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Made in gb
Regular Dakkanaut







Because I'm an attenion whore and I value you're DAKKA-pinions, here's a repost of my new article/fluff piece. Am considering making this a treatment for the Black Library submission period as I think there's quite a bit of scope for exploring Ork kulture with something like this. Let me know what you think.

Removed for now as trying to submit to Black Library


Jump down a few posts for chapter 2.

This message was edited 4 times. Last update was at 2012/06/06 11:39:31


 
   
Made in gb
Barpharanges







This is an excellent start too a story, I really would like to see more of this.

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Made in au
Screaming Shining Spear




Australia

Wow, amazing.

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Waaagh! Warbiker



USA

Tis is a great story with a twist that could only happen in the crazy 41st millennium and I would love to see more.
   
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Steadfast Grey Hunter





Can't tell you. It's a secret...

Brain surgery!!!!Brilliant!!!

Don't grow up!!!

It's a TRAP!!! 
   
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Maniacal Gibbering Madboy



octarius sector squishin bugz

Wha... why it stop humie??

orkz are da best!!!
 
   
Made in ca
Ork Boy Hangin' off a Trukk







Oh my ... wait.... why did it end? :(

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Frenzied Berserker Terminator






Damnit, i was waiting for his face to get minced by the nob, nonetheless great story!

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http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/440996.page
 
   
Made in gb
Regular Dakkanaut







I have Chapter 2 on the way guys. Thanks for the comments so far.
   
Made in ca
Stormin' Stompa






Ottawa, ON

Only an ork would think to switch brains around.

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Jinking Ravenwing Land Speeder Pilot






Fantastic, would love to read more.

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Made in gb
Regular Dakkanaut







Sorry for the delay. Here's chapter 2:

Removed for now as trying to submit to Black Library.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/06/06 11:38:48


 
   
Made in gb
Waaagh! Warbiker





This is really an amazing story, please please write more now please I'll give you cookies?

Plus it's fairly credible that a GW marketing campaign for their biggest release would fit on one side of A4 - Flashman  
   
Made in us
Maniacal Gibbering Madboy



octarius sector squishin bugz

Humie me and my boyz want part 3, where is part 3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

orkz are da best!!!
 
   
Made in be
Fresh-Faced New User




Aw removed :(



 
   
Made in gb
Regular Dakkanaut







And then readded when I got no BL response . You can find it here with added chapters:

http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/488769.page
   
 
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