Looks okay. I always think of the Fear librarians as a bit gimmicky. Against some armies and in some games they may practically win the game by themselves. Against Fearless armies the whole trick is useless.
I was all fired up to try one of them out when I first tried podding my army, but I didn’t have the model painted, and the army worked so reliably without him that I felt like he’d be overkill.
The Dread in the pod with
HF is great. Termies in a pod are great. If you get tired of Rending everything to death, a squad in a pod is the only time I would ever consider giving Termies a
HF. Being able to drop right next to an enemy squad and place the
HF model/s anywhere within 2” of the pod allows some righteous toasting of the enemy. Very nice against 4+ or 5+ save armies in cover.
I’d give every
Tac squad a vet with Fist or
LC, and might consider bumping them up to 10 models. You’d have to decide what to cut to do it. If it were me I’d get rid of at least one of the
ICs.