Ok first all the paint looks pretty clean, clean blocking is like 80% of the battle. Buuuut, those photos.... Get yourself a clear flat space and a nice long sheet of flat black craft paper - bam insta seamless! The second issue with the photos is the harsh lighting. Natural daylight can give you wonky results, just have a nice single bright light source and don't use the flash on your camera itself....
I'm by no means a pro photographer, but I got this pic from a little set-up at the office:
Now, the only thing I can say (again, it's hard to tell because of the pics), your paint may be going on just a tad thick. The Knight is looking nice (dig the shoulder areas and the metals that are showing), just wondering if the base is complete. Also, the use of the
DA Banner/Skeleton is genius - just for me I like to "wash" my bone with a darker ink like Agrax, and only lightly drybrush the bone/white back in, but
YMMV.