) Exiting the warp in yer ships.
Everyone make an introductory post or two, and to anyone else, WE ARE STILL ACCEPTING NEW PLAYERS! And we need 'em, so feel free to invite other people to join this RP, guys! 
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Post by: Gorskar.da.Lost
The deck of the space hulk shuddered again. The tremors were becoming more and more violent as the Starkrusha's Revenge reached the end of it's travels.
Gorskar cracked his knuckles, and yawned. They had run out of Genestealers to fight three days ago, and since then there had been only one minor mutiny. This was getting boring.
"MAP-GROTZ! Where is we?"
One of the larger and more competent of the gretchin looked up from the charts.
"We's gonna be exiting the warp soon, Boss, in about, uh..." the diminutive greenskin began to count on his fingers, whilst his comrades began to squabble over the exact location of the planet they would arrive at. Gorskar patiently waited for half a minute, before losing his temper and hurling an empty squig-beer cask at the mob.
The general consensus, when they had stopped shrieking, was that they would re-enter real-space any time in the next half an hour. Where they would re-enter was anyone's guess.
Once more the deck shuddered, and the frame of the Space Hulk groaned with stress.
Gorskar snarled.
"Good, da sooner da better."
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Nikev scanned the deck around him. "I remember" He began, "I remember when I was almost killed." He could remember it so clearly.
"Run!" Nikev shouted to Kar as he pushed her up and away from the lumbering beast.
Ripping out his Chainsword from its holster Nikev Roared with the Fury of the Emperor for his Injured friend! Roaring alongside his chainsword holding it two handed Nikev prepared for a fight he knew without the Emperor's Grace he would not make it out alive.
"FIGHT ME FOUL XENO!" Nikev bellowed as the Beast began to lurch forward.
Rolling to the ground Nikev thought to himself how lucky he was to dodge such a quick lunge.
Rearing back to strike again the beast looked evermore determined to kill Nikev this time.
Suddenly just as the beast was about to Lunge forward, Las-fire and Bolter fire Erupted from the ruins around them.
As the beast reared back from this sudden new threat Nikev took this time to Charge forward. Seeing an opening in its Defense Nikev Lunged with his Chainsword roaring.
Phased but not unaware the Beast snapped back into focus and slashed at Nikev with one of its massive Claws.
Performing a two handed block the Claw smashed into the Chainsword flinging Nikev back. Nikev skidded a good 30 meters before he finally smashed against a ruin.
Ignoring all other opposition the Beast Lunged toward Nikev Stopping only a few meters away from him.
Nikev could smell the disgust and rot that the beast breathed. Unable to move from his breath being knocked out of him. Nikev could only sit and watch his doom loom ever closer to him.
From nowhere over the Crack and Fizz of the las-guns and bolter a Mighty Roar Filled the air. Nikev recognized this as the Roar of a Space Marine Speeder Bike.
"STRIKE NOW BROTHERS!" was one of the few things Nikev heard as his closing eyelids witnessed a Speeder Bike ram the side of the beast tearing it from its current course.
The last thing he heard was Karjewski's voice calling his name as he slowly slipped from consciousness.
As his memory faded, the sound of the machinery became ever louder. "SIR!" Bantine called "We are approaching the planet." Nikev looked toward the Bantine, "I Presume the Eldar are to stay back while we deal with our mission?" "Yes sir, they are having teams ready on hand in case there is ANY type of incident and they are needed. They are staying cloaked approximately 4 hours behind us.". "That's just fantastic" NIkev said aloud, "Lets get on down there." He turned to Bantine "Ere we go again.".
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
So.. Nikev is on the planet? When I wrote "survivors from the last war" I meant the ones that had been left behind. 
If possible, it would be good if you could edit the above to have Nikev aboard his ship. To save the work you've done, you could put it into a word document and use it later in the RP.
Sorry for the lack of clarification on my part.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
I know not what you speak of
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Darkvoidof40k wrote:Okay guys! RP starts now!
Now, if you're on the Imperial side, you're either
1) aboard your ships, heading towards Naruke II.
2) Survivers from the last war who are on the planet.
If you're an Ork, you're either;
1) already on the planet, fighting all the rogues, criminals, other Ork warbands, the Human population (made up of survivers of the first war who were abandoned and any security, PDF or military forces left behind) and anyone else that shows up. And there WILL be others showing up.
2) Exiting the warp in yer ships.
Everyone make an introductory post or two, and to anyone else, WE ARE STILL ACCEPTING NEW PLAYERS! And we need 'em, so feel free to invite other people to join this RP, guys!
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Post by: Gregersen
Character name:Gregersen
Character Age: 421
Character rank:The Hunter/profession: Space Marine/allegiance:Leman Russ and the Emperor
Character personality:Silent unless he has something of worth to say, a rager in battle but temperment and the bearsark rage are honed to be controlled by centuries of battle.
Character appearance: Gray maine, large fangs from years of living.
Character height: 11ft 5 inches/
Character equipment: Hell forged frost axe, rune armour, storm bolter.
Character bio/background story: The lone wolf, Astates of Fenris, Chapter Space Wolves. Gregersen has seen Orks, Tyranid, Chaos filth all dead. He has the scars to prove it. He will kill all the fething Zeno's and Chaos out there and die trying. The blood of his enmies make the wolves spirit in his veins howl with delight. he has Felt the wolf there since childhood, he knows it is as part of him as the wind blows through the trees. he is a loyal and serves the wolf lord well. Though he hates all chaos filth, the thousand sons are his true adversaries. Just as it is for all the Wolves of Fenris. He is in secret the Great Wolfs right hand"The Hunter", and when his lord wills it he has the authority to commandeer any of the Wolf Lords companies. Now Gregersen, has in secret goes to this System called Naruke, he has been led to believe in this system there may be a weapon to strike a blow against the forces of Chaos, maybe even launch another crusade to seek out Russ....maybe, with him are handpicked wolves od his choosing....6 wolf scouts, and 3 lone wolves seeking to regain their honour....He will come back victorious or dead.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
"Sir, where are we to head?" asked the ship-master. "Hmmm, well I think it would be best to start the search back in the place we were forced to abandon. Head for the old ruins, hopefully this time there won't be any Mawlocs for me to fight 1 on 1 again."
"But you have to admit" Bantine began, "That was one of the most Bad-ass things I've ever seen. I really thought you were going to die."
"Well thanks Bantine" Nikev replied with a friendly smile, "I'm just glad that Sanlar pulled through that fight." Nikev looked at Sanlar and smiled with a nod.
"Well sir, without you there I most certainly would have been dead, I thank you." Sanlar nodded back with a slight bow attached.
"It was nothing, I would have expected anyone to have done the sa-"
"Sir, Imperial ships are requesting why we are so far away from the battle group. Orders for response?" Interrupted the Coms-Officer.
"Hmmm, well lets see, Well I remember us receiving a weak distress signal that we barely picked up don't you Bantine?" Nikev replied.
"O why Yes SIR! I'll go prop a 'rescue' team immediately!" Bantine turned to the door and began heading to the troop bay.
"Thank you Bantine, now, I must be off gentleman. Ship-Master, your in charge with the ship while I'm off planet. See you all soon." NIkev smiled and left the bridge to grab his gear and head to the troop compartment.
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"Incoming!"
"What?" Demanded the ships' captain.
"Sir, something just exited the warp off port side.. something.. huge!" Replied the deck officer.
"Well, don't just sit around, damn you all! Bring us hard to port, I want to see what the hell just decided to pay us a little visit," ordered Captain Kaas.
"It ain't Imperial sir.."
Kaas' blood turned cold when he saw what was ahead of him. A massive comflagaration of ships, both ancient and new, forced together into one giant construct.
"Emperor have mercy.."
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"Wotz dat over there?" Demanded Gorskar. When the small grot he was talking to failed to produce an answer, Gorskar produced a green splat on the floor where the grot had been.
"Oi, you! Mekboy, wots dat over there? If it ain't somethin' to crunch, I'll smash yer 'ead in!"
The mek fiddled with some orky know-wots machinary and eventually turned back to Gorskar. "'Ere boss! It's some 'umies by da looks of it!"
The Warboss grinned his green grin, and said, "well wot you waitin' for? Give 'em some dakka!"
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Post by: Gregersen
"We are entering system now Lord" said the Captain. A ancient glance from the towering giant reathed in an aura of awe inspring cold intelligence and barely restrained strength.
"Proceed Captain keep us away from all other forces in the system, we are here as hunters for our prey." Said Gregersen. "We are Sons of Russ we will fight as wolves but now we stalk our objective, we do not have enough resouces anyways to help with any major battles anyways." Gregersen said, to the fellow Wolf beside him, a Wolf Scout silent and lethal like the cold death of Fenris, named Fjor.
The Scout merely noded in agreeance to The Hunter, as Gregersen was known as by a select few, for Gregersen is the right paw of the Great Wolf Logan Grimnar.
Lord we have a unidentified vessel entering the system and we also have a Imperial Nucian vessel plummeting away from formaion! What are our orders?"
Glancing at the halomap in front of him," We proceed to the planet." He growels."The imperial fleet will have to deal with the Orks themselves, follow that vessel the Nician one the one with the commander named Commisar Nikev, do not allow our prescense to be known yet, we are not coward but we have a mission, charging forth into battle like a Blood Claw will do us no good, or our chapter. To war we go! My brothers, to yet more glory! For Russ! For the Emperor!" Roared Gregersen to everyone on his ship.
So the Wolf vessel passed unseen to follow in the wake of Nikevs vessel.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
OOC: Shall we say Commissar Nikev's on a landing craft or something? Because the ship he was on is the one I described in green.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:OOC: Shall we say Commissar Nikev's on a landing craft or something? Because the ship he was on is the one I described in green.
*Wakes up groggily, runs outside and raises his fist to the Air "DAMN YOU DARKVOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOID!"*
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
"SIR!" Cried the Pilot in shock,"ORKS HAVE ENTERED THE SYSTEM!"
"Damnit, where are they now? Will we make it planet side?" Nikev Asked.
"Yes Sir, Ship-Master Malnor is now engaging them." Nikev looked out the port window and saw Victory's Sword turning to engage the enemy. Nikev pushed the ship to ship com-switch "Good luck ship-master. May our Lady's Grace guide you through the dark."
"Roger that Commissar. Fly safe, I'm emergency sending the Nucian, Ordainian, and Razangoarian forces down, this doesn't seem to be a battle I can win. May you carry on in our Lady's Honour."
As NIkev turned to sit back in his seat, he could swear that he could see the outline of ships in the far distance. "Damnit, they just won't back the rak off."
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The emergency drop lights flashed aboard Victory's Sword. Troopers, mechanics, and pilots alike were rushing to their drop-pods/tanks/and Space-craft alike. The Angels of Ordain began preparations for Defense and Offense. The Steel of Razengoar sat in their tanks awaiting to be dropped planet side. The Remaining Knights of Nucia settled in the seats upon the vast number of drop ships, preparing to drop planet-side and be alongside their comrades. In all, they were 50,000 foot troops strong, 10,000 vehicles strong, and 80,000 fighters strong. Though they all knew with the size of the Ork Fleet, barely half would make it planet side.
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Post by: Gregersen
"Damnation, on the green skin scum may they rot in the abyss with the Kraken!" roared Gregersen. "Prepare our ships, we only have my elite strike force but we do have plenty of servitor gunships, launch all of them!" said Gregersen
"Now, Captain i need you to bring us in within range of the planet so my team can drop in via drop pod." Gregersen said.
This was supposed to be a stealth mission, we have not the man power or firepower to help, this Nikevs forces, i had hoped to use them as a screen for us, but now these Orks xeno bastards have come to ruin us, we will see, my forces can not turn the tide of this battle, but now it seems I must do what i can. Gregersen thought to himself.
"My lord we have launched a small fighter screen, they will not last." Said the security chief.
"Very well, well done." Said Gregersen. " Captain, I need you to coordinate with our other ship, the Ice Fang, and you the Wolfs Fury, should be able to by us time after you instert our team into the planet. Once that is done, regroup with our other ship and make the xeno scum pay with every life on board this ship!."
Very well milord it will be done. And lord it has been an honor! Said the Captain.
The Hunter smiled revealing long fangs of a wolf. "You have done Russ proud" He said. " After you have inserted us, identify yourselfs to the Imperial fleet, I will not have you killed by friendly fire." Gregersen said.
Over his internal vox Gregersen said, "My wolves report to our Drop pod we go to meet our fates!"
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Victory's Sword began its assault on the Ork Fleet, Releasing its Angels, space began to light up. Ship defenses began opening fighter as the Ork ships grew closer and closer.
Squadron Leader Jarnol closed his eyes as his fighter was launched out into space. He listened to the chatter and reports as the flashing lights of the tunnel's brightened and darkened the inside of his eyelids. "Squad, switch channel to private 243 B32"
"Roger that Jarnol" came a chorus of replies from his squad.
Blasting out of the tunnels, Squadron 232 formed into their flying V maneuver. Squadron 232 was one of the best, and were 9 true angels of death. As they came around Victory's hull, they could see overwhelming numbers of Ork interceptors and bombers. There where so many that it was hard to look anywhere and not see an ork fighter.
"HOLY NAK!" exclaimed Haxmor, "There's so many of them!"
"Yea, but we've got the skill and fire-power to kill'em all." Saranty was the most cocky of the squad and was one of the best. She could best all but a few of the pilots that made up the squad.
"Ha, I bet you a nights drink that I kill more Greenskins than you." said Urano
"Your on!" replied Saranty.
"Don't drink too much you two, you know the guard doesn't do maternity leaves." Joked Nakal
"Alright, cut the chatter." Interrupted Jarnol, "Its's KILLING TIME!"
The Fighters had closed the space with the orks. Each side getting closer, the sides crossed and the shooting, crashing, and carnage began.
"Break formation but stay close enough to cover each other." Ordered Janol taking down a trio of orks fighta's in a series of twists and turns.
Performing perfect maneuvers Squadron 232 began to rack up the kills. There were untouchable as he orks continued the assault. Until, a new force came into the fight.
"What the hell!" shouted Urano, "Who the hell are the guys!?"
"Hold your triggers! They're Imperial!" stated, Jarnol, "They're not red and they don't look like Nak. So do not fire upon them."
"They're Teffin Servitors!" Said Saranty as she circled over one.
"Damn," cursed Jarnol,"These machines will be the death of us."
Little did Jarnol know, that he was absolutely right.
To be Continued......
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Post by: Gregersen
As the Wolves hooked up in the dropods, the ships Captain Lore contacted Gregersen. "Milord the sword frigate the Ice Fang and our servitors have engaged the ork fighters. It appears our frigate, has begun to fire flak at incoming Interceptor Ork bomber squadrons. Also the Ice Fang as begun to use its long range Las batteries at the Xeno ships."
" Good, Captain i need you to get us in quickly and then return and support the Ice Fang with the Wolfs Fury. This strike cruise may be able to help our frigate at a distance. Do what you can captain, this ships command is now yours." Gregersen replied.
"When do we get the bloody hel to battle my blade seeks the blood of our enemies, I will not die in the void!" Yelled the lone Wolf Thoren beside Gregersen. "I seek honor not this cursed death!"
"You will be silent!, Your honor is based on how we accomplish this mission! I brought you all because you all will fight to the last, you are heroes! Do not prove me wrong, all of you will live or die for the honor of our chapter."Growled Gregersen. "We are going in silently, and we will set up a Small base camp. If i our ships survives then we have support. If not then we are all on our own. We have rumours to be believed that there might be a STC on this world. With it we may be able to help our chapter launch another crusade against the ey of Terror, in search of Russ. I know you think this is a suicide mission but we have no choice. Now we go into the maw of death! May we return victorious!" The Hunter roared.
"Milord approaching planet, perpare for drop." Captain Lore said.
"Very well Lore." Gregersen said
With that the Wolfs Fury droped a ship that went unnoticed by all below and above, it could have been just a meteour for all the souls ont that planet. Little did any know the wolf was upon them.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Event soon.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Dodging, Shooting, and Winning was Squadron 232's game. They were the best, and the Orks had none that could match in skill. Being joined by the Servitors, the Angels were destroying the Ork assault. All was looking good, until the Orks played their ACE. From one of the ancient machines, there must have been a scrambling device from an old Warship. As the Orks activated it, machines auto functions began to go hay-wire. Although the Angels had no problem switching to Manuel and piloting through sight. The Servitors, were a different story. Having their systems go hay-wire, they randomly banked, swirved and dipped causing them to crash into unsuspecting friendlies, or suicidal enemies.
"These Teffin machines are going to be the end of us!" Shouted one of the members in squadron 232.
"Just keep fro-" Static filled the members of Squadron 232's headsets as Jarnol's fighter was hit by a malfunctioning servitor.
"NOOOOO!" Screamed Saranty, tears filling her eyes. Long had Squadron 232 been together, no-one falling to a single enemy. The Bond between them stronger than most families.
Newly Enraged, Squadron 232 began their onslaught of Ork fighta's and Servitor ships alike. One by one, falling to either a lucky Ork missile, debris, or to a Servitor malfunction. All but 3 members of Squadron 232 had been destroyed. Saranty, Urano, and Haxmor where the final fighters of the Legendary Squadron 232 when their fuel lights began to signal low. As they began their return to Victory's Sword the damage to their beloved home in the dark could be seen. Most of the compartments had been breached. Few of the defenses were operational as they grew closer. They knew they could not dock long. They had barely enough time to get half of their fuel and weapons, But they would make them count for their fallen family.
They began to fly back to the fight when order's were received to move to the Ground base that had been set up. All units that could be had been evacuated from the ship to the Base, being prepared on the ground. The Members of 232 cursed their orders, but followed them to assist the soldiers on the ground. For without Angels, No man can truly be safe from evil.
(OOC - Are we going by the same map as last time.)
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
I will update the map, but generally the land is the same shape. There's just different stuff there.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
*Ahem*.........*AHEM!!!!*...........
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Yeahhhhhhhhhhh I know. But I haven't had much sleep recently, and then there's school. Gimme a break.
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Post by: Gorskar.da.Lost
Battle had been joined with the fury and savagery that the greenskins delighted in. Not too long after the massive bulk of the Starkrusha's Revenge had ponderously slid from the warp, a lone Imperial vessel had engaged his ramshackle fleet. Gorskar was familiar with the pattern; the humans would send ships to defend their precious planet, and prevent any landings.
So far, the various mekboyz told him, the fleet was holding well, with only minor damage to one of the Terror Ships that had strayed too close to the Imperial cruiser's firepower. From the various funny-looking instruments, they also told him of another ship engaging their fleet. Fighta waves had been sent out from the two Terror Ships accompanying Gorskar's Space Hulk, but they were suffering from the Imperial counter-attack.
It mattered not.
"Get them fightas in our bays out. Only so long them Terror Ship's flying pansies can hold. Then git us in range of dat there cruiser, and ready da main guns."
Gorskar's klaw twitched slightly, and he snarled in impatience. The space battles were always the part he hated the most. After all, where was the glory in fighting if you couldn't kill your enemy face to face?
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:Yeahhhhhhhhhhh I know. But I haven't had much sleep recently, and then there's school. Gimme a break.
*sigh*
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:Yeahhhhhhhhhhh I know. But I haven't had much sleep recently, and then there's school. Gimme a break.
*sigh*
Might do something tomorrow [sat]. Depends on whether I manage to sleep in until midday like a normal person for the first time in my life. :/
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Darkvoidof40k wrote:Commissar NIkev wrote:Darkvoidof40k wrote:Yeahhhhhhhhhhh I know. But I haven't had much sleep recently, and then there's school. Gimme a break.
*sigh*
Might do something tomorrow [sat]. Depends on whether I manage to sleep in until midday like a normal person for the first time in my life. :/
.....I see now that nothing happened......and you didn't sleep till mid-day...........but just so you know, sleeping until mid-day is not normal....its just not smart.....
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
It is normal for us brits. Atleast on saturdays. Or whatever.
Anyway, is there really much point in doing this RP with only 3 people?
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Post by: Gorskar.da.Lost
Yes, you fool, of course there is! Don't you be quitting on us now!
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
Gorskar.da.Lost wrote:Yes, you fool, of course there is! Don't you be quitting on us now!
Exactly....so post an event........or at least tell us whats gonna happen and we'll make it happen....in our own way.
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Ok I promise, if I can find free time (a rare commodity for me these days.. ) then I'll do something.
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
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Post by: Commissar NIkev
*AHEM*
Map update needed for me to land mah ships
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Post by: Darkvoidof40k
Commissar NIkev wrote:*AHEM*
Map update needed for me to land mah ships
Long time no speak .
I'm afraid I don't have time for this roleplay anymore, as I'm GMing another one. A big one. Besides, it's been like three months since anyone posted here.
Maybe after my other roleplay..
Oh, yeah, you're more than welcome to join it. It will require you to do a fair bit of reading first though.. http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/324418.page
Nonetheless, it'd be good to have you aboard!
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