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(On the rock of blood)

As I look at the land below me, I see death and blood of a scale that is undreamable. Bodies of chaos worshippers, of chaos marines, and of my fallen brothers fill the land with the color of red. I take a smell of the wind that is blowing near the rock that I'm standing on and its filled with the copper taste of human blood, the rare holy blood of my brothers, and the tainted blood of the chaos lovers. I push back the dark feeling of doom and death as I look towards the north of my postion. A huge horde of chaos cultists, daemons, and chaos space marines march under one banner, that of the dread lord Oni-Ryo, a old foe that I have fought with many times before. As I watch the coming horde, my fellow brothers come at my side as I ready myself for the coming battle.

"My lord, it is almost time..." said a young space marine named Ryu, the helmet under his arms showing me his young and innocent face of a boy still not yet blooded his hands in the glory of battle. I chuckle a bit as I nod to the young space marine.

"Yes lad, it is time for the Yami and the God Emperor to be proud of us" I answered him, I then turn to the army of 6 squads of Tactical marines with their bolters ready to fire at the horde of chaos, 6 squads of Assault marines readying their bolt pistols and turning on their chainswords, a Librarian named Kaze-no his eyes cloudy and filled with hate of the chaos scum, and a mighty land raider with its hurricane bolters aiming at the coming horde of chaos whoresons. I smile and I yell out a battle cry

"For the emperor!! For Sanguinius!!!! For the Kami!!!!' I roared, my bare fangs showing as I yell out the mighty battle cry. My army of brothers behind me yell the same cry and We start the attack...we are one sword, one mind, and with that we are truly angels of death.

(Info on Kensei Legion)

Kensei Legion are one of the successors chapters of the Blood Angels, sharing a few things in common with their older brothers but here is a few facts that make them different then others

1. Religion and Location

Like any other imperial warrior in the blood angels, they worrship the emperor and Sanguinius but they have a few things added thanks to their ties to their eastern tradtions that make them unique. Because of their location of being in the Nippon Star Sector in Ultima Segmentum, they are not very near powerful impeiral tradtions that weight down the tradtions of the Nippon Star Sector like that the sector is ruled by a emperor ruling in the name of the God Emperor himself. It is believed that all emperors blood lines come from the god emperor himself but that is yet to be knowed.

Most believe that the emperor is the great king of the Yami, spirits of the dead and of all things in the galaxy. They believe that all the dead go to the great spirit courts of the kami and they are either choosen to become Kami or to wait in the great mist till the end times.

2.Honor and Sword skill

Honor is priced above all things in the heart of a Kensei Legion marine, it is his duty to the kami, the emperor, and his chapter to full fill the mission of mankind destiny. If a marine dishonour his squad, chapter, or Beilefs he is giving a chance to redeem himself by killing himself with his own sword by stabbing his belly in a patten that helps block the space marines healing powers and then a fellow marine then cuts the dishonored marine's head off to finally kill him.

It is a knowed fact that Kensei Legion marines are some of the best swordsmen in the galaxy, only the Dark Angels and other chapters can come even with them. It is tradtion that all marines have a sword at their side at all times so its not uncommon to see all marines fighting in a campaign agaisnt the enemies of mankind.

Commet please! I like to hear what you guys think!

The first post has some problems with tense.

The second post is a bit wordy and irrelevant. You don't explain in the slightest what they have in common with their parent chapter. Describing them as having 'eastern tradtions' [sic] has no meaning in context, and the rest is pretty trite too.

Arctik_Firangi wrote:

The first post has some problems with tense.

The second post is a bit wordy and irrelevant. You don't explain in the slightest what they have in common with their parent chapter. Describing them as having 'eastern tradtions' [sic] has no meaning in context, and the rest is pretty trite too.

Hmmm thank you for you coment I will fix up these post as soon as possiable!

Fail.

Simply Fail.