Nitpick: Advance, not Advancement.
Nitpick: Corsair Prince has Baron listed as the name.
Princes: The various Shield rules should be on the datasheets for the Princes.
Baron:
The first time a friendly <COTERIE> I N FA N T RY unit within 6” of the Baron fails a Morale test ruding the Morale phase, you may reroll that Moral test using the Baron’s Leadership value.
What does that mean? Ruding?
Corsair Wasp Assault Walker: Sucks in close combat.
WS 3+ is fine, S5 is good, but AP0 D1 sucks, even with four attacks.
Eldritch Raiders is probably too good.
Units appear to be missing-Void Dreamers are referenced in the Warlord Traits table, but don't exist.
Dissonance Charge is way too good-especially since Plasma Grenades have
d6 shots. Even under the least powerful reading (it procs once no matter how many hits you get), with 3 shots hitting on a 3+, that's only about a 3% chance of failing to do
2d6 mortals for 1
CP.
Edit: Also, how did you make it look so nice?