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This is the fluff for my space marine chapter the Dimension Jumpers
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The chaos uprising had begun, The Ultramarines and the Blood Angels had deserted them, as had their primarchs, The son of the
emperor Scarclath and the son of Magnus,Ramone where prepering to leave Terra forever if their fathers failed to stop, Horus,
Rouboute and Sanginis from infesting the whole of Terra with the powers of Chaos.

Onboard "Stratos" the capital ship of Scarclath's fleet he was leading most of the untainted refuges when an explosion so loud that it shook the fabric
of the warp itself ... Scarclath knew his father had just been killed along with Magnus.
Silence through out the refuge ships then he suddenly lost communications with ship 2
He Hammered at his controls he knew what had happend.. they had been killed too.

He then lost communications with all the refuge ships all he had left where his troop carryers.
Now he wasn't going to lose them. They Quickly shited into emergency warp travel by locking on to the "Stratos'." Energy signature and followed it through the now
Disrupted Warp..
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Keep on posting and watching on this thread to find out what happens next.

Note: I Allready know what happens

You spelt Dimension wrong.

EDIT: On another note you may well get ripped for this.
Check your spelling etc.

Rowboat wants to infect the world with chaos?
SANGUINUS of all people?

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The chaos uprising had begun, The Ultramarines and the Blood Ravens had deserted them, as had their primarchs, The son of the
emperor Scarclath and the son of Magnus,Ramone where prepering to leave Terra forever if their fathers failed to stop, Horus,
Roubute and Sanginis from infesting the whole of Terra with the powers of Chaos.

I had to read it three times...

So... this is like an alternate reality where the Emperor and Magnus had sons... Magnus isn't a traitor. Roboute and Sanguinus and horus are traitors... Sanguinus
named his legion Blood Ravens (hopefully a mistake) instead of Blood Angels. This would be awesome.
It would be great, if Scarclath and Ramone had trouble trusting the Primarchs of this reality.

As Scarclath emerged from the warp he checked if his carryers had made it.
They had.
Then he saw the feral world of vallhala the only world in the galaxy not yet tainted by Chaos. This was Thier new home
He was glad to see Ramone's ship had made it aswell.
"Land on this world it shall be the home of the soliders of the Fallen Imperium" Yelled Scarclath into the com.
As they landed they detected an SOS signal coming from the surface of the planet it was marine.
Could the tech ship have crash landed here.Possibly but he must find proof.

The "Stratos" and the rest of the ships landed on the surface of Valhala.Scarclath and Ramone went out and left Captain Ginyu in charge
of the ships.

Ramone had never been in a battle. Yet he was the most adept Pyker ever he could sense the presance of another Marine besides him and Scarclath in the dense forests of Valhalla
He led the way from here as they ran he felt the power get clearer and clearer then he saw him.

It was his old friend Diadon he was their Techmarine they hadn't seen him since he had gone to Mars to train to be a master. Now he was standing on aforrgoten world more than ten lightyears from Mars...

"Hi Scarclath what brings you here.. "

Try to kill rowboat by unplugging him from his little box

Looking good so far

Who/What is rowboat
Edit: i get it now but he is not in a box he is a chaos primarch


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"Hi Scarclath what brings you here."
Diadon said as he laid eyes on the duo.
"The imperium is gone we are all that is left"

"Woah"
"Warp travel is now almost useless we arived here by chance alone.

"Do you have somthing to help us" asked Ramone

"Yes i do" replied Diadon his servo harrnes reaching into his bag and pulling out a belt.

"Dimension Tech,new design i have been working on this is small scale because i have no resources left to spareif you have any i could produce Dimension reactors for all your ships and you can have this belt as a thanks"

"What does it do" asked Scarclath

"It can jump through an undescoverd state called the rift and back here supposedly you could get to an alterrnete univere or as a crazy person might put it the other side of the light. "

"Ok come Back to the ships with us."

Intriguing. I like the change of the fluff from the stiff you originally told me.

May I contribute.
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The Empire is ruins, The Emperor has been slain and the Galaxy belongs to Chaos...

"Grand Lord Master Horus"
"How does the 'cleansing' go...?" The mighty tyrant sighed
"Rogal Dorn and the Imperial Fists have dealt with the last of the Iron Warriors. The death of Perturabo has been confirmed by several eye-witnessess."
"Good, good..."
"The Blood Angels have slaughtered the remaining Death Guard, Sanguinus personaly ripped Mortarion's head from his mortal body. The Blood Angels also managed to rescue an Astartes known as Typhus, a devotee of Nurgle, as well as over 100 of his followers.
"Excellent..."
"The Ultramarines have successfully hunted down the last of the Thousand Sons."
"Good, good... But what of Magnus?" Horus Sneered
"Well... there has been... er... a slight problem."
"WHAT! Does the Cyclops live?" roared the Daemon
"Rouboute is not sure. As the Hallowed Daemon plunged his blade into the Red Cyclops, Magnus vanished into... well... thin air."
"HE MUST BE FOUND!"
"The Ultramarines scoured the entire planet for the body of the Primarch but none was found. As a precaution they destroyed the planet"
"Good, good... Not even Magnus could survive an Extermiantus Bombardment." The Daemon Prince smiled and his anger wained

But how does this link up to my first post?

pie0107 wrote:But how does this link up to my first post?

He means general background i.e. different traitor primarchs etc

Ok now i get it

This story is great Pie0107 , love the alternate traitors so original

Thanks for your coments i don't have the next bit ready yet but it will be up soon

Yours
pie0107

Hey pie0107 great ideas, just check your spelling before you post but keep up the good work

Yours

Lord of Change