If you let me i'll make it more competitive.
Inquisitor Lord Hammer Hand, Physic Hood , 3 warriors 3 flamers Familiar Acolytes Bolt Pistol
(130pt)
Make it more flamey, give the Lord a combi-flamer or Incinerator. Hammerhand/thunderhammer is perfect.
Also don't forget your acolytes can have combi-flamers, i'd really give it to you if you could model 3 of them!
Ohyeah give it a rhino, nothing worse than 3 flamers not flameing...
3 x Inquisitorial Storm Trooper squads x 10 men 1 vet srg auspex Combi Flamer , 2 melta’s (426pts)
Meltaguns should really have a ride like a rhino to really get the meltaguns potential of
2d6 armour penetration.
If their walking Plasmagun is better, it has range and rapid fire.
All the rest could do with changing a little but it should be fine.