The bloody flesh look you've got going is sweet. I agree that it needs to lighten up a bit, so here are some suggestions:
More pink. Rarely will you ever hear me say that on these boards, but I think it's true here. Bring up the pink on the highlight edges, maybe follow over it with a nice red wash like it's raw meat with blood on it, then touch it again with another lighter coat of pink. Aim to increase the overall contrast of the meat areas with the deep crimson left for the deepest recesses. Maybe try adding some veins too.
Also, could you shoot another couple of photos with more even lighting? The spotlight you've got is great, but the heavy shadows make it hard to truly see the paint job.
Great work and good luck!
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