Way too many points in a
CCS for a 1500 point game. If you want a static orders
CCS give them a
LC and nothing else.
Storm Trooper Squad
Needs to be a 5-man squad with 2x melta (taking the deep strike accuracy upgrade). Flamers are a waste of
BS 4, and grenade launchers are garbage no matter what unit you put them on. Also, the power weapon is wasted points, you'll never get to use it.
Krak Grenades
HWS are there to shoot and will never be able to use grenades. Drop them and save the points.
Grenade Launcher
Heavy Bolter
These need to be a lascannon and melta/plasma.
GLs and
HBs are weak weapons that should never be used.
Platoon Standard
This is a waste of points. A
PCS dies automatically in combat so you'll never benefit from the bonus.
Special Weapon Squad (80pts)
3x Sniper Rifle
Sniper rifles are a waste of points, they always do less damage than melta/plasma. If you absolutely have to have snipers at least take ratlings, which are far more efficient at it.
Valkyrie
2 Hellstrike Missiles,
This needs to be a Vendetta. Hellstrike missiles are single-shot ordnance weapons, which means they're worthless. A Vendetta, on the other hand, is extremely powerful. And once you've dumped all the wasted points for your list you can bring a second Vendetta to carry the
PCS (now with 4x flamers).