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So say one of the lost primarch's uhhhh... forgetting my fluff #2! was found.

So Primarch number two lands on a feral world, Xavia. The Emperor finds him but after the whole heresy he bids his legion farewell and returns to his "homeworld"


Over the years the primarch gained fame amunst the people of his homeworld, the Xaviens rallied behind him. He made a great clan known as the Skullreavers.

The great Bear, Rouk Dragongore whom as he was known to the people of Xavia. led a great war against the "Spikey red invaiders of Xavia" in the 40th milenium.

Soon after Space Wolf marines land, and a few watch a small group of Xaviens led by the bear himself fight off the Khornates.
They observed with respect as he would bellow "Odin guide my hand!' and tear them apart with a great axe made from sharpened stone.

In a odd dilmenia the Space Wolves can relate to the Xavien people, but they are showing negative signs of showing submission to the Emperor. However it is sure they are free of the taint of xenos and heretic, as they fight the Khornates threatning thier world.

Cool idea?


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On top of this. While a feral world the Xaviens do have autoguns. They often make a rifle-axe kinda like the Necron gauss rifle. Just not shooting atom ripping energy.

Also how should the Space Wolves treat the Xaviens? as they are being reckless they see very human morals and creeds similar to their own.

For starters, I'd suggest that you try to compose that "very wip" idea into coherent sentences and paragraphs. I'm not sure what half of your writing is talking about.

Abandoning the IoM after the Heresy, with the Emperor almost dead etc. seems like a pretty selfish thing to do. Doesn't this primarch have any loyalty to the bigger picture?

Who is this "great Bear, Rouk Dragongore"?

The "Spikey read invaders" are traitor marines, right? What are the Space Wolf suddenly doing there?

A stone axe wouldn't be a very effective weapon against power armor. You'll also need to do a fair bit of explaining as to why your Xavians can have advanced weapons without any industry to make them.
While the axe-guns sound cool, they wouldn't be very practical weapons. The balance would be all wrong.

Finally, the only coherent idea that I'm seeing is the Xavians being the same kind of traitors as their primarch. I'd expect the Space Wolf to despise someone who abandoned the Imperium at it's most critical hour, just to go home. The Xavians in general would be treated similarly, with the possibility of redemption if they're willing to give up their heathen heresies and join the fight for humanitys survival.

Fixed it abit. Well thank you on at least commenting on it.


Perhaps he felt he had failed and went into seclusion because of it?

Yes the red invaiders are World Eater's the Space Wolves were sent there by the high lords to see why they were there, and what they were doing.


And the Primarch Rouk knew lots of the technology lost to the heresy and to help keep him on the top, Gave his clan some of it so they could be more advanced and stronger etc.


He is quite selfish and abit of a egotist.