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I have created a back story for one of the leaders of my army. He's called Brother Kage. And it goes like this:

"Serj, get yourself together, of course there will be losses, you've got to remember that may be you if you aren't careful!" Father Karcer's voice was booming with authority. The young Blood Claw nodded as Karcer continued. "These heretics live to fight, we will die and they will die, we just have to make sure they take more casualties."
"Sorry sir, he was a friend from my village."
"Well get over it, there's a larger matter at hand."

Karcer glanced around to examine the other blood claws. Three had already died, and those that were left didn't look like they had long to go either. All except for one. They called him Rage, and it was obvious why. He was swinging and shooting without even glancing at his target but he hit every single time, and he moved so quick that their shots and attacks just bounced off his armour as his axe cleaved them into bits. He was grinning dangerously, revealing his wolfish fangs. He had obviously came close to submitting to the Wulfen as he looked extremely animal like. A scream of pain to Karcer's right told him Serj had been killed by one of the heretics. An aspiring champion charged towards Rage firing his bolt pistol off as he did, but Rage was too fast, He spun on his heels as one of the bullets collided with his right shoulder pad taking out a small chunk, with a roar of anger Rage sliced off both of the champions arms with one swing before blowing a hole through its head with his bolt pistol. Rage quickly returned to killing the bezerkers around him.

Karcer called forth the powers of the Stormcaller once more and Kage started to move even faster, killing the heretics before they even knew he had attacked. The other blood claws started fighting faster as well, but they were still dying quickly. There were only seven left now.
"C'mon! Fight back. You call yourselves warriors of the Space Wolves?" Karcer yelled "You can do better than this, fight with all of your strength. Cast out the traitors!"
In an instant the blood claws were tossed through the air as multiple explosions occured around them. As Karcer got his footing back he noticed in the distance a large figure charging along the battlefield. Daemonprince he thought. A loud roar to his left told him Rage was furious, and before he could hold the young blood claw back he was already half way to the Prince cleaving his path to it. The bezerkers were caught off guard as their entrails and limbs splattered across the ground in Rage's wake. He pointed out his bolt pistol and let loose on the Prince. The prince roared in pain as one shot liquified his left eye, and with one swing of his daemon sword, sent Rage's right arm out into the midst of the battlefield. Unphased, Rage leapt onto the Prince's chest cleaving and slicing vigorously, ripping chunks out with his mouth aswell. The Prince, startled by the tenacity of the warrior, lost his footing and started to fall back. Rage took advantage of this and opened a large hole in the front of it's neck with his axe. The Prince roared in pain and lunged at Rage with his daemonsword using his last ounce of strength before dying, but Rage had anticipated this movement and struck the sword destroying it. The daemonsoul within erupted from the broken blade and sent Rage hurtling through the air.

Rage collided with a bezerker, knocking him over. He frantically attempted to get back up and fight but a blow to the head from the handle of a khornate chain axe sent him back onto the ground. His focus was blurring in and out when all of a sudden a bezerker head unexpectedly exploded, and before the bezerkers around him knew what was happening Karcer was striking them down left and right in a blur of attacks.
"What is your name boy?" He asked the Blood Claw.
"Kage...Sir...but...the...others...call...me...Rage." Kage managed to splutter.
"Well boy, you did good" He grabbed Kage and created a psychic gate through the warp before pushing him through it into darkness.

Kage awoke in a chamber somewhere within the Fang. All around him Iron Priests were fixing him. He noticed somewhere on the far side of the chamber they were making a new arm. This is where Karcer's Gate must have sent him, he wondered briefly if it was a power he had learnt during his time in the Eye of Terror. It must have been, that and his knowledge of the forces of Chaos, things caused in the Warp were complicated, and confused even those of higher status than he. Rage drifted back into the darkness as a Helmet was encased around his head.
"Rest young Blood Claw. You have taken many wounds that should have killed you. You will be honoured for your bravery and tenacity, but now is a time to rest, and to heal your wounds...." The rest of the Iron Priest's words were cut off as he went to sleep.

I'm still making Karcer's. And if you can see any mistakes (or ways to make the story better) please tell me.

Sounds good, an exciting story, although I have some gripes with a bloodclaw overcomming a deaemon prince... For the rest, cant wait for Karcer's story .
keep up the good work!