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Made in gb
Longtime Dakkanaut





England: Newcastle

Since most 40k is fairly violent and gory I wasn't sure; but what is/isn't acceptable to post on this forum? Do I have to say in the title roughly what sort of content might be alluded to? I'am currently writing a bit of fluff for my Dark Eldar army and don't personally think it diverges from the way Black Library stuff is presented; but like I said I wasn't sure.

Pretty much

-are you allowed to be explicit about violence? ie a marine shoots somebody in the head and his head explodes. Or should it be the marine shot the traitor and he went down?

-should I avoid any degree of sadism and the like on the part of the villains/anti heroes? That is pretty much a characterization of Dark Eldar, or should this be fairly tame/illusive?

-Is it okay to insinuate or use innuendo with regards sex/sexual desire without actually ever describing the deed? Or is any allusion to it unnacceptable?

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/03/30 16:26:14



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Violence is probably fine.
Everything else. Put a NSFW spoiler on it and don' get too graphic and it should be fine...

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Made in gb
Longtime Dakkanaut





England: Newcastle

purplefood wrote:Violence is probably fine.
Everything else. Put a NSFW spoiler on it and don' get too graphic and it should be fine...


Fair enough. Still not sure bout doing it and going to edit it some more when I get time. I figured some of the executions were unneccesarily violent for the 'heroine' anyway; detracts from you actually liking the lass somewhat.

one of them (explicit)
Spoiler:
I had her wrap her agoniser around a Dracon's face and then tighten it until the weapon burned through her eyes; with the boiled remains ouzing out
pretty gross and unneccesary. Simple severed hand and decapitation probably better to emphasise her skill with a blade.

Is it normally a good idea to put this stuff up in short sections anyway for readability?

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2012/03/30 18:09:43



Starting Sons of Horus Legion

Starting Daughters of Khaine

2000pts Sisters of Silence

4000pts Fists Legion
Sylvaneth A forest
III Legion 5000pts
XIII Legion 9000pts
Hive Fleet Khadrim 5000pts
Kabal of the Torn Lotus .4000pts
Coalition of neo Sacea 5000pts



 
   
Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Short sections?
Do you mean lots of paragraphs or lots of separate posts?
Not really that bad so you should be fine...
If you're still unsure whack a NSFW tag on it...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in gb
Longtime Dakkanaut





England: Newcastle

purplefood wrote:Short sections?
Do you mean lots of paragraphs or lots of separate posts?
Not really that bad so you should be fine...
If you're still unsure whack a NSFW tag on it...


Well I've done a draft section of ten pages that amounts to a chapter. If I post that now it'll save me putting the whole lot on in bulk. So I would post say Helstai part 1 and when I do the next could do a part two. Just for ease of reading if nothing else.

Oh thats fine? Okay then. Also the heroines daughter was captured by a rival Archon and after being rescued discovers that her daughter was raped by the Archon. Hence they both want bloody vengence on said Archon among other more typical DE reasons. Is that an okay plot point, or is that too iffy?

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2012/03/30 20:35:54



Starting Sons of Horus Legion

Starting Daughters of Khaine

2000pts Sisters of Silence

4000pts Fists Legion
Sylvaneth A forest
III Legion 5000pts
XIII Legion 9000pts
Hive Fleet Khadrim 5000pts
Kabal of the Torn Lotus .4000pts
Coalition of neo Sacea 5000pts



 
   
Made in gb
Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Yeah just do it in separate posts in a thread.
Though make sure you space it properly so people can read it

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
 
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