Need work on your audio. Use an Audio interface with a pre amp tubed if you can to warm up the sound. You're also need to work on elecution, you can take elecution lessons.
You may want to put music in something like less Claypool doing the sienfeld intro. Something not clearly a song but decent musicality. And God help you if it's hip hop, pop, electronica,house, or any other forms of modern banal music.
Stick with symphony orchestra, rock, or funk or a combination.
From a sound engineer
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