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Name: Confederation of Chaos
Members:
Shrieking Skulls Warband

Children of the Machine God

Oracles of Wisdom

Reapers of Nurgle

Blood Crusaders

Gene Seed stock: Mixed
Chaos God Worship: Undivided
Leader: Slaaneshi Daemon Prince Valaxxx
Combat Doctrine: Mixed
Homeworld: Unknown possibly in the eye of terror

Part 1: About the Confederates

The confederation of chaos is large band of smaller chaos warbands that banded together in order to the further each others goals & cause as much havoc & chaos as possible to the enemies of chaos, Each warband having part to play into order to keep this warmachine going lead by the daemon prince valaxxx the patterns of their attacks are bizarre & very unpredictable the goal of their attacks varies from world to world.

Part 2: The Members:

1. Shrieking Skulls


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Role: heavy Fire Support
Leader: Daemon Prince Valaxxx
Chaos God Worship: Slaanesh
Strength:
600 Noise Marines which are divived into squads of 10 -20 each squad having at least 1 soundblaster at their disposal
500 havocs which are divived into squads of 20-30 each each squad having access to auto cannons, lascanonn & melta cannons
150 rhinos to ferry the suqds around to appriopriate firing positions

2. Children of the Machine God


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Role: Cybernetics & vehicle deployment ,maintanace,construction as well as maintaining the space fleet
Leader: Crazed Tech Marine Marcus
Chaos God worship: Dark mechanicus
Strength:
50 lesser techmarines
500 crazed tech priests
10,000 servitors
50 predators
30 whirlwinds
10 landraiders
40 captured leman russes
30 captured basilisks
2 warhound titans
400 rhinos

Oracles of Wisdom


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Role: Psyker support,summoning daemons
Chaos god Worship: Tzeentch
Leader: Pracrusticus the Wise
Strength:
5 sorcerers
50 rogue pskers:
1200 rubric marines
unknown number of tzeentch daemons (depending on the type of summoning)

Reapers of Nurgle


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Role: Toxin Warfare, Mainline troopers
Chaos God Worship: Nurgle
Leader:Arkon The Immortal
Strength:
300 plague marines
550 tactical marines dedicated to nurgle
200 terminators
5000 nurgle cultitst



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Role: Shock troops,Melee Warfare
Chaos God Worship: Khorne
Leader: Fertris The bloody
Strength:
500 Khorne beserkers
400 Chaos Raptors
50 chaos assualt terminators
10 skull chapions
15 chosen terminators

to be continued..

Looks good. Though the skulls have a few too many rhinos...

toned it down by 50

Fair enough.

This definitely seems better. Looking forward to more stuff. Also, I'm wondering if the Warbands ever have infighting considering there are guys from lots of different religions and backgrounds.

That might be something to consider...

yeah it will every now & again valaxxx will have to beat down any smart arse back in line

Humble Beginings part 1:

Valaxxx was created on the planet of steel everything from the organs to the muscles were painstakingly created & inplanted into the lifeless husk it took many weeks of bio engineering surgery to even get him to the stage where he was fit enough to have a soul which was plucked from the warp with the help of sorcerors & bound to the body data on survival techniques, weapon handling & other important information was uploaded into his brain, the process was extermely painful once he gained his conciusness due to his skin being sewn into his muscles once completed however he passed the harsh the inspection of the cruel overseers who regard 99% of their creations as failures.

He was knocked out & thrown into a thunderhawk with out any weapons or armour taken to the desert world of Amazar primarly used as the iron warriors initiation planet where the only task was survival everyone was out to kill each other & only the strongest & hardiest made it to the thunderhawks that land every few decades to pick up new recruits, The thunderhawk that was carrying valaxxx entered the atmosphere of the planet when they got low enough the rear hatch opened & valaxxx was pushed out of the thunderhawk. He landed on the ground with such force that it would kill lesser men but valaxxx was no ordinary person & this is where his journey begins....

Note:due to a lack of time i havent been able to update this much but i promise i'll make further updates more frequently

Something that I think would improve it: full stops. Makes it easier to read if you have a little break every once in a while

humble beginnings part 2:

Valaxxx awoke a few hours later just as another marine was searching him for anything useful, just as he about to turn away valaxxx struck out catching the scavenger off guard.
pushing the person to the ground valaxxx realized that this was another would be marine he dodged the few meaty punches he threw at him and struck back with a punch of his own landing straight on the jaw, the scavenger stumbled back nursing his jaw with his hand, snarling the scavenger flew into a beserk rage throwing punches in every direction hoping to score but Valaxxx easily dodged them once more & managed to get the scavenger in a choke hold, struggling for air the scavenger was already too tired from the punching to break free. Valaxxx squeezed tighter & tighter until the scavenger feel on his knees & the last vestiges of air were gone and collapsed on the ground dead.

Valaxxx flipped over the body so he could take a look at his would be killer, it was obvious from the dried up lips, depleting muscle that this man was desperately after water or food after rummaging through his possessions he found some empty water canisters & empty rations taking the canisters valaxxx stumbled upon a small piece of paper detailing a route to what was marked as "safe house" taking the paper & canisters, he started walking to find this safe house to see if their was any supplies left.


Note: part 3 coming soon & thnx for the input

Note: due to unforeseen circumstances part 3 is arriving far sooner than i thought.

Part 3:
Valaxxx Followed the map dotted on the piece of paper to lead to the safe house fortunately for him, he encountered nothing on the way.
Valaxxx finally arrived at the safe house after a few hour of hours of trekking through dry bush & sand to find it was a cave with words "keep out" crudely painted their probably by someone else's blood he thought he found that the cave was relatively empty in terms of survival gear rubbish littered the cave & their was a piece of power armour that was missing its power pack with made it useless "at-least this will make a good home" Valaxxx said to himself he soon went on in search of food or water.

Every day was a struggle for survival for the next few decades Valaxxx searched far & wide across the desert landscape in search of food & water which were very hard to come by. already he had to kill more than 50 of his brother marines as everyone savagely fought for scraps of food & drops of water the only real noticeable sign of civilization on this planet was a large iron warriors fortress which shot at everything that moved even other marines that were dropped here as Valaxxx had witnessed countless times before.
However Valaxxx had also witnessed power armour clad individuals go up & into the fortress without a shot being fired he concluded that the initiation would be complete when the individual had assembled a full suit of power armour & thus allowed to walk in the fort.
So far he had a complete set but was missing a power pack to get it working he had gained a bolt pistol & an ordinary sword through his years of scavenging & fight for scraps though it was not great it was better than nothing however, which allowed him to stake claim to food & water by force & kill those who resisted however he had to conserve ammo for it was a very rare item on this world.

He was watching a bunch of idiots one day as it provided some mild entertainment who decided to team up together in order to take the fort by storm he counted 20 of them atleast armed with crudely fashioned Armour & weapons as they charged the gate of the fort the marines on guard duty opened fir with their heavy bolters & turrets cutting down the attackers in a hail of bolter fire but what really valaxxxs eye was the thunder hawk that swooped over him & then dropped 3 packages in the distance, Valaxxx got out of his cover & started to run for the packages..

This is interesting. I like Valxxx's origin as just a mash of organs and cybernetics sent out to war. My only complaint is that the writing style is sometimes repetitive, using the same words over and over, but that isn't too big. Keep on writing!

part 4:

Effortlessly running through the scratching bushes & heat to reach the package upon reaching he let out a short laugh for in the pile of supplies he could see the exhaust vent of a power pack, to his knowledge it looked like a more advanced version which the loyalist used grabbing hold of the exhaust vent he tugged the power pack out.
Just as he was about to leave with his prize several bolter rounds chipped him & impacted the power pack, using his instincts he hit the ground & crawled behind the nearest cover leaving the power pack behind, he peered his head to spot the attacker only for him to duck agian when bullets ricocheted off the rock he was hiding behind "THAT LOOT IS MINE!!! YOU HEAR MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" the voice came from the north of his direction, valaxxx peered his head out just slighty enough so he could not be seen he saw another dimwit who thought he could take from valaxxx and get a away with normally he would of shot the person for their insolence but this guy was different somehow he had gotten a hold of a heavy bolter, This was the first time valaxxx had fought another person armed with a ranged weapon he looked at his options if he retreated from this fight valaxxx was not only giving up a potentially functioning power pack but alot of fresh & precious supplies he decided it was too much to just give up who knows when they would drop another power pack.

He looked at the landscape an imperfect row of large rocks to the right & the thick bushland to the left, though the bushland provided much more cover he would have to protection should the attacker spot him the rocks on the other hand gave him little cover but precious protection against the bolter rounds slowly he crept from one rock to another ignoring the threats & mocking insults until valaxxx accidentally stepped on a dried out twig that obtained the attackers attention "haha there you are!!" he said as he began firing his heavy bolter the bullets destroyed most of the cover , valaxxx bolted to a particaly thick chunk of of cover when the firing suddenly stopped "Damnable thing why wont you fire!!!" the attacker repeatedly smacking the bolter with his fist & futilely pressing the trigger.

Valaxxx knew this was the only chance he was going to get & popped of cover running towards him with the bolter pistol blazing & landing several shots in the arms & legs as the attacker collapsed to the ground in pain Valaxxx wasted no time in chopping the head off, the blood spraying everywhere as the attacker gargled on his own blood.
Valaxxx sighed before taking the heavy bolter out of the attackers hands "stupid whelp" he said as hosteled it over his shoulder & walked over to was the loot drop taking the power pack as well he also took some cans of food & water to his cave he dumped everything on the ground & went to get a fire started for even though this planet is hot in day time it is deathly cold at night where he almost died one night learning that lesson well he always kept spare fire wood & lots & lots of tinder the fire also served to keep the nights predators away as well.

He grabbed two worn stones and scrapped them to together till a spark was lit to ignite the fire once he had a reasonable fire going & put some raw meat to cook, he walked over to his new loot and grabbed the heavy bolter dteremined to figure out why this thing jammed he was suprised to find the bolter rounds shoved in their & the heavy bolter poorly maintained & clean using some ripped cloth he first emptied the bolter & then cleaned out any bolter round residue to lessen the chance of jamming agian seeming to have nothing else to do valaxxx ate his cooked meat & kept the fire going while half of his brain went to sleep....