SIRSEAN wrote:
-HQ: Master of Sanctity, with thunder hammer and combat shield
comand squad: 4 marines with two melta guns, two bolters, and veteran with power fist.
First get rid of that combat shield, there is no need for it as the
MoS has a 4+ invuln save against everything
What is your plan to deliver this squad to the opponents lines? Also get Bolt Pistols and Close Combat Weapons on those other 2 marines
SIRSEAN wrote:
-elites: one dreadnought with lasscannon and drop pod
terminator squad with one assault cannon and furios charge
If you are taking a dreadnought in a Drop pod he needs and assault cannon and heavy flamer if you want the las cannon take him on foot with a missile launch and extra armor
Get the second assault cannon in the Terminator Squad and give them Tank Hunters instead of Furious Charge. They are already S8 in
HtH and will be striking last.
SIRSEAN wrote:
-troops: one tactical of 5 marines with true grid, furios charge, a rhino and veteran sergeant with power weapon.
another tactical of 5 marines with true grid, furios charge, a razorback and veteran sergeant with power weapon
Fists Fists Fists, If you are going to be taking vets make sure they have power fists. Also give those squads melta guns and take the virture that gives them bolt pistols rather than Bolters this way they can shoot and assault and benefit from the Furious Charge.
SIRSEAN wrote:
-fast: assault squad of 6 marines with furios charge and veteran sergeant with power fist
Good but make them 8 man strong and get some flamers in there.
SIRSEAN wrote:
-heavy: 5 devastators with sergeant, 2 missile launchers, heavy bolter and plasma cannon.
First this unit is to small you need it to be at at least 8 man if you are taking 4 heavy weapons. Remember that you will only be shooting at a single unit each turn and you should make all your shots count. With that said take the squad as an 8 man with 4 missile launchers.
SIRSEAN wrote:
what do you think?
It looks like you scrapped this list together using what models you have on hand rather than what you could potentially buy. If that is the case than this is a decent list but nothing that will go on to win tournaments. try a few of my suggestions and your game play will be much smoother and you will be wining more games.