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Made in gb
Deadly Dark Eldar Warrior





Brittania

Prologue... Many years before it all happened

The churning ceased, replaced by the deafening silence. It was not the overwhelming presence of madness that pressed on his eardrums; it was the lack of such stimulation that threatened to tear him apart from the inside. Where there had once been sustenance in his wild screams there was now nothing but vast spaces, now vacant in his mind. There was no light and no sound, no touch and no feel, his whole body was debilitated to the complete degree.
All his few years of being alive were for nought, his place in the universe left open for the next animated corpse to fill it and further the beings of the gods into what was hoped to be a new age. He felt his consciousness slipping away, yet how could he? He was nothing but a dismembered spirit with no cadaver to hold on to, nothing to stop him slipping into whatever lay beyond, wherever he was now he was sure there was more to it, more places that he could not reach slipping like the life he could not entire latch onto. Slowly and painfully he was dragged into the gaping maw of whatever lay beneath him.

Hi guys

What you have hopefully just read is the beginning of a journey, a journey into the depths of my creativity hopefully somewhere that is far away, as to reach it's end would mean I have no ideas... and such an event is very far off i can assure you. Thus far there is still very much to tell that has already been written and even more to tell that has not yet been written and so much more than have even been conceived in my mind I suppose you want to know who I am...?
This i look at with some trepidation for revealing it so blatantly may cause some of the more age-prejudice readers to turn their noses up and boldly proclaim that such endeavours would be beyond the skills of someone like me, please don't think for one moment that I have help from a second party or anyone else, this is all my work and mine alone and the fact i am sixteen should not detract from the face at all. For those curious to prove my legitimacy I attained an A* in creative writing.
Upon reading what i just wrote it makes me seem quite full of myself and that is very far from the truth, this blogs purpose is not to showcase my work but rather ask for advice and aid where you think I may need it. So far there is about 40 pages of A4 completed and i have not yet scratched the surface of the grand plan for the inhabitants of Mithalskard and its surrounding areas.

Many thanks and greetings
Steve


Folow the blog properly on http://mithalskard.blogspot.com/

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thnx 
   
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